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Wubrother#1
04-03-2008, 07:08 AM
Interference beyond those that comprehend
Lyrical meltdown like in Russia Nuclear wind
Signs that I walk through like you never got published
Interrupted by slow lane fast drivin you rubbish
Sincerely speaking like sliding on Ice melt
When were tweakin yo it aint that ice belt
Feelin head swoll like rings form around my mind
Anytime I write it's gotta be a sign
Break down like the course already passed
Can I get a break now the force of the blast
Got it slow we thought we were smokin planets
Naw it was just a bowl of that clear crystal damn it

adedwutang
04-03-2008, 02:22 PM
that was a dope verse kid, i just wanna see another one where u stretch out some rhyme schemes into maybe 4 bars or somethin, also use some multies cuz ur vocab and flow is solid i like it alot i wanna see wut else u can do.
peace-