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Robert
08-12-2005, 02:10 AM
10 to 22 bars, thats all. Two rounds

yo,yo
jamel got rhymes that are bad for your health,
your whole style is wak put it back on the shelf,
mess with me you gonna end up in pieces,
I'll kill your whole family then fuck both your nieces,
your stress increases, as I continue to spit,
you start bitin' coz yo own rhymes are shit,
your the worst mcee in this whole battle ground,
like a racin horse runnin with an extra 80 pounds,
80? make that 150,
I konw the verbal darts you spittin are all gon miss me,
coz im as agile on the mic as a kung fu masta,
and the rhymes comin' back are ferocious and fasta,
anyone dares battle prophet i'll send them to hell,
I'll have you sayin "please spare me jamel!",
so cmon homie hope you flow like the river nile,
coz most can't get near the heat of my freestyle....

Grim Reapa
08-12-2005, 02:15 AM
yo i'll battle ya if we go 1 round i got shit to do

Robert
08-12-2005, 02:20 AM
yeah man thats cool, you drop now then i'll come back

Grim Reapa
08-12-2005, 02:39 AM
aight then


I spit spit sisemic disaters there aint no tranquilities/
Ive battled every fake emcee there be and they all speak to themselves in silioquies/
never seen your best ability, so your just an anomily to me/
Complex rhyming check it cuz i spit in 3d/
over a beat my mind bending rhymes would be a symphony/
So r u prepared to be another casualty/
dont get a blood clot reading this or bust a cappilarie artiry/
Your rhymes got less angles than a triangle thats isoceles/
So now ur gonna be turned in to another punk emcee cliche/
dont fuck with me cuz i got a whole lyricall cache/
Starting to feel dismay, i haven't even put you in the ground yet/
you haven't even begun to decay/
Or maybe get a convey/
Sittin paraniod like Tim McVae/
In the middle of may before ur death day/

PEACE

Robert
08-12-2005, 02:45 AM
here goes.......
Im an elder statesman, your the student that was sent to me,
im on the mic raping, takin your rap virginity,
your rhymes are lame your the joke of the rap community,
If you were a lyrical virus then i’d have the rap immunity,
I’ll break you down like the fuckin twin towers,
hit you with my verbal slugs have you pushing up flowers,
off to kill ya, hop in the range rover,
before I spit a verse niggas sayin its all over,
coz prophet raps like he’s goin supanova,
you try to match me but ya screaming pull over,
you the weakest mcee that was ever seen to bust,
when you rhyming on the mic i need giant ear muffs,
coz that shits so wak it makes usher seem like hip hop,
you think the crowds screamin “hell yeah!” but they screaming “please stop!”,
You are retarded like a down syndrome baby,
you bite more rhymes then a dog with rabies,
your styles like a quilt, fuckin patch work,
get outta my zone you homo fuckin’ jerk,
my style is awesome coz I put in the effort,
you in the rap game but we’d be better off if you left it......
GET VOTES IN PEEPS, NO BULLSHIT VOTES EITHER
GOOD VERSE GENIUS
PEACE

Grim Reapa
08-12-2005, 03:00 AM
NICE VERSE BY U YOUR PRETTY GOOD JAMEL

PEACE

Robert
08-12-2005, 03:03 AM
Cheers man, have a feelin' this could be a tight battle,
GET VOTES IN PEEPS FIRST TO THREE, CMON HOMIES!

Sicka than aidZ
08-12-2005, 03:14 AM
yo jamel won......i dont know what u said masta. i need a dictionary for your verse.

it wasnt bad tho,...shit was close but i think jamel came with a doper verse.

vote jamel but u 2 should go more cuz it's close. peace

shit was cool, both of u layed it down, kept it cool, no arguing or bs. 1

Robert
08-12-2005, 03:19 AM
cheers sicka, keep those votes comin in

Grim Reapa
08-12-2005, 03:24 AM
lol it was innevitable that someone was gonna say that but to clear up my rhymes

spit spit sisemic disaters there aint no tranquilities/
Ive battled every fake emcee there be and they all speak to themselves in silioquies/ < means talk to yourself
never seen your best ability, so your just an anomily to me/ <<unknown mystery
Complex rhyming check it cuz i spit in 3d/
over a beat my mind bending rhymes would be a symphony/
So r u prepared to be another casualty/
dont get a blood clot reading this or bust a cappilarie artiry/
Your rhymes got less angles than a triangle thats isoceles/< equal the same
So now ur gonna be turned in to another punk emcee cliche/ < what the typical mc is
dont fuck with me cuz i got a whole lyricall cache/<place were u hide shit
Starting to feel dismay, i haven't even put you in the ground yet/<scared
you haven't even begun to decay/
Or maybe get a convey/<move
Sittin paraniod like Tim McVae/
In the middle of may before ur death day/

PEACE

VernakuLa
08-12-2005, 04:06 AM
i liked masta genius more sick battle homies i just thought he used more itellegent words plus he even explained the shit nice battle


v=masta genius

Grim Reapa
08-12-2005, 05:31 PM
AIGHT NE BODY ELSE WANNA VOTE 1

SurreaL
08-12-2005, 05:43 PM
Vote = Masta, just cause the rhyming word's were Ill and on point, plus when someone question'd it, he was quick to explain, jamel's was alright, but the punch's started to die down near the end, that's when they gotta be the hardest man, the last 2 line's are alway's the hardest, peace.

Grim Reapa
08-12-2005, 05:47 PM
THANX HOMIE JAMEL I THOUGHT WUZ PRETTY GOOD, AIGHT GET IN SUM MORE VOTES PEEPS

ONE

Grim Reapa
08-13-2005, 11:31 PM
somebody else vote 1

hollywoodrealty
08-14-2005, 05:02 AM
i gotta call this on e even, i know that is pointless for your voting system here, but each of u had some strong lyrics, genius came with stronger words, but jamal came with a super nice flow, each person style is so different from each other, but i think both of u came out strong, jamal did have 2 verses, so maybe it would make it easier for me to pick a winner if genius dropped one more verse

Robert
08-14-2005, 07:27 AM
looks like you won genius, good battle homie, tight verse, hope for a round two some time.
PEACE

Ill Jolson
08-14-2005, 08:09 AM
mine's for jamel, i'm lovin genius' style, but jamel came rawer...

Robert
08-14-2005, 08:34 AM
mine's for jamel, i'm lovin genius' style, but jamel came rawer...
Cheers dogg but the battle is already over (it was first to 3 votes).

Grim Reapa
08-14-2005, 11:24 AM
i dont give a shit about votes so w/e so, nice verse homie1