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Beatwize
04-07-2008, 11:20 AM
First lyrics post here.

Here's an audio verse I did for my boy Fate L's track "Same Team, No Games" for his tape. The audio is done and already upped and shit, but I want to make a better quality version since my quality and mixing has really improved since then. There are a few things that you won't understand since you don't know Fate and my relation with him, so I'll explain at the end.
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Scriptin' spits sicker than you could imagine
It's magic..everytime Wize and Fate collabin'
Haters ain't lastin', when Imprint* up in a lab/It's
Like - ALL WHACK RAPPERS LEAVE IN AN ORDERLY FASHION

Stackin..lyrics never mimic the last-ones
So the splatter of my spits rippin' make you asthmatic
Or maybe spastic, depends on your ettiquite
I never slip, heating fools like plastic, I've mastered

This skill, so you can say it's in the books, it's ova
'Cause L's a good look, the rise of Illanova**
Grab ya clovas, your outta luck, you ain't even close-ta
The prophets***, I got this, from Long Island to Toronta****

You can join if you want-ta, nah you ain't worth it
Murked it, since I picked the mic up with my first spit
Been heat since my birthin, ya hate-it ain't workin'
So we may be part-time*****, but we always come first/it's Wize
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*"Imprint's up in the lab" - me, Fate, 2FR, and Achilles combine to make the collective Imprint Ent.
**Illanova is Fate L, 2FR, and Achilles - it's an Imprint group
***Me and Fate make the group "The Part-Time Prophets" (me as producer, him as emcee)
****He's from Long Island, I'm from Toronto
*****Another reference to "The Part-Time Prophets"

Leave that feed. I'll drop audio later either this week or the next.

adedwutang
04-07-2008, 11:38 PM
dope verse kid, you had a great flow on it and i like the schemes u had goin, just try and use some better vocabulary, i dk maybe its cuz im a wu-head, but usin lines like i murked it.... first spit, aint workin, like they rhyme good, they flow, but they real simple and i feel like if u got skill wit words, which i can tell that u do, u gotta show it off better, dont use filler lines that anybody can rite, keep it strait math and no1 can call u an average rapper, but good shit ill check back for ur next verse.
peace-

Beatwize
04-08-2008, 06:25 AM
yea, this was a little less vocab piece. i'll drop one later which really shows that; a little older but one of my better pieces. appreciate the feedback. let me know if theres something you'd like me to check out.

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
04-08-2008, 04:32 PM
IT'S A DOPE PIECE OF LYRICAL SKILL
FLOW:5.0
VOCAB:3.5 (DOPE USE OF UR SLANG GAME)
METAPHORS: Scriptin' spits sicker than you could imagine
It's magic..everytime Wize and Fate collabin'
Haters ain't lastin', when Imprint* up in a lab/It's
Like - ALL WHACK RAPPERS LEAVE IN AN ORDERLY FASHION
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NICE OPENNING LINES

OVERALL: 4.0 COULDA BEEN DOPER WITH A LIL MO' VOCAB

Beatwize
04-09-2008, 08:53 AM
thanks for the feedback man, appreciate it.

i_ecca
04-15-2008, 06:51 AM
nice reading. cute flow.