View Full Version : Gimmie The Mic

08-07-2005, 10:06 PM
Archetect scribble new bibles with bloody names/
giving niggas holy highs as Jehovah in the form of cocaine/
murderous aim from pentagon tops snipe hearts/
fuck around on the mic and i get in that ass like skid marks/
knowledge junkie my vein bust OD'd of education/
take wack niggas to the block they break like concentration/
orchestras play my killahs them on 1000 violins/
cry till i drown inside of my own skin/
Dance to the poisoness beat straight from eternities drum/
athiest pray to God Statues to murder my tongue/
biological warfare the size of claritin pill with nuclear force/
blind fold myself in a full room and just buck loaded gats
allergic to remorse/
i'll make the ground colaspe through kinetic contact/
tombs diamond encrypted, Caesar steez organic crack/
nuns revert to addicts watch the planet a top Taj Mahal/
reach the heaven contained in the the crystalized skull/
shoot acid out my nostral to impair ya sight/
if u can't rock it right nigga gimmie the mic/

08-08-2005, 10:38 AM
...this is interesting... i like parts of it much, some of it was kind of basic... i like the whole thing, i guess, i just think that the skidmarks line and lines of that nature are over used and stupid, just my opinion... i like the flow, it was well, i like the claritin pill line... the ceasar line was images crushed... keep scripting man, and dropping on the site and reply some peeps so they reply to you and other folks...

08-08-2005, 12:07 PM
yeah, good post, like the metaphors you're using

08-08-2005, 02:27 PM
thx for the feed back