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Killer Falcon
08-19-2005, 06:11 AM
all opinions and criticism is appreciated

feelin kinda weak, i'm a lost exhausted soul
ride on ships of life but i've almost lost control
the currents of fate, force me down a river
led by intuition i see a village burn to cinders
flaming thoughts that searched out evil ministers
but their greed even makes them feel kinda innocent
capitalism... disease spread by corporations
was leaked in flows of spirit next to halls of satan
i busted in... wearing heavens karma
shined self-knowledge, embedded in my armour
was wise not blinded by lost cerebral pirates
misguided by negativity, sailed, and always find it
thats why i remain loyal, the silent silver lion
kept heart warmed by friends locked in tight alliance
this misled trust, was slain by human curse
where do i turn to try and find an uninfected person

peace

kobaz
08-19-2005, 07:00 AM
think it's very good....my opinion,the first 6 lines are slightly better than the rest&
the line 'capitalism... disease spread by corporations' is ruining the whole verse
keep it up!

J.T.S.
08-19-2005, 12:32 PM
Dope verse winte still doing ya thing, that's what's up!

G...
08-19-2005, 03:55 PM
Very nice winte. Ayo, hit me up sometime [PM or MSN] if you still wanna collab man. ONE

BlaK FuRYaN
08-19-2005, 05:54 PM
all opinions and criticism is appreciated

feelin kinda weak, i'm a lost exhausted soul
ride on ships of life but i've almost lost control
the currents of fate, force me down a river
led by intuition i see a village burn to cinders
flaming thoughts that searched out evil ministers
but their greed even makes them feel kinda innocent
capitalism... disease spread by corporations
was leaked in flows of spirit next to halls of satan - This line went well together

i busted in... wearing heavens karma
shined self-knowledge, embedded in my armour - I also liked this line
was wise not blinded by lost cerebral pirates - I aint gonna pretend i know whut this meant!)
misguided by negativity, sailed, and always find it
thats why i remain loyal, the silent silver lion
kept heart warmed by friends locked in tight alliance
this misled trust, was slain by human curse
where do i turn to try and find an uninfected person - i like the meaning in this line and sometimes feel the same way about people in my neighbourhood

peace

YOU DROPPED SOME LINE WHIC I WOULD SAY ARE DECENT.....I BLATENT PREFER THE MORE LYRICAL SIDE OF YOUR SELF.....COMES ACROSS AS EFFORTLES SKRIPTIN....BUT THATS COZ I KNOW WHUT YOUR CAPABLE OF.....BUT I LIKED SOME PARTS....


PEACE

GuardianOne
08-21-2005, 04:02 AM
Yes it flowed well. Was trying to capture your drift here? What does that title stand for? But it was a nice verse.

Peace

ABOVE
08-21-2005, 04:14 AM
yo what up g-1 the taoist above just browsing chosen one in this bitch peace im out

Killer Falcon
08-21-2005, 05:31 PM
thanks for the feedback everyone, i'll crit some more when i get a bit more time.
Yes it flowed well. Was trying to capture your drift here? What does that title stand for? But it was a nice verse.

Peacei'm not sure what the title means, its for a collaboration track i'm working on with a polish producer/mc who is also going to rhyme on the track

peace

sd-cd
08-22-2005, 05:02 PM
Yo, this is Reach the Sun here, I'm producing this track and I made the beat called "Tabula Rasa".

Tabula rasa is from latin "white card". So something clean...When you are born you are tabula rasa...so you don't see the shitty things around you. But as you get older you have to you have to fight with such things....You're not Tabula rasa any more...

Winte's verse great. PEACE.

Reach the Sun (DS)

GuardianOne
08-23-2005, 12:35 AM
yo what up g-1 the taoist above just browsing chosen one in this bitch peace im out
Peace, Above, and DS (Reach The Sun). Thanx for the explanation, yah it is a good concept. And iam sure all of you will bring out a good beatz and trackz.

Hope you (DS) also post some lyrics here.

Peace
PS: Keep posting

sd-cd
08-23-2005, 04:17 AM
Yeah, I got my lyrics to this track, but It's in polish language.

It looks like that:

tabula rasa/ jak zaraza
wyszła z cienia
nic nie robienia fala w nic nie wierzenia
psychiczna bariera jest jak więznienna cela
koniec pierdolenia
że świat się nie zmienia
od zarania dziejów postanawiasz przed wyborem
nie którą wezmę drogę lecz jak daleko dojdę
bez rozpaczy haszczy na ile sił mi starczy
czy muszę się wyłączyć byś nie musiał ścieżki znaczyć ?
jak na ziemię padnę i poczuję że nie wstanę
kto pomyśli o mnie - i kto ze mną zostanie
gdy kleknę w podzięce i złożę swoję ręce
zapukam do ciebie będziesz pytał czy w to wierzę?
głowa ciężka kamień czaszkę rozpierdala
czasem mam te chwile nie wiem po co sie staram
efekt działania nie odzwierciedla próby
ja wciąż jednak wierzę - że to nie są tylko nuty

>>> PEACE.

sd-cd
07-30-2006, 07:17 PM
Winte are you alive?

What's up with Tabula Rasa?

I wrote to Pablo Baluba...I didn't have a contact to you....


PEACE.......

jallainINS
07-30-2006, 07:23 PM
tabula rasa means 'clean slate'. like what the other person said u are when ur born. cuz ur born with a clean slate cuz you have done no wrong and have not sinned yet. and in christianity when you are born again you are given another tabula rasa, another clean slate.

Logik1991
08-01-2006, 02:55 AM
damn i thought the tabula rasa was a dance

anyways... feelin the drop man , precise

sd-cd
09-06-2007, 01:20 PM
The album's coming soon! :)

Peace!