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TeknicelStylez
12-31-2007, 03:23 AM
Meditate till my mind is in line with the orbit
Think in time past historic no life flourished
No Horus, sun to keep the flowers nourished
Nothing sound was yet to hear its first chorus

Extinction on a mental surface exerpt this
When money was worthless there was no churches
Zilch to purchase before mans first purpose
Before Rome, Alexander the Great and Xerxes

Gaze that far before light blazed the stars
In Depth Satelites Passed the first Phase of mars
AID's or SARS when there was no plagues at large
Machines, Henry Ford and the age of cars
Jimi Hendrix played Guitar and raised the par
Fade the char Juke boxes arcade in Bars

Before civilization first invented weapons
Gang members started representing different sections
Paid schools investing professing lessons
A Politicians wins and collects elections
Cheats prior deals and steals in the second
Invented syringes Diseases feel injected

Before we went to war with Japan and Vietnam
and affected Asia severely with two bombs
The Youth's Gone Testin Nukes in the YUKON
Goverment schemes were deemed induced cons

Before mankind co existed with the fire
No Electricity ever drifted through a wire
Life forms in egypt got lifted in the spires
The falling star was restricted in his ires

Imagine that before we even had a habitat
Snake Misleading in eden eve and adams paths
Fathom past life without distractions trap
What you believe in after that happened fact

TeknicelStylez
01-02-2008, 12:46 PM
lol I can't even get not one comment?

TeknicelStylez
01-04-2008, 06:44 AM
wow I can't believe nobody left me one comment...

BornPower
01-04-2008, 12:12 PM
this sounds like u spent the day at church, smoked, then wrote. different from ur other shit, but still ^O^

OTB
01-04-2008, 03:37 PM
nice work Tek-

TeknicelStylez
01-04-2008, 04:28 PM
Good looking, na no church involved, just deep thought.

Sleep Sinatra
01-04-2008, 06:31 PM
word nice imagery, good shit props

noel411
01-07-2008, 06:18 PM
Great piece Tek. Haven’t seen you pen anything like that before. Very impressed with how you pulled it off. There’s a lot in there. No huge detail on anything but a great summary of your observations on things. I really enjoyed that one. Keep pennin’ the venom.

J.T.S.
01-08-2008, 01:34 PM
mailto:comm-531734057@craigslist.org?subject=Does%20anyone%20K now

Extinction on a mental surface exerpt this
When money was worthless there was no churches
Zilch to purchase before mans first purpose
Before Rome, Alexander the Great and Xerxes

Gaze that far before light blazed the stars
In Depth Satelites Passed the first Phase of mars
AID's or SARS when there was no plagues at large
Machines, Henry Ford and the age of cars
Jimi Hendrix played Guitar and raised the par
Fade the char Juke boxes arcade in Bars

Before civilization first invented weapons
Gang members started representing different sections
Paid schools investing professing lessons
A Politicians wins and collects elections
Cheats prior deals and steals in the second
Invented syringes Diseases feel injected

Before we went to war with Japan and Vietnam
and affected Asia severely with two bombs
The Youth's Gone Testin Nukes in the YUKON
Goverment schemes were deemed induced cons

Before mankind co existed with the fire
No Electricity ever drifted through a wire
Life forms in egypt got lifted in the spires
The falling star was restricted in his ires

Imagine that before we even had a habitat
Snake Misleading in eden eve and adams paths
Fathom past life without distractions trap
What you believe in after that happened fact


Man youv'e advanced bro, whew that was a breath of fresh air reading that! I like it the best iv'e read from you!

ElusiveFugitive
01-16-2008, 02:59 AM
'Sup Tek! Havent been in the temple for a looong minute...I'm really impressed on this one, you be droppin' somethin' heartfelt no doubt

Like others have already said you've stepped up your skills on this - Props due

Keep the ink flowin'
Elusive