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Killer Falcon
08-11-2005, 09:28 PM
just a quick verse i posted in the dojo


animal rap i revert to basic instincts
locked in rage i slay the lyrical misfits
left disfigured scarred and crippled
but still thinkin your hard like porn stars nipples
at night i stalk and build a crop circle
and leave a mark in the form of a colossal turtle
symbolism of flows my form can float in
absorbed you drowned in the blood of romans
the ruthless emceein super-human
cat of nine tails i lash them all in unison
evolution couldnt adapt to me
my writing hand surpasses mach speed
i banish wack emcees from the planet
for spitting weak shit like an overdose of laxatives
falcon writes inside the ganga mist
in a shrine within seven rings of candle sticks

peace

GuardianOne
08-12-2005, 01:49 AM
It was raw but direct. Nice verse and good flow.

Peace

Dae Ja Nae
08-12-2005, 01:58 AM
short, but raw ... dope shit

Peace

SurreaL
08-12-2005, 03:05 AM
Before I read the comment's of the other's, I thought to myself " that shit was raw ", peace man, like they say, short but sweet, keep choppin.

Killer Falcon
08-12-2005, 05:19 PM
thanks for the feedback everyone

peace

002
08-13-2005, 08:43 AM
at night i stalk and build a crop circle
and leave a mark in the form of a colossal turtle



evolution couldnt adapt to me
my writing hand surpasses mach speed


pure illness. peace, bro