View Full Version : Add a verse to a popular rap

03-08-2008, 01:05 PM
Spit bars to any rap. Just name the artiste and the track. Here's an example.

Success - Jay Z featuring Nas

♪ Please, let that bitch die
Cuz I say-so thats why
Overdosed on success
Solvent, in excess
Indulgent, no stress
I'm so messed up, blessed up, sipped from the cup
The Holy Grail, that's what's up
Up, up and away, wave on the Bombardier
¿Como se Dice? Champs Élysées
How do you say-say, I'm richer than Jay-Jay
May-day? No way. Everyday is my payday
Never see Black Friday, my account in the black
Deposits and credits, paper cuts and payback?
You bitch, don't beg, don't leave
You snitched, you don't breathe ♫

03-08-2008, 02:48 PM
kanye west
can't tell me nothing
(plus i reworked the chrous as well as a verse)

Open up the doors
This is my life homey, let all the chronic out/
I know the lord almighty died for us
But I couldn’t tell what the side it was/
So I spit my lungs out and ripped the fucker a new asshole
Old folks are talking about back in the day……so/
Well homie this is my time oh am I late?
Class started twenty minutes ago……./
Well you know I almost graduated
And if you can live through anything since we’ve survived 9-11/
F____ what they trying to do to me, hold back like gravity
Uhhh they’re so sensitive to my approach on everything/
Don’t fix ya self wit plastic surgery………….
And end up demolished then, from rhino plastid
When you’ll end apologizing………../
Let’s me know if it’s a problem then…..
If not and it’s aight then holla man……/

La La La La (CHA)
Wait till I get my choppy right
La La La La (YEAH)
Then you ain’t telling me nothing right
Excuse me, were you saying something?
Uh uh, you ain’t telling me nothing (YEAH)
You ain’t telling me nothing (CHA)
Uh uh, you ain’t telling me nothing

03-08-2008, 03:56 PM
that's whats up; I like that.
Like how you kept the theme of the album too, not just the track.

03-12-2008, 11:03 AM
Weak Spot - Wu Tang

Yu Shin Hua!
You thought you'd find my weak spot, but still, you failed

Like Ali I float on multiple levels through the mind of God to the hands of the Devil
Stay focused like a perimeter, slash like a diameter
Across throats I stroke, the vengenace I invoke
Leaves a mark of terror, I spare no error
Whenever and never. You slip you slide, the reign of genocide
Rises like the tide, never subside 'til death presides
Widows cry loud tears, the harmony of death, music to my ears
Their fears pay the debt til their sons erupt, to find the weak spot I haven't got.

03-12-2008, 08:25 PM
Wu Tang Clan ain't nuthing ta fuck wit - Wu Tang

Death by magic, avada kedavra spell
Shit so tragic, found your head in a well
Yo bitch crying buckets on the evening news
I'ma pop her pussy sockets, flood her grooves
Shoulda never test the examiner
Ice-cold killa with the evil stamina
Turn the Klan black and the clocks back
Doomsday time on the back nine, now say this shit
Wu Tang Clan ain't nuthing ta fuck wit

03-13-2008, 08:28 AM
Itsy Bitsy spider climbing up the spout
Down came the rain and washed the spider out
Out came the sun and dried up all the rain
Now Itsy Bitsy spider went up the spout again!

03-13-2008, 08:56 AM
How long did that take you?

Tyler Durden
03-13-2008, 09:50 AM
Itsy Bitsy spider climbing up the spout
Down came the rain and washed the spider out
Out came the sun and dried up all the rain
Now Itsy Bitsy spider went up the spout again!


03-13-2008, 10:20 AM

03-20-2008, 08:39 AM
Ghost is back - Ghostface

Step in the light, fucked up eyesight, can't see shit right
Gesundeit; good night with the red-light
Fade to black, stocked your stack, whiskey Jack flew to hell and back
Alpha sigma omega and enigma of the attack!
'The Ghost is back, The Ghost is back

03-21-2008, 11:19 PM
Kanye West-Good Morning (my verison is called Good Morning)

Good evening…I ain’t got much to say
With few exceptions I flow corrected
Interjecting my two cents into everything/
So I speak my mind while u still running in place
Like 50 Cent asking your self is this a rat race/
I keep pace and exceed my needs
By training on the daily, physically and mentally regularly/
Emcees can catch me the block ciphering hyper off the energy
Or online on the daily ripping up forums wit lighting speed/
Striking you down like SHAZZAM!!!
Running like a chicken wit it’s head cut off/
Your worst than any news reviewed by musical cues
Given boos for inaccuracy to bias on storytelling/
Now you’re yelling when I’m only spelling out the facts
Hack minds like Professor X with no exact address
I connect then you regress due to apparent stress/

Good Evening {repeat 4X*}

Good evening ….
And look at the dictation you jotted down
I take lines in tow trying grow plants out dead weeds/
Now you can exceed reading the paper
Looking at the latest valedictorian from which high school or college and/
And still feel left out without a doubt in the world but cha legs begin to curl
Feeling the urge to yell and hurl so now you trying to rewind/
But cha can’t even get the nerve up like Doc Brown to jump in the DeLorean
So rather give it up to Marty McFly and let him take the reigns/
It pains you when you get a notice from the future
Disillusioned by the collusion confused by the confusion/
Now isn’t that amusing when your still getting abused
By your label, by your friends, your family now ask your self is it amusing/
Now you saying no it isn’t so why should our kids have too put up wit it
Give it a rest already and stop being hypocrites spitting all this convincing bullshit/

Good Evening {repeat 4X*}

03-30-2008, 05:38 PM
^^you're killing it, yo.

Adding to 4:20 by Meth

roll that shit, light that shit, smoke it
Your shit is so-so, so you gone Soho dumbo, like Mayor Cuomo
Oh no-no, fuckin' dodo actin' like straight homo
Go-go, survey says you're a fuckin lame-o, frodo
Stamos should take that and make a promo, its apropos
Shit makes your full house crumble like a lego, fuego
Burn in hell, open up your head with a Key Largo, Drago
Couldn't beat me even if I were Apollo, Ohno
Skate your shit out with the quickness...

04-03-2008, 06:53 AM
My friends did an acoustic rendition of "Killing Me Softly" by Fugees, including a little beat break where i came in to rhyme for a bit, this is how it went:

I lacerate her life with my lyricalistics
Every thing i said to be specific
I see her wince in pain each time i speak
As my words fly by like the days of the week
She be all alone on an enterprise
Lost in the sea of tears in her eyes
Locking her thoughts away for safe keeping
Putting up facades of fake feelings
I hold the key to unlock your soul, can
I end your misery with one last soul jam?
Holla one time (one time!), i stay headstrong
'Cause i be killing her softly with this song

Not to many multisyllables or stuff in there, but i tried to go with the theme of the original song, plus REALLY got the flow working well, the crowd at my high school got absolutely hyped when we performed it live and i hit the mic running with those lyrics.

04-03-2008, 09:26 AM
That ish was craxy...
I even did a Wyclef on this line, lol.

"Holla one time (one time!)"

04-03-2008, 07:59 PM
wu tang clan-careful (click, click)

something in the bank went BOOM!
sounded like a round from a tank like BOOM!
dogs all barking, they went crazy from the BOOM!
thought about 9/11 when i heard the BOOM!

i was eating chinese food, listening to mf doom
when my whole crib started to move
put on my shoes, went outside, everybody i knew was there
fire truck sirens blared, you can smell c4 in the air
went up da street to where fifth 3rd used to be
money on the concrete, burnt like grill cheese
it was a mob scene, niggaz fighting police
scooped me 50 fiftys, 20 twentys and like 40 benji's
pockets heavy and they starting to hose us
crack head ted took a bean bag to the shoulder
riot squad swinging batons, it aint over
till that last dollar gone, bless the nigga wit da bomb

04-04-2008, 11:04 AM
I love that shit, son.