View Full Version : Jamel Vs LL ( Jamel WINS )

Luther Large
08-18-2005, 11:48 AM
drop and i'll know i have a battle

08-18-2005, 12:32 PM
greeneyes, why everybody talkin bout the colour of your iris,
I spit the the rap venom, leave you with an optical virus,
cant see, all you can hear is the murderous melody,
you regret battling jamel coz mo'fucka im deadly,
I got divine rhymes, compared to your poor lines,
Dont step in my battle field coz you be steppin on land mines,
blow your leg off, cook it and make you ingest it,
shove it down your throat so I know you digest it,
laugh in your face coz you swallow better then you spit,
leave you blind and convulsing from my verbal induced fit,
cmon homie, why you cryin? did prophet hurt your feelins,
didnt know jamel had the power to leave your ass reelin,
attach you to the ceiling, hang you by your own entrails,
I never liked mothafuckas who aint attracted to females,
If you still alive, i'll play you a greeneyes verse,
you'll want to kill yourself coz nigga that shit is the worst,
you worse then dickridah man but at least his shit is amusing,
your shit dont make sense, itts benign and bemusing.......

08-18-2005, 02:01 PM
Wher you at dogg?

Luther Large
08-18-2005, 02:10 PM
after this i'll take ya verse and put it were it belongs inside our wackest verse thread
battelin me i thot you had a brain inside that fat ass head

fightin me you better be packin cuz i would if i was you
battelin me you get cut and bruised
this faggot mothafucka burn more rubbas than sluts do
jamel fell at the sound of the fuckin bell
go back to rappin school and bring my verse when it's show and tell
it's a fact that you gonna lose show and prove
or get the fuck outta dodge......... cuz i'm the devil
you couldnt stand the kitchen heat if you were chillin with emeril(forget how to spell his name)
fightin me you wont join the champs
besides a label wouldnt give you a shot if you practiced targets at point blank
yo i'm in a war with a strate dummy i'm beatin a clown now
talkin about bein murderous when he couldnt put a whole in one if tiger woods showed him how

that's all for me right now peace

jamel it's up to you if your satisfied with the battle if so let's get sum VOTES

Luther Large
08-18-2005, 04:43 PM
i guess it is voting time

08-18-2005, 05:04 PM
i vote jamel, he brought some dope lyrics right with the 1st line...........[greeneyes, why everybody talkin bout the colour of your iris,
I spit the the rap venom, leave you with an optical virus,]

Luther Large
08-18-2005, 05:19 PM
i think my verse should be put in the "wackest verse thread".....feel free

08-18-2005, 08:21 PM
no way does your verse quaify for the wackest thread greeneyes, he just came stronger this time, peace

08-19-2005, 03:02 AM
props butcher, personally I didnt think that was my best but still aight though...
keep voting peeps

08-20-2005, 02:43 AM
cmon drop a vote, lets finish it off

08-20-2005, 11:34 AM
Violence, brought on by the harshness of dead silence,
Over relience, brought on by the rhymes of rap tyrants,
To flow on the mic is to project excellence and meaning,
Eventually, niggas will understand that its more then pure dreaming.....

Grim Reapa
08-20-2005, 11:39 AM
that was ill

08-20-2005, 11:42 AM
props masta, drop a vote

Grim Reapa
08-20-2005, 11:44 AM
aight, my votes for jamel cuz it's all to me in the delivery of the first 2 lines and that sets the mood for the whole verse and his was ill and came rawer than greeneyes 1vote=jamel the pro

08-20-2005, 11:52 AM
props masta, 2-nil to jamel one more vote peeps

08-20-2005, 02:59 PM

08-20-2005, 03:52 PM
Fuck, peeps post in the battlefield so they can get votes and feedback. A lot of cats wanna spit but very few people vote. Fuck that, we gotta support homies battles and freestyles, I vote on most of the battles, people should vote......

08-23-2005, 02:25 AM
Know peeps are unlikely to vote for me after the shit that has gone on the past few days but I wanna finish this one off. peace

08-24-2005, 05:35 AM
It would please me if greeneyes and I got some support in the form of votes from any of you peeps that battle. Cmon, This threads becoming ancient

08-24-2005, 01:10 PM
vote=jamel, just came off better

08-24-2005, 01:12 PM
battles over three-nil