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minibumpsh
04-25-2008, 11:04 PM
before you stumble across my path
ask yourself why you here, do the math
two plus two, four youre a boooore
your little mans not wanted anymore
"size doesnt matter" jibber jabber
you slackin everytime we mackin'
mr road runner, ten minutes what a bummer
around my town and down the block
public knowledge you got that nasty cock


this is about...idk! small penis, aids,
i suck, maybe ill write more if i get more bored later
u can leave feedback if u like

EAGLE EYE
04-26-2008, 04:00 AM
you should post this rhyme as a myspace bulletin sweet heart

Guarded By Martyrs
04-26-2008, 06:45 AM
Pretty good...
Nice too see a diiferent kind of style in here.

I also made my first attempt not too long ago :
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=52200

Can't get how "Only Ten Minutes What A Bummer"
That ain't right !!!!

minibumpsh
04-26-2008, 10:50 AM
you should post this rhyme as a myspace bulletin sweet heart

hahah yeah maybe ur right


and thanks whers, i like yours better than mine