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One and Only
01-05-2008, 12:50 PM
I wrote these real quick I'm curious what you guys think

Cause giving up a dream is giving up hope
and giving up hope is giving up your soul
so never let go cause what the devil stole
was more precious then gold and truth be be told but
in a world where none of this seems to matter
we just beat eachother off to climb the ladder
no helping fellow man out when he's in a jam
cuttin the middle man out just to save a gram
compared to what you have in your pocket
watch the mystery unfold as I unlock it
six sides of the square folded down flat
to represent the addition of new
plateua we climb to reach the top of the map
here is where I bare my namesake
fore the guardians of heaven
have left the underworld barren
in a vast rebellion of the structured architecht
I'm here to restore order to the proper dialect
and only those I deem worthy of the sect
will ascend to the new level of enviroment


Sittin round all day tryin to kick knowledge
but your a little boy who just acts like he knows shit
Note why you think you gon be so big
you ain't been on your grind for long as some of the most talented
I'm sick of these people hating stop debating I'm the greatest
and you know it you ain't never heard nobody like C Note The Poet
I accept no less than success
if I don't blow up then I'm a failure at best
infact I'm something even worser
an indescribable word that you never heard of
I'm monster in the booth I spit with desire
read my sign it announces mic crusher for hire
battle me and try to make a liar out of me
but the next thing you see is a catastrophe
steppin to me getting dizzy eyes start to bleed
it's like the tommyknockers the way you be losing them teeth
picture esque vision of microphone mastery
arresting me for the assault and battery
in the lab everyday doing audiotopsys
I'm too complex you don't know where to begin to copy
but if you try I can tell you when to cut it off
between a knife in your rib cage and a punch to your jaw
I rip out your heart and admire it while it's still beating
then I squeeze the juice out and put it on ice to freeze it
my collection keeps on growing everytime a little poet
thinks they can beat me but they blow it
so my advice to you is don't even show up
this just comes to easy excuse me
tellin me I ain't put in my time
It's not my fault your wack and that's why your forever on ya grind
signed sealed deliver my letter of execution
I enslaved so many mics I'm still paying for retributions
I leave barren wastelands of destitution
My throats a smokestack and my voice is the pollution
Flavoring over the pains of the labor days
too many to count but it made me who I am today
Savoring every moment when my hearts in a tussle
cause when that happens my brain starts to bussle
and off comes a bus load of ideas that come to
classics that I drafted then crafted
and like David Blaine turned into magic
spectacular the way my mind connects
then my rhymes connect to form supreme dialect
something you can't understand without seeking the wisdom
but the average man will not embark on that task so I feed em
over rhythm I give em the best way to lead em with my teachings
extend my hand to each and every fan trying to reach em
and when I breach there walls there on the way to freedom

Lost Sun
01-06-2008, 12:05 AM
in a world where none of this seems to matter
we just beat eachother off to climb the ladder
no helping fellow man out when he's in a jam
cuttin the middle man out just to save a gram
compared to what you have in your pocket
watch the mystery unfold as I unlock it
six sides of the square folded down flat
to represent the addition of new
plateua we climb to reach the top of the map

^^^MY FAVORITE PART RIGHT HERE FAM....WHOLE SEQUENCE WAS DOPE....SIMPLE BUT IT HITS HOME AND LEAVES A LASTING IMPRESSION....

NICE

One and Only
01-06-2008, 01:56 PM
in a world where none of this seems to matter
we just beat eachother off to climb the ladder
no helping fellow man out when he's in a jam
cuttin the middle man out just to save a gram
compared to what you have in your pocket
watch the mystery unfold as I unlock it
six sides of the square folded down flat
to represent the addition of new
plateua we climb to reach the top of the map

^^^MY FAVORITE PART RIGHT HERE FAM....WHOLE SEQUENCE WAS DOPE....SIMPLE BUT IT HITS HOME AND LEAVES A LASTING IMPRESSION....

NICE

Thanks for the response man I appreciate it.