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Sun Tzu, Tha Soul Controllah
08-11-2005, 01:48 PM
my fam Kell16 wanted me to do a text with him.......I don't usually do this, because I'd rather do audio, but here's a change for once....this is also a audio song (called "Theory of Life"), but that version doesn't include him (i wish it did):


Sun Tzu (verse 1):
yo, Understand the mental mindstate/
of a nigga who lives where the crimerate/
inflates on a daily basis/ seen many razor blades touch faces/
contact the god/ build with the skill of the lotus clan
from the west side of "bodymore, japan"/ day after day we learn
more than most can/ walk my blocks with a thought & a plan/
base my daily living on the doctrine of the koran/ "see thru false images
and understand the truth"/ that's my life motto restated for physical proof/ because most deny the wisdom i've obtained in my youth/
but it's not hard to decipher the truth from the untruth/ especially in this neighborhood/ where things are flawed/ you rebuild destroyed temples/
people smile in awe/ until snake niggas destroy it again/ stepple & all/
thus begins the downfall......

Kell16 (verse 2)
4 a.m, i awake with the storm haunting my face
lighting stings with blue rings as my bed shakes like dope feinds
i listen and wait, for the thought of daybreak brings much hate
to my brain as i awake, knowing the bull shit i have to face
who's the lucky corpse on whom i'll show no remose on
suicide, suicide, will i die. and if i am killed, will angels revive
my life as i lay in this bed, motionless, thinkin bout what lies ahead
as i'm stuck with dumb fucks for guardians, i turn on some old brand nubian
and as sadat raps i think gats and gun claps are just a foolish act
from those who inpose to kill to bring that white to they nose
and to think i sell the shit, never seeing how far it goes
the first nigga who talks to me, i'll see if my fist can hold the blood in his nose
and to think i go to this bitch ass place to learn, never seeing how far it goes
turn the changer to disk three, eminem talkin bout kim, this brings a smurk to me
he hates his bitch as much as i hate my fuckin parents, that's why i pust key after key so i'll have one up on them and when i am exposed, only a note on my bed post will be what's left of me understand, this mental hell in these four corners might get the best of me

Sun Tzu, Tha Soul Controllah
08-11-2005, 01:50 PM
i feel tho like my flow cannot be stated thru text

kell16
08-11-2005, 01:52 PM
my fam Kell16 wanted me to do a text with him.......I don't usually do this, because I'd rather do audio, but here's a change for once....this is also a audio song (called "Theory of Life"), but that version doesn't include him (i wish it did):


Sun Tzu (verse 1):
yo, Understand the mental mindstate/
of a nigga who lives where the crimerate/
inflates on a daily basis/ seen many razor blades touch faces/
contact the god/ build with the skill of the lotus clan
from the west side of "bodymore, japan"/ day after day we learn
more than most can/ walk my blocks with a thought & a plan/
base my daily living on the doctrine of the koran/ "see thru false images
and understand the truth"/ that's my life motto restated for physical proof/ because most deny the wisdom i've obtained in my youth/
but it's not hard to decipher the truth from the untruth/ especially in this neighborhood/ where things are flawed/ you rebuild destroyed temples/
people smile in awe/ until snake niggas destroy it again/ stepple & all/
thus begins the downfall......

Kell16 (verse 2)
4 a.m, i awake with the storm haunting my face
lighting stings with blue rings as my bed shakes like dope feinds
i listen and wait, for the thought of daybreak brings much hate
to my brain as i awake, knowing the bull shit i have to face
who's the lucky corpse on whom i'll show no remose on
suicide, suicide, will i die. and if i am killed, will angels revive
my life as i lay in this bed, motionless, thinkin bout what lies ahead
as i'm stuck with dumb fucks for guardians, i turn on some old brand nubian
and as sadat raps i think gats and gun claps are just a foolish act
from those who inpose to kill to bring that white to they nose
and to think i sell the shit, never seeing how far it goes
the first nigga who talks to me, i'll see if my fist can hold the blood in his nose
and to think i go to this bitch ass place to learn, never seeing how far it goes
turn the changer to disk three, eminem talkin bout kim, this brings a smurk to me
he hates his bitch as much as i hate my fuckin parents, that's why i pust key after key so i'll have one up on them and when i am exposed, only a note on my bed post will be what's left of me understand, this mental hell in these four corners might get the best of me
this is also a audio song (called "Theory of Life"), but that version doesn't include him (i wish it did):


shit

me too fam

kell16
08-11-2005, 01:55 PM
space out the end lines sun if you can, it looks like you made them run together

i don't really care and you really don't have to change shit

i was just stating something you might have missed

Dae Ja Nae
08-11-2005, 06:04 PM
Nice job you two. Sun, I remember how you flow :) ... it's always good to see my boy Kell come through and bless the Temple.

Peace and Props to you both