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u-turn
08-13-2005, 08:51 PM
i tried improving by adding wordplay

poisoned spears, spear hearts an arteries
bodys hung up on the tapestry
spreading like pitbulls, at your party
growing nerves, all of a sudden got hardy
whipping out everything, from guns to blades
laying flat ther furst to say my name
deep in the oasis, hoping it wasn't in vein
but on the outside, just gave away the AK
weary, grabbing my naval area
secrets lurking, peered at like area 51
felt the death kiss of st. gregory
hope i don't make any good enemy's
checking the frequency signals
out of this era thoughts digging
should i go back and say sorry to his family?
or just say fuck it, and cook in the pantry?
radio personalities aggravate
left in dismay cause of the per say
swallowing the gifts i gave
now i'm cutting away at myself
loosening the belt, wanting to bang
but the heart ain't there, the big bang
happended by myself in my mah's crib
where mad peasents sleep't
where sweet dreams were never dreamt
cuz the exorist dwelled in the city celler
scratching the rear view mirror

Fr@z
08-13-2005, 08:57 PM
Omg!! Omfg!! Jesus Christ Monkey Balls You Fucking Suck Fuck You Fuck You!!

For A Minuuuute There I Lost Mysellllf I Lost Mysellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllffffff ffffffffffffffffffffff

Fuck You

u-turn
08-13-2005, 09:06 PM
ok, hows this? tryin improve ryhme structure, another keystyle

a realist, step close enough you can feel it
the pain and anguish, ya scalp, i peel it
why do i sleep? to keep n eye on ya keep
cuz i kicked you out, others home where i dream
as it seems, gats in every body's ryhme scheme
crime sprees, hoping you start crying in ya sleep
drownin the visions out, the slence n doubts
i shut down like taxfree piles of crown (the drink)
blowing like air-pumps, its all fair when i dump
just shitted on you, squared n dumb
ya face, kinda ugly, ya name, ain't lovely
brake wrists to ankles, so don't shove me
clouds of smoke, along with pounds of coke
surronding my dome
tonight, all souls equals choppable
wet dreams, i make every dream possible

Fr@z
08-13-2005, 09:14 PM
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHhhhdhdh!!!!!!!!! tHAT mAKES ME A VERY SAD PANDA

u-turn
08-13-2005, 09:15 PM
i understand...just go back to watching chucky

Fr@z
08-13-2005, 09:16 PM
Bend over son.....It's Boaby time

u-turn
08-13-2005, 09:30 PM
hows this key?

playing my hand shuffling the deck
so all is fair, acting tough like critics
till' the slug comes thru the door, thats when you start running
but thats when i start punishing
if you persistant, i'm taking estimates
going in your chamber raping the president
taking the residence by storm
the resins got me wheeling by norm
kicking in the back, crackity crick
need prescriptions now, you happy dick?
uncontrollable winds, juss impossible
licking shots at you like tootsie rolls, like lil kim' i'm impossible
dieing by the rock, guess you had enough
the waters out, guess your finally resting your bluff
hold ya head, the bricks smacking
like broken construction sites, shits cracking
got a grip on the blade
plus ya lips on the blade
so pussy lips, shut yo mouth
slapping shit silly similar to hockey pucks, plow

good night

Tage
08-13-2005, 11:07 PM
Omg!! Omfg!! Jesus Christ Monkey Balls You Fucking Suck Fuck You Fuck You!!

For A Minuuuute There I Lost Mysellllf I Lost Mysellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllffffff ffffffffffffffffffffff

Fuck You
^whas ya problem man, i never seen you spit....

Fr@z
08-14-2005, 08:11 AM
^Lol It was a joke, I didn't even read it.

Tage
08-14-2005, 09:00 AM
wahahaha


funny joke.....



^that was an joke btw.

Fr@z
08-14-2005, 09:18 AM
wahahahaha

Bend over son... You should know by now its BOABY TIME