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Jabba Jaw
08-17-2005, 11:39 AM
another lil drop

i take a look in some of these emcees rhymin books
read a verse n already know how much time it took
five minutes for you to write that shit
mc hammer wouldnt even bite that shit
fuck ya gun talk, i kill ya writtens wit one thought
ya scripts hopeless i spit dopeness,rap is blood sport
i spit focused n rip jokers, what you actin a thug for
i got no love for these wannbees my flow stings like a swarm o bees
so if you step wit that fake ass cake ass flow you aint harmin me
sick o these thugs n shit, is every rapper a blood or crip
dont think so,ya career sink slow,u aint spittin for the love of it
i dont care bout sales or billboard charts my levels above of this
yall lost ya cause, im still that rebel with a game plan
i spit so evil you'd think me n the devil were the same man
its lame man...
how you can gain respect from a couple o bullett wounds
i picked ya card out the deck n im ready to pull it soon
i shine so bright to blind ya sight, like the fullest moon
ya career on thin ice n im in the water to pull it through

juss a lil freestyle shit
im bored

lol

ramel
08-17-2005, 01:19 PM
i take a look in some of these emcees rhymin books
read a verse n already know how much time it took
five minutes for you to write that shit
mc hammer wouldnt even bite that shit



You pull no puches and your words leave no room for misunderstandings.

Your words also come off with a lotta hunger.
Almost like a d-block member or a Theodore unit member.
You and "trife da god" would go at it with the rhymes.
PEACE!

J.T.S.
08-18-2005, 02:21 PM
Yeah this was pretty good man keep scriptin' you'll see ya rhymes advance more but nice for a freestyle.

GuardianOne
08-21-2005, 06:39 AM
It rhymed okay, but you need to improve on your content, i suppose you were busting

Peace
PS: Keep posting