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Mr SimplistiC
08-09-2005, 09:07 AM
now im just having fun
close my eyes - touch the sun
cool as the clouds
floating killer sounds
aztecs in the background of the ballroom
spilling blood on the dancefloor - sliding upto the prettiest girl

recite ancient retro verse
the sounds that revolve around the earth
magnetic birth - positive to the powerful -
negative to the nacent -
indecent descent -

shoplifters will be prostituted

and no-one will be prosecuted - danger - slamming swords - you may be executed

cute girl - you may be prostituted - play game like pro = whats your name?

martyr
08-09-2005, 09:18 AM
... very simple but its nice, i like it... descriptions are good, work on the flow a little, but overall, nice... keep writing...