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Mr SimplistiC
08-10-2005, 11:23 AM
the usual - suspicious business
vizual - see you through the tip of a cruise missile
blowing rhymes in kid style since i was 5
kept everything around me real and alive

now if i chose to take myself to the animated world
i know i will survive

the path of the devils is to make their own minds
now decide
and maybe only patience will let you into another life time

GuardianOne
08-11-2005, 01:07 AM
I don't know, maybe i need to see more of your verses. But for such a short verse it was simple but had its own motive.

Peace
PS: Keep posting