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Butter
08-15-2005, 09:45 AM
id rather battle someone new but anyone is fine.

5-10 bars, no riding, no feeding, no hating.

ill be dropping at 10 Pm GMT onwards.. i have work.

you can drop here and ill come back to you, as theres no feeding it makes no difference.

visualeipstm
08-15-2005, 10:18 AM
i dodge your bulls*** like toilet
maneuver my mic accross your forehead, strick you lyrically and you enjoyed it
splash nigga spit, script rewritten to blast out
i rhyme hard like crack rock, stomp you flat out
you just a young dick getting touched by preists
over the edge of the world, i bubble over like yeast
flashed at you like police in the middle of the night
attention paid well, im always in the spotlite
nightlife graphic, vomit on you while i spit sickness
my sexual lyrics circumsize you, leave you dickless
you ichabod crane, my horses ride by and leave you headless
you a stain in my jeans, i shout you out, clean and spotless
reanimate your crackhoe rhymes, illuminate the stage
i am the remaining five chapters, bitch, turn the page
my s*** is over for like your brainless rhymes and laced dimes
you a stuck up kid, your rhymes are petty crimes
when i finish you, you'll be sniffin lines and getting raped
while i be rockin hood to hood on a globe scape
microphone assult like murder and armed robbery
y'all niggas say you straight, but you enjoyed my rhyme sodomy
im piss poor with my s***, constantly shutting up niggas lips
write rhymes up and down your colon, massive ink makes your ass rip
like feathers: you get clipped, you think you hot? you get hit
my rhymes are so sick, so get the f*** off my dick
verbs attack you like pronoun welts, my rhymes single handedly beat you with belts
i just think up the rest myself
take your earnings for no reason and beat you to death
i inhale your rhymes and put em out like spliff
i access your brain directly and control your innermost thoughts
your money and your clothes is what i have saught
you cant see my reflection after i spit my bars
my lyrics run like horses and cars, excessive like tar
everytime i drop my dimes you know i cant be beat
but i wont make an album, word on the street
i have your hoes stabbing one another on your corner
now you cant talk or be acknowledged like a foreigner
you dont even read my s***, so i guess im bornin ya
im so hot that my rhymes get inside and melt the core of ya
bust of luck, twists of faith and passion to your worm
i inpregnate the rap game as if i were sperm
i could keep postin hot battle rhymes, but you wont learn

Butter
08-15-2005, 11:23 AM
ok ill drop when im back from work, can you shorten that too within the 10 bars.

RockD
08-15-2005, 12:15 PM
pic yo poison i do it in 8 lines
yo will get squashed like wat m did to royce da 5' 9"
its fine its just yo time every butcha has his day
shoot of verbal assult yo ass is dead
aim for the head neva missin i'm quick to pullin
you an mc bitch who the fuk r u foolin
stop droolin the cream looks good but you aint getin
hand maid my meat u servin

Butter
08-15-2005, 04:40 PM
Like battlin on a road, id kick you over, people callin me Kirby/
I fucked you up worse than a drunk docter during heart surgery/
'Fake threats under oath' only come to one thing like 'purjery'/
you had to many 'dicks in the ear' no wonder you never 'heard'a me'/
I Submit Torpedos in my spit,'drown' into perell like a 'marine'/
you 'dribble so slow' it makes 'cancer' look like its 'moving at lightspeed'/
even the '3 blind mice' could say they 'see' you like 'dreams'/
you even got a Whole 'Team who dreams' not if i transform them to 'nightmares and screams'/
only time you come 'quick', is infront of a 'pornographic re-cord'/
only time you can 'spit', is infront of a '15 inch Tft and a keyboard'/
Your no longer 'tight' like a once apon 'virgin' locked up in a 'prison'/
ill leave you 'runnin like emission', even though it wasnt your 'volition'/
im like a 'chiroptractor', 'bending over backwards' will just crack it 'back at ya'/
which wouldnt make much difference, as your 'best' would be ranked down to 'amateur'/
with 2 'ass cheeks' and a 'cock', your' known as the best maker of a'sandwich'/
Like an 'expired Website', you've probably taken out all of the 'bandwidth'/
like 'blackalicious' you couldnt beat me if you had the 'gift'/
Ill rap in 'G's' just so you can afford that long awaited 'face lift'/ (G-Force)
When its all over ill be sure to leave 'John Doe On A bracelet'/
Always remaining un-named like 99 % of 'Butters neverending Gravesteps'/

made a few changes but yeah, to either of you, vote people.

RockD
08-15-2005, 10:02 PM
its been decide they cant even follow they own rules
smack yo ass silly danm these dumb fools
i neva hate i just bring down yo persona
smack u wit yo own hand make my pre madona
in this line i'm done u demenished, rook nigga check mate u finished

Robert
08-15-2005, 11:02 PM
i dodge your bulls*** like toilet? hahahahahahahahaha....that is fuckin funny man
anyway I vote butter-had better overall rhymes, both pretty good but butter gets my vote
peace

Butter
08-16-2005, 04:37 AM
peace, i need to work on my punches, people tell me that all the time its just, coming up with good ones lol, i suppose thats always the problem lol.

weathermen are sick yes 8)

Cage - Hell's Winter - September 20th Pick it up.

G...
08-16-2005, 05:59 AM
Butter took this, some punches strong, some weak... but overall a much better and more well-rounded battle verse than visuals. visual's wasn't bad, some punches hit hard, others fail to even connect, good battle tho, that's what we like to see... oh, and Rock D - FUCK OFF and get your own battle going in another thread bitch! ONE

visualeipstm
08-16-2005, 09:40 AM
I dunno, but, usually people take a shit in the toilet. So, how can it avoid it?
its a freestyle... i dont even know what im sayin...

jjh_38
08-16-2005, 10:15 AM
yea.. i say butter on this one.. he's improving

some lines were a bit bland but overall that wasn't too bad of a verse

visual has creative thoughts but needs to learn how to make them flow better... his shits too random

v butter

RockD
08-17-2005, 10:01 AM
Butter took this, some punches strong, some weak... but overall a much better and more well-rounded battle verse than visuals. visual's wasn't bad, some punches hit hard, others fail to even connect, good battle tho, that's what we like to see... oh, and Rock D - FUCK OFF and get your own battle going in another thread bitch! ONE
look u dumb fuck i thought the guy that posted would have gotten dq because it was more than 5-10 lines wtf u tlk about. so i thought he would battle me because i actually followed the rules. now u FUCK OFF AND GET THE FUCKING FACTS STR8

dickridah
08-17-2005, 10:47 AM
hello rock head, why didnt u respond to my verse, it killed u. i think u should give up this whole "pretend, rapper, b-boy shit" and go and fulfill ur potential. as ja-rulez hype man.