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SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
01-12-2008, 03:04 AM
so i wrote this against cha will
and made it willingly outta
spirituality killing everything around me/
don't ask for my hand,i'm sorry i'm shaking you off
like another spell of whooping cough/
i'm just in another world
killing everything around me/
i might seem a little detached lately
it's just sadly omnipotent
that i had already written it/
so i seclude myself from you and ya people
before you began to illude too it/
i grew from the concrete to defeat the streets
when you met me i broke outta my shell/
so even if i had no emotion
i thought you were smooth as lotion/
sweet as a bath and body shop
when that body rocked, my body stopped/
i thought i died and came back to heaven
began kissing an angel, knowing you weren't single
so i thought it was bittersweet poetry, you noticed me/

it's bittersweet poetry
when i wrote this....
and you didn't notice
it's bittersweet poetry
you noticed me....

Dr Sleepwalker
01-13-2008, 08:59 AM
feelin' it, i like the deepness and felt your point of view..

glad I caught this one, i can feel what ya sayin'

pea2e

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
01-13-2008, 01:56 PM
feelin' it, i like the deepness and felt your point of view..

glad I caught this one, i can feel what ya sayin'

pea2e

trust good look

BornPower
01-13-2008, 03:42 PM
feelin it. been on both sides of this one...

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
01-14-2008, 01:44 PM
good look everybody 4 the props

J.T.S.
01-15-2008, 01:18 PM
Real emotion got me stunting to one step by killah priest know.

J.T.S.
01-15-2008, 05:14 PM
I find that that the illest emcee's were poets pac, common, killah priest.
shit even krs-one, and masta killa his style definitely is poetic.

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
01-16-2008, 12:40 AM
I find that that the illest emcee's were poets pac, common, killah priest.
shit even krs-one, and masta killa his style definitely is poetic.

oh yea

J.T.S.
01-16-2008, 12:07 PM
this one though kinda remind me of a breakup, or maybe like a seperation, or divorce.

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
01-17-2008, 01:24 AM
this one though kinda remind me of a breakup, or maybe like a seperation, or divorce.

yeah this was about me leaving my ex and also how the old saying goes "don't know what you til its gone"