View Full Version : trapped in hell

05-05-2008, 02:09 PM
i could remember 98 my mind was locked in a cage/
my heart was rage,bcuz tha devil i embraced/
the truth was far 4rm me/
i was blind couldnt see/
all my dream was locked wiv a key/
i followed evil/
but GODs epistle keep ringin in my head lyk a whistle/
i couldnt focus on tha facts of life/
bcuz my words were scarlet lyk a swine/
never figured out tha reason why God saved my life/
dat nite i might heve died/
my moms found it hard 2 understand who i was/
life was ruff/
livin da trife life i slanged kurupt/
couldnt trust God/
a youth kurupt wiv wicked mind/
swallowed wiv pride/
all i did in lfe were lyk paragraphs never completed/
so i seek 4 wisdom/
4rm da holy scripture/

05-06-2008, 02:56 AM
okay it's dope i can read the passion in your lyrics and you have good form (stanzas are short but has potency keep the progression coming

05-06-2008, 04:30 AM
Cool verse and welcome to the forum :thumbup:

05-06-2008, 10:26 AM
The spelling tripped me up a bit, but i like what you were saying heartfelt.