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Mr SimplistiC
08-15-2005, 09:12 AM
and so and so
i see through the eclipse
mind body and curvy hips
lust redefined
~words break through cusped lips
on a wave in a storm - the motion is norm
~commically at the break of day - dance + play
commercially immersed in the depths of subconscious verse
dabble in dappled light effects - catch beats - in sharks nets
_ to nest with the vernacular - bite brains with the vulture
- from memphis culture to Egyptian architecture

and so and so
i see words through broken lips
the mind rips
and life is eclipsed

just a clip from a bad movie
when arnie shot 3 bullets and destroyed a whole army

calm water haze
of celestial days
a film of the brave

GuardianOne
08-15-2005, 09:37 AM
Its a very lassic type of verse, quite estatic. Cause it benefits everyone that can capture its flow. And height of purity in poetic style. Nice verse standard and poetic

Peace