View Full Version : the sequel

08-09-2005, 10:50 PM
(Masta Genius)
All words in the bible say that God will forgive and forget.
Yeah, well the only people who get forgiven are the ones with fear

(Masta Genius)
Memories of cheatin, lyin, plague me like a disease/
Burned in my brain can't throw em away with ease/
I try to go to church but the pastor won't let me in/
I feel guilt ridden.....plauged with sin/
My life aint soppose to be this way, when I was little...I wanted to be a celebrity/
Guess God let go and the Devil got a stranglehold and the best of me/
The bible always said that he would have tests for me/
When I hear church bells.....my heart stops beatin/
try an catch my breathe but the wind keeps relesin/
Dis aint rite, I was spose ta be a famous rap star and flirt with the stars/
Now Im gettin questioned and put behind metal bars/
The universe see's me as speck in the big blue/
My life a dried brick in the wall, nothing i can undo or redo/
Simple as that, rap is an outlet....simply put a way out/
From the riddles of life perplex my mind day in and day out/
I'm Cement dried on the sidewalk,psh time for a new layer/
My legs are so weak from wanderin fall in the position of prayer/
I hope someone can hear me up there in church when I pray and speak out/
say a prayer for me I don't just let my thoughts leak out/
So next time you look at me rollin in your cedes/
I'm on fire rollin with the infantry of Hades/

08-10-2005, 12:32 PM
fuck somebody say sumtin

Mr SimplistiC
08-10-2005, 03:13 PM

- lifes a curse + in the night we rehearse the blessing

Sicka than aidZ
08-10-2005, 04:57 PM
fuck somebody say sumtin
word up!

08-11-2005, 01:29 AM
thanks homies do me a favor vote for somebody in this battle i had with led mic really lopsided though just vote aight, PEACE

tha real masta genius

08-11-2005, 04:28 AM
Some nice ideas. no dis, but I miss the special in it. maintain your work!

08-11-2005, 10:42 AM
none taken, Its good to have constructive criticism plus its not really suppose to be special thanx homie

08-12-2005, 01:34 AM
It flowed well, had a lot of questions there, makes the reader think that the writer is confused with some thoughts , so by releasing them in verse it makes sense.

PS: Keep posting

Grim Reapa
08-12-2005, 02:10 AM
thanks for that man peace