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ramel
08-17-2005, 12:35 PM
"I use to scream .....

when the night seem cruel to me.

til I seen ......

it's cruelty killed by day" -Chaos


Ayo Ayo Yo

"From boys to men 2 the end of the road.
From men to wise men getting old, our story told thru a new light"

"Just imagine what I think of my life, and who are you to say and think it ain't right"

"Was just a captain in my past life, on a ship crusing thru dark waters
Pirates using our iris as our flashlight"


Just a little suttin"
peace

Jabba Jaw
08-17-2005, 12:40 PM
you got potential mayne

this was a little short but still dope

keep at it son

ramel
08-17-2005, 01:08 PM
I'll be back with a 16.
Fuck it maybe a 32
YO THANKS 4 the feedback.
We need more people commenting on our work on here.

GuardianOne
08-21-2005, 05:59 AM
Its quite creative, although you used not too creative lyrics (but the way you put it leaves a lot to bew expected from your style).

Peace
PS: Keep posting