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jjh_38
08-12-2005, 10:15 PM
Visual:

slice your rhymes like gish
hook you, reel you, pull you apart and sell your dead body like fish
dream crushing analogue rhymes pushing new boundries
you and your crew only rhyme out evil disease
my anthology is deep like the red sea
im right next to you, yet still you cant touch me
get at me with hard shit, i crush it like mechanics
phantasm stimula shock your body like punk antics
i rock human bodies, suicide if you try me
so seductive club dancer, label you a bi freak
you are upon my scope like sniper to target
splash your head, pull you in like a magnet
my shit is box talk massecre infested in your digital
your raps is hot garbage, i violate your mental
my style is sick like VD, im always on ya TV
sellin ass and narcotics like zeiti (pasta)
get over ya self before i damage your health
you get jacked in public housing no matter your wealth
i will stone wash your rhymes like slavery days
grab the mic while you spittin, my selfish ways
dark days locked in my own brain written these rhymes
splashin ya with my lyrical dick game, almost like a nine
look at the time, you gon die in a diesel pit
my shit is a brain hit, the buck lumicification bits
light up the whole crowd like rhythmic arson
film and photograph your naked body like marcus larksson
like a crack child, all my rhymes is hopeless
how you figure record sales make you the dopest?
my raps are like buldges on a jail in mate
niggas high off the lyrical dimes that i create
mousey like a keyboard that i type my hottness on
so seductive like yayo addiction and porn
you can light my shit on fire like a box of dutches
im an abomination of rap, all that and such and such
im in the touchless class, never washin my ass
you cant look through the glass, speed like lance armstrong hell fast
roll my flow up in a rubber and fuck everyone wit it
fuck y'all so much, get dick sick wit it
my style is spontanious, why should i flip it
your crafmatic agazine got condoms in it
poissions swarm on your disc verses and lay eggs on em
nigga trynna spit quck? i verbalize em



King:

You fuckin with me's a gamble.. playin your chips at the tables of death
Holdin your breath.. prayin to God that you placed the correct bet
Cuz ive come to collect debts.. and cripple cassette decks
Got ya Magnavox boom box coppin a teff vest
Mollest sets.. fuses pop whenever King's news drop
Platoon Ops.. chewin thru you like a few loose Rotts (weilers)
Your sorry story's a flop.. made of poorly connected thoughts
That go together like a half inch wrench in a metric slot
The tecs is cocked..and got these bodies droppin like Tetris blocks
So many bullet holes that we could play.. connect the dots
Kid im a vet.. you battle me in hopes of gainin respect.. pathetic aint it
Ya couldn't work a mic (mike) as Tyson's community service agent
Im KingShyt, Assailant.. with the sword form ancient
In morgue basements.. dumpin bodies and leavin no drawer vacant
You's a fool to compete.. im forever holdin the heat.. like thermals
Your rhyme journals.. bout as fresh as a bus station urinal
Down for the count.. we only needed one round in the bout
Blood leakin out of your mouth... gallon amounts
Drain you down to the ounce.. straight brute, like Athletes shoot juice (roids)
Knock you out like a loose tooth.. bring war, i elude truce


Aite.. nice battle man
First to 5 takes the prize.. it's cool if you want to comment but break the shit down if your voting.. peace

visualeipstm
08-13-2005, 11:27 AM
LOL!
i didnt even know i posted in this thread...

Grim Reapa
08-13-2005, 12:13 PM
I VOTE FOR KINGSHYT THAT SHIT WAS ILL AND ON TOPIC HONESTLY I REALLY COULDN'T PUT VISUALS RHYMES TOGETHER AND I USE THE DICTIONARY MORE THAN ANYBODY ELSE ON THIS SITE LOL SO MY VOTE GOES TO KINGSHYT

V=KINGSHYT

jjh_38
08-13-2005, 01:57 PM
LOL!
i didnt even know i posted in this thread...
I just moved your verse here cuz the other threads flooded... easier for voters that way......... wait, what voters?|(

SurreaL
08-13-2005, 02:09 PM
Kingshty for the Ill vocab, and for the multi's and blah blah blah, Visual your's was alright, but I wasn't feelin the punch's, peace.

Shytking get's my vote :9 :cheerlie: ^O^

Grim Reapa
08-13-2005, 03:35 PM
spok3n when u gonna hook me up with PIR?

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jjh_38
08-13-2005, 05:08 PM
thanx for the votes.... and spoke, i appreciate the feed man.. its nice to know there are some heads out there that are able to see the complexity of a verse/ all the writing aspects that make it what it is. Appreciated homie.. peace


Aite den..2-1... uppin

visualeipstm
08-13-2005, 06:32 PM
good job king, dat verse was crazee son.

Grim Reapa
08-13-2005, 07:16 PM
good job king, dat verse was crazee son.
SUCK UP 1

visualeipstm
08-13-2005, 08:08 PM
i do suck up, bend over and you'll see ;)

jjh_38
08-13-2005, 09:29 PM
i do suck up, bend over and you'll see ;)
Lol ... I fucked up earlier.... 3-0


UPPIN YO

Grim Reapa
08-13-2005, 11:52 PM
YO SPOK3N IM PUTTING TOGETHER A COLLAB FOR MY NEW GROUP SUPREME MATHEMATIX SO FAR ITS SICKA MYSELF AND SURREAL U WANT IN PM ME WITH A VERSE AIGHT?
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Grim Reapa
08-14-2005, 12:04 AM
supreme mathematix lol, its just introducing every member homie just put it in your sig. and ur in. Ill pm u sum of my verses for the collab c wut u think

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jjh_38
08-14-2005, 06:30 AM
Pause...

Yo, King, get back at me on the collab. Plus, do you record over pc? i have recording equipment here, so maybe we can do a few tracks if your interested. 1
Bro.. i dont even have my own computer anymore.. i may have to head down your way tho... south Miami.. maybe an hour tops from my pad
We'll figure sumthin out yo

Oh and... more votes please, first to 5... uppin

jjh_38
08-16-2005, 11:25 AM
still need votes here all you lazy fucks!!

MindzDeZign
08-16-2005, 11:51 AM
AYO, I liked visuals verse yo...shits was ill...jus one problem, it actually WAS A VERSE! Vocab, and metaphors were on point but not a battle verse...ILL THO, NO DOUBT!

King, I don't think you won by a landslide tho...it was just because you were the only one to throw punches and that is well needed in a battle...

By my slight decision, vote = King

jjh_38
08-16-2005, 02:06 PM
peace Mindz

aite 4-0... uno mas

InWuWeTrUsT
08-16-2005, 05:19 PM
aight i now im new to this sight but not to the game king you got my vote