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Grim Reapa
08-13-2005, 03:03 PM
THIS IS A SHORT VERSE ABOUT A BROTHER I MET HE SAID HIS NAME WAS KEVIN/
HOW YOUNG/
COULDN'T BE 2 MONTHS OVER ELEVEN/
WE GOT TO TALKIN ABOUT HIS PARENTS AND THEN HE POINTED STRAIGHT TO THE HEAVENS/
THAT MADE ME SAD/
THAT I HAD SOMETHING THIS YOUNGSTER NEVER HAD/
SO THEN I STARTED TEACHING HIM THAT, LIFE GOES ON/
AFTER THAT I INTRODUCED HIM TO A LITTLE BOOK CALLED THE KORAN/
THEN SHORTLY AFTER I TAUGHT HIM ABOUT THE 120 QUESTIONS/
HE WAS AMAZED AT MY KNOWLEDGE, HAD A LOOK OF PERPLEXTION/
SO THIS VERSE ENDS WITH THE BOYS HEAD FILLED/
THE BOY SOON SOON HAD THE SELF MOTAVATION TO LEAD HIS LIFE FUFILLED/

tekunique
08-13-2005, 03:15 PM
interesting.. original content, nice message too. i didnt like the last 2 lines how it rhymed, other than that it was cool. peace.