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BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-19-2005, 03:07 PM
Alright after reading G's poem I think we need a Poetry thread in the Temple

I'll start off with this



ever see birds fly at night?? birds teethered together.. ever see the sky at night?? words turned to vapor outfield player errors and favors major league movements made with in layers.. distractions tailored a 3 piece suits' the Savior?? compound fractures litter the foundation we cater.. gestating raider relations lattitude and longitude activate the station.. missle launch gravity distorting magnetic bursts never rehearsed.. served up asthetics work horses disperse with blinders a pigeons purring chirp sirens sound crackers and cookies the ensueing visions hurt alligator skin with a velvet plush curse an albino absorbing the worse exposing sun suicide residue and rickety rides diping they dive straight shooter not an aimer but a hooter get the subwoofer lavishly subdue ya.. fuck ya'll laws microsoft computers rule ya'll.. diamond bits centered they drill right through ya.. grab the ruler an measure your line physical space magnified through my eyes spiritual fools are hypnotized ..God is in you open ya eyes or be defined to stand on one side and defend and fight blindly as the 4 corners close in on your mind failed strategy and design a tragedy of your crime..

tekunique
08-19-2005, 03:15 PM
the big man at it again.. i'll read it when i get home, as im off from work soon. peace.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-19-2005, 06:54 PM
PEaCE SpOK3N

Fragmented
08-19-2005, 08:27 PM
i'll spit this piece for godless freaks, who drops are crocks in altered speech,
i'll rob the street in public feats, insight the beat to bind the weak
define whats deep refine and seeks, inside this steep where failure creaks
remind these beasts inside is bleak, rewind this piece combine with streaks

peace i got bored

J.T.S.
08-19-2005, 10:16 PM
Scarred (hood Life)

Thought you were set free, unaware slaves controlled by tha powers that be watchin' me
Dollar signs tha god of society, it imprisons us mentally
eyes see materials as the way out, don't you know fads play out
Sometimes i stay out on tha block, watching the seeds runnin' their mouths
About the money, hoes, and cars their so far from reality
Next month i read about one of them in the obituary
It scars me to think our seeds are becoming extinct
Gone in tha blink of an eye, why? Theyv'e been fed lies
No matter how hard i try some seem impossible to reach
With no fathers to teach them the trials of manhood
They end up down, and out up to no damn good
in the hood it seems to be positive is to be soft
Our babies are lost lookin' for love theyv'e never received
The same tainted theme, so they indulge in pussy, liquior, and weed
A high to overcome the depression, a role model's what they need
Claiming a street they don't own, in out of jail until theyr'e gone
Mothers mourn then move on, i tell em' stay strong
How long will the seeds suffer and nothings being done
To fix this crisis poverty's paradise we stuck in tha slums
Every night justs gets worse, another casket in tha dirt
I work to make ends meet and to provide for my family
and live out the path allah has planned for me

G...
08-20-2005, 05:09 AM
I will drop any of my freestyle/quick poetry peices in here from now on. Good work everyone. ONE

Queen Of Poetry
08-20-2005, 09:16 AM
Tight verses everyone.......thx.

SurreaL
08-20-2005, 10:06 AM
When it's time for you to go, how would you feel?
Would you kneel down and pray to god?
or would you keep it real, and give the nod.
Paintin' the picture, I emphasis death in the scripture,
My soul is sold, Once secured like a fixture.
But since death is at the doorway, no need to keep him waiting,
open the door, felt a sudden chill, followed by my mind fading.
Dream's past, vision's so real, it distorted my reality,
then shortly followed by the ever dramatic fatality.
Is there a heaven or hell?, I don't really know where i'm going,
without guidance, I'll drift into limbo without even knowing.
Follow me on this journey, through the vision's to come,
I've seen death through my own eye's, and it's yet to even begun.
Seen heaven and hell, everyone has, but no need for praying,
just burn out my candle, and prepare my after life before the decaying.

blackwisdom
08-21-2005, 03:12 PM
How can a woman containing en-richened melanin eyes
Become so brainwashed and Europeanized
Iím mesmerized at how much the zombie effect has spread
My people walk these streets, mostly, spiritually dead
I dread talking to my peeps about mind elevation
Because it becomes such a one sided conversation
With no knowledge shared, cause itís just me schooling
But they ainít listening so who am I fooling
They think it sounds cool and yeah he reads lots of books
But Iím viewed as thief when only as a child I was a crook
Stealing comic books and candy trying to live the american dream
When in actuality Africa should always be my only theme
We played war as children instead of building a nation
With parents absent, working, we tuned into our tell-lie-vision stations
To replace the love and care, thatís why we blast up our music
To rock us to sleep, without the rhythm I would loose it
But I just vibe and try to assist others to thrive only to get hurt
Living the life that I lead will always require ample work
But Iím willing to die for what I believe and give you my life
So never tell me that what Iím striving for isnít right
When all I want is the jewels and to shed a bit of light
All I ask is that my Creator assists me to shine like a pipe
Blowing ďawayĒ the fog of the lies that have been accepted as the truth
When I pass I pray that people will remember me for loving the youth

peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-21-2005, 09:56 PM
all my life I've looked to the skies,
all my life my tears have dried,
all my life I seek what I think is best
all my life I've repeatedly burned my nest,
all my life I've watched these viscious cycles,
all my life I've feared when the night falls,
lived in the slums projects and broken homes,
as I still strive to understand the unknowns,
take my money my shelter food and clothes,
but you'll never understand how family's love forever grows...

G...
08-22-2005, 08:48 AM
General Jottings ~ World Of Havoc

What I see is a world of havoc, lacking the magic,
Thay my mind creates from plastic covering the realness, your actors,
In a fake script where you talk this nonsense that's purely non-relevant,
I'm an artist that's taking steps bigger than those of an elephant,
What I see is your hate-filled looks, but your covering up,
'Cause political correctness has you with news from such and such,
Now your warped, havoc's come, and now we lost all the magic,
Your actors in a cinema-scope screen, purely fabric.

Born Ruler I
08-22-2005, 09:16 AM
I rhyme 4 the girl who knows why the Caged Bird sings
but doesn't know Maya Angelou
she only wishes to erase the time
the sand that blew
in her hourglass every second feels like hours pass
she still smells the lingering oder of cigerettes and sour mash
keep your head up, Queen
move wise so you can power past this obstacle
if you have to
find a mob to tackle who attacked you
your physical virtue
don't let him hit you or hurt you
don't let you desert you
stand strong, here's a poem for you to lean on
I have a shoulder that can help hold the boulder of depression
despair can teach a lesson of repair
and while you learn this lesson, Queen, I'll always be there
and be aware
there are more who have survived, lived and prospered
NIGGA! If she don't want your offer, GET UP OFF HER!
plus, I heard in prison a rapist's ass is softer
enough about you
my thoughts are of her

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-22-2005, 02:32 PM
Nice Additions Spoken, Born, and G

Lets keep going...



I go thru life with head held high,
sometimes I fall like the rain from the sky,
cumulus clouds form and add weight to the blue,
I sometimes become unglued by my moves,
I'm spontaneous and artistic a very volitle mix,
I can create images that can cause eyes to transfix,
but I can Also do things that can make people pissed,
because I'm unpredictable my heart is on my sleeve,
I can cry.. I can beat... I can Love.. I can Defeat,
I can Build... I can Destroy... but I'd rather just be me,
an Optimistic person that wants to set society free....

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-23-2005, 04:35 PM
add on!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-24-2005, 04:26 PM
during tragic events we gather and vent,
why do we see eachother when someone is spent,
why do we cry in rage and sob in pain?
why is it my heart beats to the falling rain?
when grey storm clouds cover the skies,
rumbling thunder sounds and lightening arise,
as fires ignite from the strikes,
the creatures run for their life,
as the fire dies new growth comes alive,
death feeds life these cycles collide...

ElusiveFugitive
08-24-2005, 07:43 PM
wrote this verse in reverse, lost as I rehearse,
with my lips pursed, knowing only a love so strong 1000 chests burst,
broke a deadly curse, reminisce the caper,
crazy thoughts of you melt onto paper,
ends of the earth is where I'll take ya

this young buck watched you down the street,
soul suffocating, silky heat
damn near fell right off my seat
my jaw was resting on my feet!
first night spent together.
we drowned in passionate pools of pleasure
exceeding measures of mortal men
hit it at a perfect 10
serenade you softly in a state of total zen

ashamed, those times mind games were played,
the hurtful names, allaying blame,
I even lied to myself...
gotta leave pride & ego on the shelf
you & I together the finest wealth

forever I will praise, your displays of sacrificing ways,
while you walked the game I terminally talked
sought to tame my wayward thought
headline on front page news reports,
now that scandalous life's outlined in chalk

truest romance...it pushes on through real life situations,
we wept together as our first childs unborn life was taken,
took the man in me to grasp hold of sanity
alone at night, in the window burns candlelight,
wasnt right, hurt so we'd fight,
I'd plead walk away, sad but true,
trouble ensued, heartless things I'd do when I felt used

time passed, after hard lessons learned, finally the winds turned,
whole time for you my heart yearned,
too concerned about pride or money earned,
countless times my hands were burnt
realise how much I've won, anthem sung,
your strengths live proudly in the eyes of our children.

down mist-covered mountains, water rushes back to sea
profound spirit washing over me
intangible roots link land & family
blessed you in my vicinity,
and this amazing ability to articulate my unflinching loyalty
for knowing, that forever our souls are intertwined in perpetual unity
has set me free...

Elusive-Fugitive

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-28-2005, 12:58 AM
damn that deep and it has an affect on the reader

PEaCE

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-28-2005, 12:45 PM
the gates of heaven open only to close emotions,
extortion in the fiery pitts of hell your slowly frozen,
soul corrosion fragile passive movements broken,
arching arson scorching smolding snouts snortin,
muddy matter molding massive patterns sorting,
a couple courting hand holding uncle sams pointing,
destroying family structure Destro cobra commander corrupters,
Gi Joe's suffer taken from Lovers lives swept under covers,
killing our brothers pillaging others as mothers cry and suffer...

ElusiveFugitive
08-28-2005, 04:09 PM
Thanks Ben, appreciate the feedback. It was a great idea setting up this thread ...Uppin' all the writers who have posted! Keep the ink flowing

ONE LOVE

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-28-2005, 10:12 PM
octopus ink clouds covering inside the sink think fish tanks that stink a giant squids beak puncturing sperm whales killer whales lightning leaps dead seal meat crushing teeth soft veal meat caged obesity the swelling sea bullsharks mobbin deep groupers swallowing fish bigger than you and me bioluminescants chromataphor abyss message large pupil lenses satellite space age expenses lack of rights building jails education stales death to nations prevails passive ships set sail

PsYkOsUs
08-28-2005, 10:31 PM
an old favorite:




\\\::~ ABSENCE OF LIGHT ~::///





as passionless activists write, fascists recite in the absence of light
askiní for christ in the blackness of night... bastards panic in fright with ravenous spite
imagine the sight as the vatican fights our rationless practice of rights
pacifist knights attackiní the dragons of plight for fractions of life
with hazardous might, savages brandish a knife and vanish from sight
banishedíem twice; fiends hackiní with hatchets of ice; wreak havoc, ravaginí mics
witness the precision of four; spirits were maliciously torn by the contradictiní intentions of lords
the vicious inflictions of war; politicians christened with horns
violently written compositions of gore, driven by swords
divisive religions were born, your malignant intuition forlorn; rivet critical conditions of storms
prolific visions forewarned your exquisite depictions of horror
crucifixions with thorns, crimson liquids beginniní to pour
i invented the pain that wrenches your brain; injected the bane
those contendiní my reign feigned misdirected peasants in chains; iím rendered insane
aggressive descendants of rage were sentenced to graves imbedded in flames
horrendous rains reddened the plains, as effervescent legends were slain
youíll forever treasure the shame, surrender you vein; ancient weapons and lesson were gained
a treacherous fame... send in the brethren of armageddon in vain






Copyright © 2002 Psykosus, The Soulless Survivalist

MaXiMus Da MaNtis
08-28-2005, 10:41 PM
The planets youths in shackles and mother earth is cracked in half yo
Weíve forged battles outcomes by makin us mammals eat man bro
But the god aint breeding cattle but bringing my wrath yo to make ya brain rattle
Its sad thou how we manage to live our life 86 years before the almighty disintegrates mans soul
The slightest shift of magnetic force placed the planet on a destruction course
From the days of swinging swords on a horse to missiles landing on a catts porch
Niggas forced to live without the love of they corpse while execís got 4 or more porches
Poisoned orchids planted to scorn the ghetto roses thistles left to poke at the last of the rodents
Some true left within but lifeless with no motion caused to live life in a dry ocean
Morbid potion induced in a system down the throats of the chosen
So a man has rosin from the midst of the shadows bringing incisive light from deep within the gallows
A gallant figure knowledge poured from the chalice of the reaper
No mic has shadowed but been disfigured and I drop history to you meager
Come wit da hottest ether bound from the mountains
Reppin from the highest point of my housing-thousands arose like the foot clan of shoalin
Arrows pouncing like needles shot in da air alignments arise from a field as spectators stare
Hippies forced to cut off they hair and known thugs run in despair
Da maximus has shed accurate plots of the government-whose runnin it
And why da poor take the cunning hits Ö.I GUESS FOR SURVIVAL

GuardianOne
08-29-2005, 02:34 AM
You guys have set a high standard in this thread, i can't even comment on most of the verses here i just read.


Peace

GuardianOne
08-29-2005, 02:41 AM
" Don't yet rejoice, in what had been overcomed, for that was the past, which was later suceeded, afterward must have been a while, to explain all the goings, truth was only kept amongst, those which needed to know, only to be mentioned, but not to be known, and there are many more situations to thrill, and will remain, to go forward after, all that was but now is completed, yet one to not change, willed to see continuation, in a revolved cycle, which was once done, repeated and not was it once noticed, thats how it went, of its surviving life time, those who witnessed, could experience it all over again, through their memory mind".

Dae Ja Nae
08-29-2005, 07:28 AM
Wow ... it's nice to come back and see something like this jumping off in the Temple. Maybe now we can all replace all of our lost jewels with some even greater ones. Props to you Bigben for resetting it off ;).

Peace, Luv and Respect Papi

Dae Ja Nae
08-29-2005, 07:33 AM
Wow ... it's nice to come back and see something like this jumping off in the Temple. Maybe now we can all replace all of our lost jewels with some even greater ones. Props to you Bigben for resetting it off ;).

Peace, Luv and Respect Papithis is an old piece

*An Unnecessary Tragedy

A child left alone to roam with no place to call her own
a heart once warm-now broken, cold and hard like stone
love is something sheís never known,
so her feelings of hatred are full blown
misguided, pride subsided, bitter and cold to the bone
the place she once called home, forgotten, only memories of her past life
enveloped in a cyclone of self destruction, grief and strife
she walks the streets and leaves behind her own trail of tears
facing obstacles while climbing hills, burdened down with anguish and fear
her pain is so severe that she wishes she could disappear
the code of the homeless are the only rules to which sheís ever adhered
stuck in a cycle of the surreal,
a relentless wheel unable to persevere
with a hunger that canít be concealed,
a life of crime and prostitution beginning to have more appeal
in the face of danger, sheís transformed into a woman of the night
a dreadful plight that puts humiliation within her line of sight
cohorts filled with spite,
shame extinguished her light
malevolent thoughts now replace her previous feelings of fright
consumed by immorality
no sense of rationality
acts of brutality have forever altered her personality
coupled with a mentality that stemmed from her venality
a new statistic since the breakdown that caused her current state of duality
multiple personalities
they now mask any trace of previous originality
her fatality a sad reality ... as I read about her life
learning through this paper that she was a beloved daughter, mother and wife
words of sorrow so consice, but who pays the ultimate price?
shouldíve, couldíve, and wouldíve-too late, they simply wonít suffice
some words of advice ... we should all think twice,
before passing judgment on a person without knowing the story of their life
see, the words you say today could possibly save someone tomorrow
lift them out of their sorrow
so in grief and despair they wonít wallow
maybe even swallow ...
the pride that might lead to a rash decision
and enable them to envision,
hope, with a great desire for liviní
instead of the condemning darkness of a self contained prison ....




we all need to be aware of the power of our words!

Peace

Jeru
08-29-2005, 01:41 PM
Damn it's back, never even noticed it :$

D.S. Supreme
08-29-2005, 03:07 PM
Peace all,

this is my first time submitting my thoughts on-line so any feedback would be cool.


"You Already Know"

Who am I?...I am that thing that existed
since before the beginning.
Fuck a Big Bang Theory, clearly I brought
myself into manifestation as the creation
of the dead and the living.
This is no metaphor nor riddle, just a simple
question, a quest for the truth to see if you
knew, Who am I?...Well it's kinda hard to
explain. See I take on many forms,
some complex others plane. No name just
mostly descriptions, written in twisted up
scriptures. Stolen from princes over centuries
who built pyramids in Egypt for me.
Still my story goes untold in this cold world.
I'm often forgotten, the rotten and dying
Who am I?...The gift and the curse, the better
of the best, the less of the worst. The hunger
and thirst felt by evey kid in every project,
the object of satisfaction. Reason you be asking me
to have shit and you ain't never answer my question,
Who am I?...You don't even know me still you wanna
control me and flaunt me on some phoney
paper me and call it money. For sure that's not me.
Another form of trickery to slave me. They wanna
slay me, they hate me cuz i got nothing but love but,
Who am I?...I am the inside and outside of everything,
literally living invisibly for eternity. I am something to
feel deep in your heart, yet nothing. But if you turn
the lights off you can see me in the dark. I hear what
you say, and speak when you talk.
I am reality. Given the name God. Even with all that
said I'm still scared most don't know Who I Am!

WAKE THE FUCK UP!!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-29-2005, 10:18 PM
PEaCE i'm just on a poetic spree forming words together let them lay as they be layed messages for those that can see third eyes open but what do they see?? a humming birds flight or a horrible family fight?? a man dying inside with sorrow painted eyes?? a womans self esteem lowered as monsters scheme using up her dreams a predator only preys on the ones that fall astray or a injured soul of shame why is the world in flames??

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-29-2005, 10:26 PM
my eyes just hurt from the unbearable earth submersed in work only to be burnt and spent pockets full of lent windows fully tint brightness blocked as shallow pigeons and peacocks flock a butchers bloody smock the mind meld tactics of Mr. Spock beam me up Scotty its getting hot decapitated heads for naught wrought the wrath my fingers smash and jab this keyboards making me mad this world is forever wrapped in glad cling wrap seen through history only to beam back visions of misery only to steam trap the hydrated sweat replenish my body when i'm already spent good luck scambling money just to pay the fuckin rent

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-29-2005, 10:39 PM
well get the fuck out the foyer embroiled in a battle of wits the cattle is hit mad paddles are hit ping pong tables of lawyers loop hole spoilers laws made to encrypt tales failed to enlist pails full of bile slowly are tipped poured over shit pockets full of bits bacon forsaken taken told stories shake n bake unfolding enslavement broken homes oragami folds lack of compassion is the street codes sheeps sold shaved for fortunes untold as the stewed beef simmers slow spiced with a bitter blow nights turn to winter cold days become pitiful lives turn to dollar signs greed will only gratify your soul grows old and liquify's Lucifer sips and takes your life....

ElusiveFugitive
08-29-2005, 11:15 PM
SUMMERTIME

my beautiful, brown skinned princess,
a momentous dream, immensely intense,
offering incense to honor gift thats heaven-scent
up until the birthing day, my brain a canvas of sprayed thought like hood graffiti,
layered with one million reasons why this child would need me,
teach her to recite genealogy, with rich tales woven of unwritten mythology
impart skills of elusive life methodology,
remain fugitive at heart in worlds of subliminal, target marketed technology

play the role of father, teacher, a philosophical role model,
the one at 3am to get up, change nappies & warm a milk bottle
shape and hone her mind, teach about the many flaws of mankind
hope to become best friends, and I intend, to defend her fiercely 'til the end

this newborn, adorned in fine egyptian cotton and other fabrics,
remember how to count in synergy mathematics?
now 1 + 1 = 4, not 2 or even 3 'cos its 2nd time round for me,
admittedly sometimes I'm doubtful of my ability
to provide for a 4 person family,
but I continue to excel, without bragging I intuitively let it happen
and things falls together like 31st December,
I remember the way I stared into the embers,
of the blunt end, extend my hand to old friends...
sharing laughs, crack a beer; scent of change is in the air,
glaring truth in the New Year; yeah...thinking of my career
I'm making my way now, acquiring taste of full cream milk from a cash cow,
KAPOW...like superheroes it hit me, damn! Im a grown man,
living a 5 year plan, so I ignore shallow demands
I learnt to stand, by working the hard earth with my own two hands
not prepared to waste my life struggling in quicksand...

and then she smiles, something so surreal and sweet makes all the shit worthwhile
I'd run 10,000 miles just to see it on her dial, stare awhile
file it to memory so even if stranded on a desert isle,
starving to death, being eaten by a crocodile or some other vicious reptile
I'd be at peace, complete, like the first love of a juvenile...

my little girl...I would set fire to the whole world
at dusk just to keep you warm, then at dawn,
summon a torrential thunderstorm,
so we could jump in the puddles,
then go inside guzzle cocoa,
while we dry off, play with jigsaw puzzles,
never going to let my priorities get muddled

ain' got no time for disbelievers & their negativity,
pays not to meddle in the affairs of the heart & family
you obviously dont know me or have a fucken clue about my capabilities
pity, the fools who stricken with terminal disabilities
dont bother pulling up at my curb, study the words
of Eminem's Mockingbird, anthem heard by real men,
feelin' the real struggle in the suburbs
proverbs of real life, staunch guardians of the REAL world...
haters watch close as I smile, and let my middle finger unfurl

Elusive-Fugitive

GuardianOne
08-30-2005, 12:51 AM
Definitions

" Occupations ment, though better experiences challenged the faults, other moments went unexpected, for those that had to choose their own work, teams parted to activate the cause, reactions proposed to accept the rest, while some tribes tried to kill each one, as the spirits came and took a glance, well informed yet kept to continuous methods, when they started to perform, all that had taken notice plus noted of, esteems with devious active distructions, whilst was unable to recall, with those later postponed".

Fragmented
08-30-2005, 01:27 AM
A congragation of bombed illations rips through nations
purpoused equation revalation and savage desperation
condensation fades where weather vein corrodes in pain
realisation degrades sickness reign in descriptive of gain
bare witness to figures listed ingrain withered and plain


peace just a little 5 lines before i go out peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-30-2005, 05:52 PM
PEaCE BORN nice addition

StormCloud welcome back

Guardian keep'em coming

Dae this is your thread baby do your thing!!!

Blackw.i.s.d.o.m. fuse them visions!!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-30-2005, 06:01 PM
money can corrupt happiness turn it into rich shallow sadness buying friends trust is damaged searching for love while gold diggers scavange money buys materials but materials quickly vanish Love is a state of mind over trust and time built and primed if you have happiness then money you'll find cream can fracture your foundation if the temptations glimmer and shine compared to dimmer dank times remember the rich divorce a lot and search for naught as money is there addiction causing friction that easily grinds a relationship down over time floating in money can drown the blind! feed our children and invoke new crimes if you search for happiness in wealth you're blind if you find happiness in health you're fine money used to instill happiness confines...

blackwisdom
08-30-2005, 06:33 PM
I haven't read everything yet but I'm loving the vibe
It seems like poetry is the only time I feel alive
Well besides when I chill with my fam and build with my peeps
Or learn some lessons from people that get denied in the streets
I take journeys and try not to throw my family off key
When all I'm trying to do is get myself completly free
It's time to eat and yeah I know this isn't the freestyle chamber
But I had to kick a verse to show that I'm not being a stranger
I leave you with the words "Peace Be Unto You"
Lets build and congrigate cause this is how us poets do

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-30-2005, 10:43 PM
some random thoughts I quickly jotted...

congregated minds equate an open thinking box
constipated rhymes create shitty covered cocks

lincoln logs are building blocks in adolescent thoughts
cinder blocks are bombed and dropped in terroristic plots

fishes that are hooked then sorted... pinchers reflex you're paying for it
midget dwarf diminutive in court... fidget hoarse innocense contorts

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-30-2005, 11:03 PM
play the role of father, teacher, a philosophical role model,
the one at 3am to get up, change nappies & warm a milk bottle
shape and hone her mind, teach about the many flaws of mankind
hope to become best friends, and I intend, to defend her fiercely 'til the end


now 1 + 1 = 4, not 2 or even 3 'cos its 2nd time round for me,
admittedly sometimes I'm doubtful of my ability
to provide for a 4 person family,
but I continue to excel, without bragging I intuitively let it happen
and things falls together like 31st December,
I remember the way I stared into the embers,
of the blunt end, extend my hand to old friends...
sharing laughs, crack a beer; scent of change is in the air,
glaring truth in the New Year; yeah...thinking of my career

living a 5 year plan, so I ignore shallow demands
I learnt to stand, by working the hard earth with my own two hands
not prepared to waste my life struggling in quicksand...


ain' got no time for disbelievers & their negativity,
pays not to meddle in the affairs of the heart & family
you obviously dont know me or have a fucken clue about my capabilities
pity, the fools who stricken with terminal disabilities

beautifully written..PEaCE

Fragmented
08-31-2005, 04:04 AM
peace everybody and i'll post a full piece in here in like 3 weeks i haven't got time for full length writting at the mo got degree work to sort out

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-31-2005, 11:08 AM
yeah religion is a system of control...PEaCE SPoK3N

J.T.S.
08-31-2005, 03:42 PM
Who's God??

Is he a spook in the sky? Atheists demand proof have we been spoofed to believe lies
Have we been deceived by fictious stories of heaven n' hell when we die?
Churches defeat the purpose of finding what's beneath the surface
Wage war on sinners as if their free of sin, christians started crusifixion
Slaughtered indians, a trail of tears history is missing facts
I'm here to bring you back and awaken sleepy heads from their naps
Even scriptures have been tainted it's been stated by historians
Ya'll ignoring them mislead by Satan, hating the truth
Pastors, and preachers fool you with their interpretations of the truth

WARPATH
08-31-2005, 04:25 PM
we're trapped in a world of pleasure and pain
where even sexual encounters are one in the same
and tyrants of men steal wives of the slain
while the suffering stay humble and the rich always complain
and alcholic beverages are produced from the grain
while there's children who starve when bread can be made by the same

I smell the weight of a diaper from a baby neglected
I see a woman thown on the streets after her house was inspected
I hear a crack head beg for change cuz he like's pleasure injected
I feel my body grow week from all these things- it's infected
a world where it's better to be feared then respected

Dae Ja Nae
08-31-2005, 05:23 PM
PEaCE BORN nice addition

StormCloud welcome back

Guardian keep'em coming

Dae this is your thread baby do your thing!!!

Blackw.i.s.d.o.m. fuse them visions!!!

;););) ... Thx Ben, I think I will ...


Charging_Soldier

we're trapped in a world of pleasure and pain
where even sexual encounters are one in the same
and tyrants of men steal wives of the slain
while the suffering stay humble and the rich always complain
and alcholic beverages are produced from the grain
while there's children who starve when bread can be made by the same

I smell the weight of a diaper from a baby neglected
I see a woman thown on the streets after her house was inspected
I hear a crack head beg for change cuz he like's pleasure injected
I feel my body grow week from all these things- it's infected
a world where it's better to be feared then respected

Dae

Peace to all the poets dropping' the mad lines
weather it be food for thought or simple nourishment for the mind
as the bells of life chime, they take me back to a time
when a woman had no worries and thoughts were blurry when it came to crime
it all seems so distant because the world is full of ills
sending shivers up my spine while leaving my flesh covered with chills
no one gives a fuck about the thrills
cuz, it's only momentary elation
a snap back to reality makes one envision the vast frustration
... complications holding us down
while the higher ups plaster on frowns
swimming in a sea of luxury while the rest of us just drown
they're selfishly holding the life boats with the hopes that keep us afloat
teasing us like little children and stringing us along like fiends on dope
to hell with all their bullshit attempts to sell us these dreams of freedom
brainwashed by sugarcoated lines that have the flock going wherever they choose to lead them
but I'll rebel ...
cuz see, a sister wants out of this cell
I don't give a damn about this melting pot they call America because to me it's synonymous with hell
it's like living a death sentence that been wrongly opposed upon me
still suppressed and oppressed in a land where we're supposed to be free
so, fuck the 40 acres and a mule, how about real employment with descent wages
and owning a home and an automobile without prices and taxes being so outrageous
how about a free collage education and some muthafuckin' healthcare
you know, some real shit for the "children" instead of the endless grip of welfare
help solidify this "future" that you claim they're supposed to be
because the future as it stands right now appears to me to be quite bleak
the only thing our government does is procrastinate and hesitate
putting our lives on the back burner, not giving a damn about out fate
I feel hopeless at times, like I'm trapped in a maze with no escape
That's just how it seems ...
I just want to spread my wing and take flight to a land of lost dreams
where people really care about their fellow man first, and give a fuck about the possessions and the cream
I'm not just blowing off some steam, I'm giving a voice to some real issues
trying to let the masses of children know "I'M STILL WITH YOU"
hopefully others will feel my message so that I won't have to stand alone
unite under the flags of what right so that we can provide our children with a "HOME"


Peace

ElusiveFugitive
08-31-2005, 07:14 PM
Ups to Ben putting out some serious verses & keeping the energy up...
Dae your 2 posts here are fantastic & inspiring, loaded with armor piercing truth.
Spoken, digging your original style and confrontative perspective on religion,
Black W.I.S.D.O.M taking it back to the essence, peace be upon you brother. Look forward to reading more from you
Charging Soldier- Deep, insightful & beautifully worded. A different approach to some of the material I've read from you. Keepin' it real in the badlandz!

Peace to everyone postin' in here. Shit is high class, no doubt. Too many quotables to even try to specifically mention them all, lets keep building!

ONE LOVE

GuardianOne
09-01-2005, 12:28 AM
Unresolved

" Was misled by the lying honesty, the faith that was given to, theirs was all fake, no one told anyone, as they just left one to the misguided way, to them it was all fun, distroying anothers life, which was no help, for one mistake, that seemed too simple to be done, was performed by one who didn't have knowledge of it, they left their cause with no purpose, thats whats been bringing down, all those amongst, less priviledges for they where not helped accordingly from the beginning".

Qwiffersniffer
09-01-2005, 12:33 AM
http://www.soundclick.com/artist/1/quartense_music.htm (http://www.soundclick.com/artist/1/quartense_music.htm)

Dae Ja Nae
09-01-2005, 06:06 PM
How can a woman containing en-richened melanin eyes
Become so brainwashed and Europeanized
Iím mesmerized at how much the zombie effect has spread
My people walk these streets, mostly, spiritually dead
I dread talking to my peeps about mind elevation
Because it becomes such a one sided conversation
With no knowledge shared, cause itís just me schooling
But they ainít listening so who am I fooling
They think it sounds cool and yeah he reads lots of books
But Iím viewed as thief when only as a child I was a crook
Stealing comic books and candy trying to live the american dream
When in actuality Africa should always be my only theme
We played war as children instead of building a nation
With parents absent, working, we tuned into our tell-lie-vision stations
To replace the love and care, thatís why we blast up our music
To rock us to sleep, without the rhythm I would loose it
But I just vibe and try to assist others to thrive only to get hurt
Living the life that I lead will always require ample work
But Iím willing to die for what I believe and give you my life
So never tell me that what Iím striving for isnít right
When all I want is the jewels and to shed a bit of light
All I ask is that my Creator assists me to shine like a pipe
Blowing ďawayĒ the fog of the lies that have been accepted as the truth
When I pass I pray that people will remember me for loving the youth

peace
You know I gots ta keep it "Dae" lol ... I will, in time, drop some feed on all these beautiful jewels, but I thought I would start with this one first. Black this piece was on some minds eye elevation, no doubt. You always come across to me as a warrior, always fighting for truth and righteousness. You and your words always leave me with a strong, deep feeing of pride. Keep ringing the bells of truth my brother, and I will stay forever rocking.


Peace and One Luv

Dae Ja Nae
09-01-2005, 06:22 PM
Alright after reading G's poem I think we need a Poetry thread in the Temple

I'll start off with this



ever see birds fly at night?? birds teethered together.. ever see the sky at night?? words turned to vapor outfield player errors and favors major league movements made with in layers.. distractions tailored a 3 piece suits' the Savior?? compound fractures litter the foundation we cater.. gestating raider relations lattitude and longitude activate the station.. missle launch gravity distorting magnetic bursts never rehearsed.. served up asthetics work horses disperse with blinders a pigeons purring chirp sirens sound crackers and cookies the ensueing visions hurt alligator skin with a velvet plush curse an albino absorbing the worse exposing sun suicide residue and rickety rides diping they dive straight shooter not an aimer but a hooter get the subwoofer lavishly subdue ya.. fuck ya'll laws microsoft computers rule ya'll.. diamond bits centered they drill right through ya.. grab the ruler an measure your line physical space magnified through my eyes spiritual fools are hypnotized ..God is in you open ya eyes or be defined to stand on one side and defend and fight blindly as the 4 corners close in on your mind failed strategy and design a tragedy of your crime..
Damn Ben, this shit was like ... amazin'. It's like you open up your mouth and pure fire just comes blazing out. I'm always like whoa after reading something like this from you. You stay on some revolutionary type shit. Big ups to you homie for always holding it down.

Peace

Dae Ja Nae
09-01-2005, 06:32 PM
The Rendition of apocalypse...No more superstitions or hypothesis


The final minutes weren't vital, witness religion in the populous
Decisions of marriage were vicious, apparently finishin the obvious
Extinction of parents, incisions u carried, is sickenin' the ominous
My wishes of knowledge has been banned-from-the-mind's-plains
Reality would sicken it, and leave me amped-up-in-crime-rates
No more praying, no more hope, not even 1 hand-up-to-rhyme-great
Was Focused on finishin my life, cause she passed-up-from-my-date
Whether it was my sense of humor, or sarcasm i carried inside me
Never da love I sent to woo her, i start laughin from various IVs
Tryin to hide the pain, denial would nearly cause me to end it
Cryin inside my veins; cenile and clearly lost in my sentence
Slicing open my arms, n entertained by the red goo that slips out
Writing poems at dark, as yesterday wasn't yet too enriched now
Rememberin that heart break'll cause me to go insane and collapse
Forever will my arms make me claw at the open vein, and alas
Love isn't for da weak at heart n time has made me learn da lesson
But wishes never needed smarts to try n make me earn my essence
Curiosity never killed the adolescence, that only made me realize
Pure philosophy isn't real w/o a message, my own mistakes keep me alive
So therefore, I found out that livin isn't really a true option
Declare war; the loud sounds are listened when a city regroups often
Is Life worth it? To live thru each day and admit that its a De-Ja-Vu
Tonites purpose: Admit your cliche', and insist that its a made-up view
Who's to blame for the hypocrisy? Commercialism and your goverment...
Fusing claims with any property- Observin wisdom for the fuck of it...
The church is slowly gainin' control of your minds, not worth the ambitions


You'll learn your phony, aimin ur soul after mines, the words of magicians...
Very deep read Spoken. I always look forward to seeing one overcome the various obstacles placed before them along this journey we all call life. You give off such a strong vibe through your writing. You're a very admirable Poet. Your youth stays well hidden behind the veil of your writing ... if only more could see through eyes, they would be a lot better off cuz I tell ya ... you are truly something special. As always I'd like to say, keep your head up and stick with this craft, because you do it a great justice.


Peace

Dae Ja Nae
09-01-2005, 06:39 PM
Scarred (hood Life)

Thought you were set free, unaware slaves controlled by tha powers that be watchin' me
Dollar signs tha god of society, it imprisons us mentally
eyes see materials as the way out, don't you know fads play out
Sometimes i stay out on tha block, watching the seeds runnin' their mouths
About the money, hoes, and cars their so far from reality
Next month i read about one of them in the obituary
It scars me to think our seeds are becoming extinct
Gone in tha blink of an eye, why? Theyv'e been fed lies
No matter how hard i try some seem impossible to reach
With no fathers to teach them the trials of manhood
They end up down, and out up to no damn good
in the hood it seems to be positive is to be soft
Our babies are lost lookin' for love theyv'e never received
The same tainted theme, so they indulge in pussy, liquior, and weed
A high to overcome the depression, a role model's what they need
Claiming a street they don't own, in out of jail until theyr'e gone
Mothers mourn then move on, i tell em' stay strong
How long will the seeds suffer and nothings being done
To fix this crisis poverty's paradise we stuck in tha slums
Every night justs gets worse, another casket in tha dirt
I work to make ends meet and to provide for my family
and live out the path allah has planned for me
Raw truth my brotha ... raw truth. I share your vision homie. This reads like it could have come from me. We are all so quick to turn a blind eye to all that is truly meaningful in this life, being foolishly mislead by all the materialistic bullshit that is laid before us. It saddens me greatly, to say the least, to know that we as a people have fallen victim to such a corrupt society ... maybe one day we'll all rise above.

Who knows ...........


Peace

Dae Ja Nae
09-01-2005, 07:07 PM
When it's time for you to go, how would you feel?
Would you kneel down and pray to god?
or would you keep it real, and give the nod.
Paintin' the picture, I emphasis death in the scripture,
My soul is sold, Once secured like a fixture.
But since death is at the doorway, no need to keep him waiting,
open the door, felt a sudden chill, followed by my mind fading.
Dream's past, vision's so real, it distorted my reality,
then shortly followed by the ever dramatic fatality.
Is there a heaven or hell?, I don't really know where i'm going,
without guidance, I'll drift into limbo without even knowing.
Follow me on this journey, through the vision's to come,
I've seen death through my own eye's, and it's yet to even begun.
Seen heaven and hell, everyone has, but no need for praying,
just burn out my candle, and prepare my after life before the decaying.
Rather than comment, I thought I would just build on your post ...

I'm not sure where I stand, but I hope that life goes on
but I'm not foolish enough to believe that we are simply reborn,
I feel that we somehow pass on to an even greater existence
dwelling within a higher realm where the soul meets no resistance
devoid of self conflict, the purest state of elation
experiencing and unending reign of total exhilaration
a greater sense of understanding beyond the fathoming of natural man
like a unification of kindred spirits in a Zen state without demands
mingling amongst the stars in the form of raw energy
knowing real freedom for the first time, without constant threats from an enemy
reaching the pinnacle of perfection, if there really is such a thing
the completion of a full circle is what I hope the after life brings


Peace Surreal

Dae Ja Nae
09-01-2005, 07:11 PM
all my life I've looked to the skies,

all my life my tears have dried,
all my life I seek what I think is best
all my life I've repeatedly burned my nest,
all my life I've watched these viscious cycles,
all my life I've feared when the night falls,
lived in the slums projects and broken homes,
as I still strive to understand the unknowns,
take my money my shelter food and clothes,
but you'll never understand how family's love forever grows...

Our love for our families and one another is something they'll never be able to strip away. Beautifully articulated Ben.

Peace

Dae Ja Nae
09-01-2005, 07:14 PM
General Jottings ~ World Of Havoc

What I see is a world of havoc, lacking the magic,
Thay my mind creates from plastic covering the realness, your actors,
In a fake script where you talk this nonsense that's purely non-relevant,
I'm an artist that's taking steps bigger than those of an elephant,
What I see is your hate-filled looks, but your covering up,
'Cause political correctness has you with news from such and such,
Now your warped, havoc's come, and now we lost all the magic,
Your actors in a cinema-scope screen, purely fabric.

This read more like a verse that a poem, but it was dope just the same. Being that rap and poetry go hand in hand, it's all good.

One Luv, and Peace

Dae Ja Nae
09-01-2005, 07:22 PM
Gotta run for now ... but I'll be back to hit up the rest a little later on. I must say, Great work everyone, and ...


Peace

GuardianOne
09-02-2005, 01:00 AM
Forgiveness

" Yes good things last for their given time, all takes its course, that which cannot be filled in will flow past, such not to be heard of, thats how real it is, for all must be in mind, so can dwell in pattern, as willed, it gives all orderness, and scattered humbly revealed its true character, that was which adopted, though must take part each slowlly gaining it for internal growth, matters seemed to end after, but remained by the so ever presentness, thus must take a bit of it, what has to happen, will be what it was, for still are proceeding".

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-02-2005, 09:10 PM
a random thought....

clusters of sores herpe infected whores with liverworst breath what the fuck is next?? a midget complex that fidgets during rigid snot sex mucous collected and bought as the infected are outlined in chalk muttering bastards lined up and shot digestive tracks in a shit knot exploding tummy's feces runny asses muddy oh well get a diaper buddy you're one of the lucky victims stuck with the ugly stick here take a taste and lick dine on designs made to get us sick televised stories chicken strips and bacon bits growth chemicals inserted they twist nature into anamolies turning off certain genomes stomping on freedoms marching mobs treason lost humanity and reason society's wrong survival season vile legions of denial increasing FEMA delays aide while scheming men behind closed doors are thinking while the focus on the the war continues receeding these venues of the bleeding while menu's served for corporate eating who's really cheating?? do you believe everything you're reading??

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-02-2005, 09:18 PM
PEaCE Dae elevated minds think alike strike and survive through rainy nights!!

Guardian your poems always make me think hard about what you're suggesting and expressing....

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-02-2005, 09:30 PM
slumber sometimes funny dumber and dumber they wonder and blunder days of thunder tom cruise is a bitch scientology in ya ass crack slit slobbering sluts can only wish as dopefiends kiss a spider infested pipe burning out the lights ticks fatten up from the bloody bite despite the rubbers worn in the night chiggers and fleas fight strike precise erradicating life leaving behind undescribable horror all in the name of order executive orders killing men women sons and daughters welcome to the farm feed on harm then slaughtered in the barn

GuardianOne
09-03-2005, 04:06 AM
Explanations

" Continued discoveries have just blocked other activities, we must remain to ours, yes many things that would be, that had to be done, slowlly moving in the seen direction, it seems to be working, speeding will only give rigid efforts of perfection, and that which is complete hardly spoken, proceed ahead those others that had all their advantages, to comply with the truth they saw, yet can accept it, there are those occasions, where all is tested till its brink end, of nothing told, that silences the part with discreet depth".

RockD
09-03-2005, 10:20 AM
i feel joy but have no expression
i own the world but have no possessions
mind is filled with cruel intentions
so i ask the lord for faith redemption

i start insurections and riots in the heart
shoot with a tounge of fire, deadly darts
falling apart a soul is consumed
mind is rugged but body well groomed

i assume high postion but low potential
have no goals but high credentials
fulfilled with tension but a relaxed being
its all dark and that's all I'm seeing

a life worth agreeing but emotions are debated
mind is full of memories but important times have faded

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-03-2005, 03:41 PM
a quick jot

poetry allows us to release stress and steam,
pressure cooked cream is every ones dream,
shallow streams politcal capitalist on the scene,
washing everything clean as we're following,

GuardianOne
09-04-2005, 02:43 AM
Necessities

" That would not have taken place, natural in its own habitat, plus in different areas, as always the home place is seasonal, changing then put at a disadvantage, that had to be similar, was each day gone with its own given time, and soon fading before grasped back and found out, once not just rediscovered the true being, could it be to remain in this way, strengths were fixed on one, for them to act on, and were basic orders, that had to be overcomed, repeat famililarized those once not absent, thats how it should only go, finding out more, they got used but trully did not know, so it went on for its recorded existence".

GuardianOne
09-05-2005, 12:24 AM
Sociality

" Though there where instances which took out more than others had expected, still questioned the ignorance that was always amongst, how often discouraged the rest, what was to be done kept toward distinct amounts, concepts chosen in defeat of the purpose, quickly parted to diminish its goal, now became centralized, with many occupations confined for the delicate type, focus given its gradual stare, supplied shares which later matured humble with all its might, when those wondered left some memorised, upon certain conditions".

GuardianOne
09-06-2005, 12:43 AM
Outcomes

" And that was its purpose, for those who could not comprehend, had let go of new experiences, and mistakes were made, one was to notice and move on, for then knowing should have caused some form of rejection, it would be indifferently met, each was with its own side, how it was to be appreciated, had been by those who knew, with all its moments, those shared within that time, where all to be of some importance, but the way it had gone, was of its direction, non had its path, each with their own part, even if it was the same, it was all but real which had proceeded".

The Red Horseman
09-06-2005, 03:12 PM
DOPE THREAD
real deep imagery in here

GuardianOne
09-07-2005, 12:28 AM
Completion

" They where calculations created but would not work out in that way, with many disappointments noticed through humble retreats, questioned measures gave no part to glimpse, or restricted motions, versatile methods recalled that each must commune from a similar area, speeches bestowed upon last times request, what another understood, even retirements purpose faced the opponents, still written for essence, while essential systems balanced when required, not to escape toward the past, and natures treasures distinguished plus factual dispersements".

GuardianOne
09-08-2005, 12:53 AM
" That which is seen, may be explained, but to complete the cycle, one would have to have all teachings, thats how some work, but the whole point would have been they learnt, having had to define is a step ahead, gradually all increases, yet they don't want to be told, and learn as they can, it is well for others to progress, in the correct way, we don't change any others, the purpose is here, after there was to be nothing, thats all part of the providence, just bearing much at hand, what will do after, is the fruit of a once adopted root".

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-08-2005, 12:15 PM
ohh yeah nice additions guardian!@!!

frank@mtl
09-08-2005, 02:19 PM
I live passed the status of a surgen
pushin black suburbans, no friends
I don't need no
skeemin all my poetry through the borders and my people
smoke mad dope
so I cut throats with my mental
connections in my mind get preciser than the trebble
They shook
couldn't spice they life with Trice and ice and
I can't believe son
youv been barkin' at my tree son
this my man is trahison
the whole thing got you mixed up, made you wanna steel my tricks up
Now the hard part's over we can see that you are scared of us
Don't start frontin or you gon see that we the murderous
Disciples recognize me from the wisdom of the sages
cuz I don't give a fuck I get my knowledge from the pages

GuardianOne
09-09-2005, 01:29 AM
Acknowledgements

"Always recognize the change, what these responsibilities will be, for another to experience, if developed with those other patterns, that would be a different character, although it tries and slowlly wears on, for thats what should guard against, and try and prove it, those who fill in with lies, these are various types, and an element can be conceived absent minded, the physical is very detectable, plus all this enhances the skill, thus must be always practiced, so for it to be better, it must be learned of ways, how to avoid, these kind of traits, many left to theirs, thats what would accept, but maintain the self, through all that is brought upon, for swaying with trying different remedies, will not help, rather anticipate what has happened, whilst what is real will follow its paths, each one has their own".

LordAnk
09-09-2005, 03:08 PM
ANGEL RESTS

Sleep Angel, you have been through much
makin my life brighter even with the slightest touch
cause even in the dark, your bright as day
your words more soothing than a million singing blue jays
to have you by my side, even after all my mistakes
is like driving a car, even after it breaks
If Love is all it takes, then I'm going to Love u more than all the Fall leaves you can rake,
and if you dont believe me now...just wait till I make this earth quake.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-09-2005, 08:22 PM
wrapped resentment stacked contentment
shacked and shuffled bashed and muscled
the past they puzzle extract the blood puddles
the death quarterback flashed in the huddle
slapped we scuffle but masks are muzzled
deceptively taxed then cuddled relaxed so subtle...

the beaks of the raptors clack and caw
these bastards grip with massive claws
distracting pause most dead in the smog
where poor victims fall or slow to a crawl
pinchers of crawdads grip onto straw
breaking the small " Pull ! " the clay pigeon, Call....

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-09-2005, 08:51 PM
reflector i'm shining as light sparkles so shiny reminds you of lightening enchanting but frightening eye opening enticing ever so lightly I enter through spines my incision so fine not a trace to find as you rest and recline my frequency's bind peeling the rhind off of the fruit imposters persue as the gossip ensues auctions of news are used to abuse the views of the bemused infused with a programs political views the ridicule construes facts and fiction to stimulate, confuse exercise the mules mental clocks on snooze still, the oils ooze...

Definitive X
09-09-2005, 09:30 PM
14 years old

Barely out of junior high

The young man was sold
Stories of wealth and lies

He passed them on

Through his brothers and sisters

His life was in its dawn

Dew formed on his blisters

Ballad Ballistik
09-09-2005, 11:45 PM
I FEEL THE WORDS,,, THAT ARE WELL SENT....

IF I COULD SHOW SOME OF MY INTENT...

ITS NOT TO PRETEND TO BE, DOMINATE...

ITS TO LET YA'LL KNOW HOW I, REPRESENT...

HERE TASTE THE MAIN INGREDIENT...

A BIT OF GRAVEL MIXED WITH THE CEMENT...

BIG BROTHER GOT ME FEELIN THE RESENTMENT...

BREAKING MY BACK WITH VERY LITTLE PAYMENT...

LANDLORD GOT LAWYERS CAUSE I AINT GOT RENT..

HOW THE F*CK AM I SUPPOSED TO STAY CONTENT....

IM READY TO GO BUY OR RENT A TENT...

CAUSE THIS TENNANT AINT ABOUT TO GET BENT..

BUT I DO GET MAD WHEN MY RIDE GETS A DENT..

GET IN MY BELLY LIKE FAT BASTARD.....GOVERMENT

ILL DROP BUSH FOR THE SAKE OF THE ARGUEMENT...

I CONSENT GOT US WORKING FOR THE FRAGMENTS..

SMALL PIECE OF THE PIE CAUSE WE GOT A ACCENT...

FEEL THE BURN ON OUR RAPIDLY MOVING DESCENT

LIKE OUR MONEY ARE SOULS ARE WELL SPENT...

LIKE FRESH BREATH YES I NEED SOME TRIDENT....

MY BREATH SMELLING LIKE SOME DIRTY VENT...

LIKE A HURRICANE YOU COULD NOT PREVENT....

LIKE THIS EVENT .I HOPE YOU FELT WHAT I MEANT...

DONT WORRY SAM YOU WILL GET YOUR PERCENT..

LIKE MY MIND ...IF ONLY YOU COULD INVENT..

TO FAIL ON US IN A TIME OF NEED ...

SPAWNED LIKE YOUR NEW SEED....

GuardianOne
09-10-2005, 01:51 AM
Unchangeable

" Culture is for anyone, tradition the practice of people, religion and belief is personal, with healing for all upon the earth, concerntrations shifted as had been before, normal purposes for the benefit of most, though recognized the points expressed, still drifted in thought while domains continued, attracted modes where the pressures involved, just mistaken by sounds plus power, recalled that many had listened, conversations desputed the presentations made, offences caused with little regret until was told to where was begun, responded advances which led to faulty standards, whilst observed the relm".

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-10-2005, 02:22 PM
you rotting whale carcasses are exploding in the sun,
I smell the stench of the young burning in the slums,
why do we run at a rats pace? the maze is in place,
attention deficit disorder at a staggering rate,
our children succumb to irrational thoughts,
6 inches of paper with a headshot of slave owners sought,
a Democracy turned to Republic and the Proud love it,
cuz these bastards covet like the neck of a redneck with a mullet,
the masses head butted bastardized and beat,
enter the areas where you survive hustling to die in the streets,
right next to poor schools with poor teachers that dine with the beast,
designer duds will repeat while we die for shoes on the billboard feet,
and cut the juggular or pop a brain stem just to be respected by the meak,
I'm Sick of those mental morons mimicing the cypher of sleep,
Wake from the clutches of these devils gripping us in the streets...

Chequita
09-11-2005, 12:46 AM
Terror {:(

Crying, :'(screaming, Begging, and pleading. The sounds of horrible terror.

Terror like the wind blazing thhrough on a stormy night.

The fear rushing within me. My minde swirling around like a hurricane.

The kicking, the punching, :ouch: the screaming, the acts of horrible terror. }:T

As the pain rose within me my fear grew stronger.

The fear that the devil }) was with him.

Too afraid to move, Even more afraid to speak.

Had the wind blown our love away?

Was this the end or was it the beginning? :?

Walking, thinking, seeing him sleeping.

Telling myself this is a good time to be flying.

Flying away like a bird to a safe nest.

Only going never looking :looking: back.

GuardianOne
09-12-2005, 12:31 AM
Questioned

" Only tried to supply, later quests that others followed to success, whilst most had rested simple attractions led to enforced beliefs, nor what was to be said, there where given rates which fell under custom, circumstance and all that went with it, absent-mindedness confessed in actions displayed of occured effect, chosen types much surrounded, made fools of each one, through distinct motions, persued supple treats to adjust, laughs were ment for those able to observe, wanted faults of begotten experiences, when ordained to split the functions to two, hidden facts expressed to manifest a plight".

RockD
09-12-2005, 09:31 AM
Scenerio

the moonlight shines like the sonata
givin memories of the high school almamata
A son with a daughter age three i'm only seventeen
i try to make money but hard to earn is the cream
hard world, but to the lord i been redeemed
life throws curves as well as shit it seems
i guess its true shit happens
but i gotta make a way so i'm five finger shopin
drug pakin the life for a black man is hard to stand
tried to get honorable work but rejected by the man
but i will survive and strive for a cause just hope not get caught
just 2 mo years of college career i'm almost at the top
the book were baught by nickles and dimes
my baby dipers are paid by thievery and petty crimes
so will i be judged for wat i can not have but for wat i must do
i just know is 2 more years and this shit is thru
if i need credentials to show of my potential
i just feel sorry for those who lost track of the essentials
so i write from the heart only to create senerios
but i always ask the question is heaven my destination after burrial

GuardianOne
09-13-2005, 12:33 AM
Envoked

" As all was complete, for what had to take place, all there seemed before, yes in all its truthfullness, happening in this day, and the same sequence, quickly disappearing to another, it is more part of this than what was being seen, balancing was just trying to make equal, in surity was one making it difficult, now must return were all is natural, but had prepared long ago, just in mind, time had taken its choice, others thoughts had to change with it, now can be at peace, where one had all the daily routine, in sight with flowing practice, yes these are just the passed things that are here to be faced, plus take the best decision then, while faded with no place to be, that others knew".

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 02:46 AM
this isn't getting much notice in its usual thread figured i'd post it here


Straight nerds, I hate birds! they always fly south for winter/
Its cold during the winter, park benches gave me splinters/
Those written salms debating on how you should live your life/
Frost bitten palms waiting for a touch of green to break the ice/
Writing your name in yellow with the snow the same old show/
Actor always knows how it goes already read the script/
So he dusted off the 22 he equipped and pops in a new clip/
His shoulder is already chipped, "chill gawd soldiers dont trip"/
If you fall you die I already seen it happen to the other guys/
Don't listen cause the rest lie I'm to depressed to even try/
So I stare at the sky with tears in my eyes asking god WHY?/
When everyone else leaves me will I still be unable to fly?/
But this is all in the plan so I continue with whats at hand/
Moving across this cold land trying real hard to understand/
Harassed for being in the street by cops walking their beat/
WHERE ELSE THEY WANT ME TO BE this is where they put me/
I got blisters on my feet, soles worn down from scraping concrete/
Thinkin on how I can eat, a full meal would make me Complete/
And this is everyday, carry this heavyweight trying to elevate/
Trying to Compensate for this decreppid state wich is my fate/
Moving from block to block all the same with different cell mates/
They carry nickel plates, don't think straight, always figure eights/
Looking for an easy escape, but they never open those gates/
Rather destroy than create, why build, you can buy it on ebay/
The world through my eyes in my life at the other end of the knife/
Resenting and repenting the days sins at the end of each night/
Finding out the hard way if a dogs really more bark than bite/
When you at the bottom of the hole its hard to see the light/
I always see alot of bread but I still can't seem to get a slice/
Forced to sit back and wait for crumbs like some project mice/
People forgettin where they came from numbed out by ice/
Leaving me scratching my head like I got a bad case of lice/
Fightin our own people because we aint got the same rights/
So I sit back chilling with a pen and a pad waiting to ignite/
And Light this fire inside of me to shut out this cold cold season/
A whole entire population commited treason just by breathing/

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-13-2005, 02:21 PM
Teknicel that was real NICE!!

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 06:22 PM
Thanx ben, I used to write alot of poetry havent in a long time.... I'll try to get back on wit it.

TeknicelStylez
09-13-2005, 06:23 PM
Terror {:(

Crying, :'(screaming, Begging, and pleading. The sounds of horrible terror.

Terror like the wind blazing thhrough on a stormy night.

The fear rushing within me. My minde swirling around like a hurricane.

The kicking, the punching, :ouch: the screaming, the acts of horrible terror. }:T

As the pain rose within me my fear grew stronger.

The fear that the devil }) was with him.

Too afraid to move, Even more afraid to speak.

Had the wind blown our love away?

Was this the end or was it the beginning? :?

Walking, thinking, seeing him sleeping.

Telling myself this is a good time to be flying.

Flying away like a bird to a safe nest.

Only going never looking :looking: back.I'm sorry but

LOLOL

GuardianOne
09-14-2005, 12:28 AM
Continued
" Those that failed when the last moment was placed, some could not have known, with revealed instance to convey the onslaught, from which hardly recognized, yet notice must have been observed, many occasions occured to achieve the sights, though motions cleared what had certainty, requirements maintained the positions, through its reliance the purpose was trully fulfilled, only within completion would another proceed, as set in the heavens, things conditioned toward their source in pure accordance".

GuardianOne
09-15-2005, 02:39 AM
Efforts

" And we have become accustomed, to what was once learnt, yet must not loose sight of it, the works continue, during each time, all that is experienced but half spoken, for its just a pattern, and one treads off to revive, it was the position given, for as all that had to experience would have a tough while, so proceeded in lessons, that has to be collected to make the procession more enjoyable, though there was non of that, but plain really taking time in its own gain".

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-15-2005, 12:59 PM
DAmn Guardian !!! Nice messages!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-15-2005, 12:59 PM
PeacEcaeP

Tek

GuardianOne
09-16-2005, 12:26 AM
Prospects

" As comes to its end, and rememberable actions of different kinds, enhancing all, as the rate you only know, shared amongst could be not, for it was in the protected part, that is delayed to come to, what had passed by, when going through, gave the meaning to the time, though had various decisions layed before and that was just how it was to be, others would wonder what was happening, a past lesson, that now is here with nothing to be said".

GuardianOne
09-16-2005, 12:28 AM
Peace bigben happy birthday!!!!!!!!!! Nice to have you here!!
And Welcome TeknicelStylez and the others!!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-16-2005, 05:48 PM
Thanks man I have to post some poetry I've been hella busy lately

PJ FlemFlam
09-16-2005, 10:21 PM
A yo i got this poem call'd oh! zhit kinetic heres a lil sample
Obedience iz betta than sacrifice, Strenghth'n what remainz i thought twice
Concentration through mire lips recite soft sips, Done in split seconds i work wonders with scripts
A counter-attack prosper'd the perfect jab keen, I act'd quickly to this operation foreseen,
The unexpect'd delivery came back around, Anxious to show others i leave them astound, Diversify try to pick me from out the crowd, Kick things up abit you should of seen how i smile'd,This ancient-style move might come so smoove, I linger'd unto perfection by being kool,Where i stand in case of a jam will succeed , The spy apprehends the finest xzibit indeed,

PJ FlemFlam
09-16-2005, 10:29 PM
A yo i got this poem might turn into a rap call'd oh zhit kinetic heres a lil sample
Obedience iz betta than sacrifice, Strenghth'n what remainz i thought twice
Concentration through mire lips recite soft sips, Done in split seconds i work wonders with scripts
A counter-attack prosper'd the perfect jab keen, I act'd quickly to this operation foreseen,
The unexpect'd delivery came back around, Anxious to show others i leave them astound, Diversify try to pick me from out the crowd, Kick things up abit you should of seen how i smile'd,This ancient-style move might come so smoove, I linger'd unto perfection by being kool,Where i stand in case of a jam will succeed , The spy apprehends the finest xzibit indeed,

GuardianOne
09-17-2005, 02:02 AM
Ordained

" Examples mislead those that seek assistance, many words which had given out what others thought, nor that not mentioned, yet observed their stance, how most relocations left some bewildered, those cautioned before, as tests continued to be persued, even when positions exchanged the places, recognized much as also got into deciteful trends, always returned and maintained the path, conditions worsened plights exposed, true as intensified efforts had its limitations, forces unexplained plus insignificant matters expressed".

PJ FlemFlam
09-17-2005, 10:10 PM
probe'n the outskirtz of my brain wave , a wift of this rave, i work my way around the spark thatz spectacular , a mirage ponders me vernacular , a bee bounce'n roun to yo flower i bumble ,breath control deflect'z edible responses humble,improvement being test'd fo conduct,tunnel under the city to abduct

GuardianOne
09-19-2005, 12:35 AM
Support

" Forms reduced what others saw, subdued effects which captured anothers attention, with unsolved forces, gone further to distinguish, as certain experiences, complaints mystified just not to be even heard, did not bother motives known, disturbed the normal flow, though devious ways where explained ones history, later outbursts supported the pleasures, thought of measures to define its interest, covered stances only noticed after, closer quests to find difference when emphasis was put, tensions gave their own parts and hidden agendas".

GuardianOne
09-20-2005, 01:17 AM
Projections

" Yes it is not that we don't care, as actions of all turn to truth, each has their own ways, well for this it can not be said, and to make another follow your ways, its just the attention that most lack, they try and its appropriate, so all goes in their so called rate, yes those that acquire leadership, for we are not leaders of others, and don't request to be led by another, we don't claim nor thrieve for superiority, for all must be equal to accomplish goals in thier own suppreme knowledge, and we cater for ourselves, those helping is worth while".

GuardianOne
09-21-2005, 12:44 AM
Satisfied

" How various tricks are repeated, the part of beings having to go on, as the failure of certain moments, but still in path, yes two men treading the way, strong as its own natural will, what is it that truth is found, and others dodge that, for must go in the correct mode, performing the good for the better, all of the survival set upon still is striving, its developed if it was all back to the same, most times just press in the direction with thoughts focused, many ask what is that for, yes have set all these forms around, that give increased concerntration, on what has to be done, plus yet what will be to come, each segment proceeds, with its new intensions".

GuardianOne
09-22-2005, 01:10 AM
Friendships

" Many questions said, sometimes embarrased though witnessed much upon this earth, with every word spoken, little types gained momentum, as the vast cycles were in purpose, while sustained, still wanted desires that could not have meant, an imbalance toward the basic patterns, and recuperated in time now humble deeds when seeds had grown their worth, seemed misled through forceable traits, which each other gave, distant friends that had been to end, formations in the heavens".

GuardianOne
09-23-2005, 12:40 AM
Normalized

" Tried to cushion the causes, with actions not able to commend, as they continued by the stance, processions brought for humble claims, though needed to take into account, traditional patterns meant to always be observed, functions maintained at critical moments, could not disturb positions made, while reports explained of assumed facts, nor the ones involved, each concept to pretend, tractions concerned defeated the best, yet others forbid in its commune, had to express at purposeful deeds, decided pressures when some consumed, upon this earth, and drifted souls, for the living motioned above, the dead lay deep and beneath in thought".

GuardianOne
09-24-2005, 02:30 AM
Hatred

" One must learn to pattern theirself in the situations they get, areas that are discovered in all, experiencing gives more truth than just one, others try and make their lies true, and the chosen points magnitude, contained development gets better, yes they are not to be recopied, each progress in their decisions, the ones who had experienced its breath, and knowing its supported elements, just to help them in what they acted, plus new methods of associating with others".

GuardianOne
09-25-2005, 02:01 AM
Prepared

" Respective paths when chose the gradual raptures, which soon occured, yet went further, as the patterns changed the focal balances, though claimed less while received, nor those that maintained their facts, just so was kept clear, and others which exaggerated, listed methods that gained surplus amounts, some moments relapsed to give them each part, how conclusions bent to what was meant, non seemed to relate, gone through various modes to achieved desired folds, plus conditioned faults"

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-25-2005, 05:00 PM
Blasting and raping glacier cold thoughts caught devastation...
mocking the good and the poor with wars trepidation...
highly contagious emotional gestation turns to aggravation..
Emancipation and freedoms mirages in this slave nation...
controlling the world with precise moves of assassination...
I'm elevating mental ascension thru my text illustrations...
waking the dumb before we fall to devil condemnation...
erasing lifes elation New World Order is our Damnation..
Iím escaping these turbulent trifling days of hate propagation...

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-25-2005, 05:11 PM
Today is laced with 85% of the population's indecision,
i'm cutting off circulation with scalpel incisions,
politics dividing the populus with devil division,
calculated movements thought-out in precision,
pivotal plays made like cutting for circumcision,
90% of the wealth is kept from our vision,
circulated through television is fear and disdain,
while most of us lost our true king names,
in the american cypher cycles never gain,
just continue our living in this reign of pain,
twelve jewels why isnt that taught in schools,
lowering test averages Ebonics masks the mules,
used like tools for leveredge and to carry the weight,
as our families are shocked and scraped shipped upstate,
contemplate our fate its a matter of time,
gray matter never matters if ya not willing to climb,
used that ladder in your mind and break those binds,
that litter our heads commiting garbage crimes,
living is now we must revolutionize these times,
I dont know about you but im willing to stake mine and CLIMB

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-25-2005, 05:20 PM
Seven seas the seventh day savage men stray,
coarse criminals cantankerous subliminal sway,
radio waves play as the young are denied today,
while televisions show sex and violence as the way,
perpetuating love as cash gold fronts and guns,
tragedy encompasses the poor left out to dry in the sun,
withering away as the young are tried and shunned,
watch your back the devil likes to surprise and stun,
slowing creeping up and then ya life is done....

GuardianOne
09-26-2005, 12:06 AM
Speech

" And some don't experience what have done, if only its for their better they accomplish, the extent of that circumstance, has been to evolve and show its true effects, for might not even know it, a further time that will come, to them it was just a daily routine, which is kept up, and only part of the self, this has caused the lifestyle like this, from before till then, it has given roots to its own ways, now has a foundation, to relate to and others are the way they came, patterns have their own translations, all that is observed is seen by the mass, they experienced that set towards them, and don't want to be left behind".

Sicka than aidZ
09-26-2005, 04:32 PM
hahaa, got your sticky finally, "benben good mod"

GuardianOne
09-27-2005, 12:16 AM
Misinterpretation

" For all is real, and then plans are made to make the imagined join with reality, they are so many, yes and some are just too realistic to be left without noticed, others deserve their minds attention, they strive for the ones of importance, others tried to be fitted in, the correct course must be taken from the beginning, advance shall be done that was also before, with the added help of the resources given".

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-27-2005, 03:01 PM
Pies or Puddin? frozen lives dispute it.
minds rerooted who displaced the conduit?
coax computed bugged and traced beetle thorax's litter the place
chemicals embraced borax is laced inhaling toxins our DNA tastes
morbid estates of these horrors escape souls boiled evaporate without a trace
picture a fractured face of child in pain forced in terrain to die in vain?
what cycles sustain maintained to contain with honor and traditions
psycho analyzed convictions trained composite compartments of blame lockers and lockets
safes and shoeboxes safe deposit boxes protect our profits which utterly cause it as we eat the regurgitated vomit!! oh, by the way, picture the beauty of haley's comet

nut_end
09-27-2005, 11:43 PM
from golden apples to sour grapes
the light of reason to wrath of despair
in metaphors to which we sink our teeth
grasping for enlightenment to rise from beneath
the state called fallen about the way
gathering the senses that enhance our fate
in and about our world and selves
on the highs and lows upon which we delve
preparing the embedded ness on the heart - the pulse we track
toil through the dross host most gross
to capture the renown story of crown's glory
knowing cause effect affect a change
placing the right opposite the wrong without gray
utilizing the light of the olive and the bee
tracing the path that leads to the point where sun meets sea

GuardianOne
09-28-2005, 12:12 AM
ManifestationsEach is trying to learn, they enter in their own angles, which is what they want, and can see to only get in that way, yes they check at all times, when they see it best, many later go on to express, their awarded respect, that they don't claim deserved, all are lessons that try and get where they reach, will be to their limited point, so go and discuss amongst so they develop, and use to certain depth, there is no one to help, for enclose themselves in influence".

Born Ruler I
09-28-2005, 08:46 AM
Peace Queen
My spirit gets lifted every time you pirouette
Your posture makes it impossible for an imposter
I'm postering your image upon my cosmic walls
So it will still remain after the final comet falls
At the end of time
Which will define a new form
To you I would stay true to form
You're equivalent to equality
Your walk exudes your brand name
Elevated quality
Your model be worth more than the hope diamond's colossal fee
Gabriel's apostrophe's for what belongs to me
You belong to you
Whatever it is that you do, Queen, do you
This comes from the depth of the soul to you
I close my eyes, two
Open my third
I see you
One

BLADED_THESIS
09-28-2005, 07:50 PM
through esp i see the evil aura, subjected to visions of horror, as the unknown defends its state of grace and overtakes the explorer, dig your ditch of ignorance, ill stay behind here on surface, some say the fires of hell burn to hot, but i say the temperature is perfect, remain unseen like the mighty wind due to the catarachs of society, an implosion from within O THE IRONY, black hole style greed as we construct our own abyss, no roads now lead to eden our demise has become our bliss, solution confused with dillution mainly commited by the masses, no denying or refuting these aka mental pollution tactics,

BLADED_THESIS
09-28-2005, 07:51 PM
unfinished and upolished it is what it is

GuardianOne
09-29-2005, 12:16 AM
unfinished and upolished it is what it is
Okay!!!
Nut_end nice verse, Bigben nice verses also didn't notice you now have the powers that be! Born R 1 good verse (sentimental) nice.Welcome

Peace

GuardianOne
09-29-2005, 12:21 AM
Clarified
" What they saw was the soulful smile, it was all real, deaths distrustful field, works were not to be consumed, as they believed all was pure and simple, natural as the darkest truth, thats not subdued, yes they had experienced what was not to fake the place, that took its space, not in the correct part, while changed a bit in the reality of it, those at sleep, the heavens take their toll, all strolls with its presentness, yet an often decided moment, what signalled that was the appearence of those not here at this point".

BLADED_THESIS
09-29-2005, 02:27 AM
LOL "unfinished and upolished it is what it is" that wasnt my end verse yo, im stating that piece is unfinished and unpolished. i just felt like dropping it real quick.

nut_end
09-29-2005, 04:29 AM
those that lie
when cheat and cry
to deceive through ply
getting treats from tricks that apply
for into getting attention
is the main and only frame of apprehension
for bringing around together the company
is the pleasure of their principle of misery
not seeing the view of what's called
for when it appears - who's life will be hauled
as it will happen - by due prescriptive measure
will bring about the real pressure

ManicLion
09-29-2005, 09:52 PM
Hey BIG BEN, long time no read. How have the sands of time been falling for you lately?

So I see this is poetry, but honestly whats the difference between poetry,lyrics,rhymes and raps? To me there all the same just delivered in different audible styles. I bet you could rap any Bob Dylan song or sing any Wu-tang song to country music.


Anyway heres my first submission to the collective:

Mass corruption in the USA
and the fault lies with you I say
not just the gov, mafia or CIA
it 's like a skipping cd on autoplay
up to us to decide who will stay and who wiil quit
first comes the republican president
who turns our whole fuckin system to shit
Next comes the Democrat president
who has to raise the tax a bit
just to fight the outrageous deficit
so the voters decide they aren't diggiin it
so the process starts all over again
First Carter fixes Nixon then comes Reagan
Old Bush gives it a final push so then comes Clinton
We're caught in a Bush again whats next another Clinton?

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-29-2005, 10:49 PM
PeacEcaeP ManicLion been a while yes indeed the sands of time have fallen I sleigh and ski lifes quest can have some swallowed by the sea deep in the depths shadowed from the half moon crest the dark abyss can stretch to a mans heart and a childs nest most submerse and emerge to take shallow breaths... but enough of that build on what we value best of course this governments only part of the mess while we continue the cycles so the beast will digest our young in the cipher of drugs and street profits while the parents smoke coke the system conquests our children left alone to fend for themselves as public education is going all to hell dumbing down the standards so the poor never prevail leave behind bloodstains similar to snail trails hermit crab characters living in fragile shells


welcome back!!

GuardianOne
09-30-2005, 12:16 AM
Strengths


" Now they had got accustomed, to having been lost in their possesion, others wanted kept at what they had been doing, that was what took place in the midst of it all, the patterns of a once experienced outcome appeared, and was not a single thing, for the best way had been chosen, by someone else, who didn't need to be accused, those who tried taking part in the process, tried to keep in focus, the most one could have pointed out, but feared to be asked where they approached from, yes those summed up".

BLADED_THESIS
09-30-2005, 02:27 AM
can i get some feedback on the unfinished peice i posted earlier?

ManicLion
09-30-2005, 04:49 AM
Ah it's good to be back, just wish all that stuff we put down way back when were still here.

Caught in a demons eye with a spinning iris, tumbling through the branches of hues reaching grabbing for anything to hold onto I'm being beaten harshly but I don't really feel a thing my whole body is numb. I thrust my hand up and grab the edge of the pupil I pull myself in and feel the vacuum of sight tugging at my back, I crouch to make myself more aerodynamic so I don't get sucked through into the darkness. The demon must be running through a jungle but his cornea distorts everything to me, where is this odd place it's so familiar. Memories I once knew are whizzing by at tremendous velocities where are we, way too familiar. Is this my house, no that tree never lived in my house that lived in the front yard of a home from 10 years back, is that where we're at? Can't be I didn't meet that girl who just zoomed by until 6 years ago and I certainly don't live on that beach. He must be running through the jungle of my mind. Ah, it all makes sense now go to sleep there's no need for concern, stand up now and be sucked into the darkness of sleep you need your rest. We can play demon run through your head anytime lets relax.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-30-2005, 04:03 PM
centralisation controls the nations
novus ordum seclorum invasions
minds wastinf televisions basting
lives chasing the mighty dollar encasing
souls in shells they worship egyptian horace
the eye beholds us they silence and mold us
war is profits every president has mocked us
ever since JF and Bobby Kennedy were shot up
they plot up the world bank has bought us
The Columbia Society owns and prints the dollars
the White House is in the District of Columbia
With CBS and Records Pictures of Columbia
Why is The Space Shuttle called the Columbia?
by the way there's also a University called Columbia
the ever seeing eye of Horace is NBC's ensignia
why are Phoenician Egyptian and Cannanite gods symbolized?
when Our world leaders worship the Devil in disguise...

GuardianOne
10-01-2005, 02:57 AM
Possessions



" Recalled tempered factions from disbelief, yet the processions exerted its residual plight, through motives meant, and then soon searched, but thrusts conditioned the self, with prohibitations example to conclude, how preparations approved that presented, would not receive such chemicals, though learnt thoroughly and spoken voices, many methods exposed of what trully needed, written expressions remained, when the focus had shifted, not for long as the purpose surpassed its expectation, nor the ones experienced"

GuardianOne
10-02-2005, 02:09 AM
Settled

" As they became violent, the cycles of this situation could not have been pleasing, striking back with deep intense thoughts, the strength was unparallel to that occasionally experienced, it was most enjoyed, others saw the horrifying clips of anger in its wrath, but did not have to happen, all means shall make it not occur, always trying to bring the better out, there is no one to support, only prevail in ones knowledge, deaths speech was always amongst, keeping an atmosphere of its own, plus went accordingly as communication was valid, was always kept and forces redirected, that path gained its appreciated purpose, to be avenged with stupidities own zealousness, and no one witnessed the departure, nor did they attend".

tha god concept
10-02-2005, 02:54 AM
she bleeds when she needs
cries when she lies
suicide suzzie surrounded by flies

she sreams in lust
our broken trust
smell the wombs token musk

behind my smile it shakes my teeth
all the while when vampires feast
i love my suzzie
dear suzzie come clean

lost in love
she medicates the pain
then falls asleep
on the stain

candy razors
her perfume lingers
touching me with bloody fingers

suzzies gone
shes gone too far
that i cant heal
her broken heart

TRU STORY R.I.P Suzzie

tha god concept
10-02-2005, 03:29 AM
CAPITAL h


burn the spoon
shoot the wound
lay back gentely
youll be there soon

confused with smiles
the pain of a child
gone from the world
atleast for a while

spin around the room
abstract cartoon
look down on life
but straight at the tomb

come down to bed
the living dead
CAPITAL h
got my head

GuardianOne
10-03-2005, 12:09 AM
Solutions


They were all activities that each took part in, how wanted to be honest, now try and express their surroundings, the others are just following the one in lead, their work was not yet complete, for had to make all during the time given, soon it will after a long period of years, and was nothing done, just to fall back to the old ways, thats what seemed the best, nothing that can help, nor was there care to give health of, as the least though where surviving, days that came had passed by, all thats new set before, so quickly to move back into state, continued with no other to be changed but the same".

nut_end
10-03-2005, 06:51 AM
born from within a room
out labeled as the womb
supplanted from the male
implanted in the female
in gestation for months of nine
through destination's door conceived in time
taking upon a place embodied with fate
presided over and around by providence's grace
culled from the perfect present tense
from here to there - is life spent.

GuardianOne
10-04-2005, 12:43 AM
Agreement

" Various impressions as the patterns now reflected what they needed, ones that attained better effects still contained, how did some get revealed, certain interests misled, had to shift toward proper positions, and maintained the basic neccessities found, absorbed the functions disposed, others could not comprehend benefits of friendships, conversations distinctive to create their effort, subdued climates searched the vast populas, timid structures which survived through its age, torments placed to accomplish purposeful deeds".

Dae Ja Nae
10-04-2005, 03:56 PM
slicker than oil

for riches he toils

foolishly fighting over materialistic spoils

nothing to gain

slipping away like grains

of sand ...

his clinched fist equals an empty hand

the strength of a man

always in popular demand

but realize he's human first

so for money and power he might thirst

fuck around and fall victim to the curse

these are the acts that break made men

show you his worse side before mental expansion can begin

strap on a suit if armor to protect his weakened flesh

appearing hard as stone to hide the heart underneath his chest

at his best he feels blessed

but deep down he knows he's hexed

trying to deny the latter makes him stress

so now he's vexed

striving for perfection

to heal the scars of rejection

unable to hide from the truth seen in his own reflection

broke the mirror to free the demons

covered in blood but never screamin'

after viewing the shards itís still to hard to even envision dreaminí

tired of being the victim

of a system that convicts him

running from lifeís restrictions

deepens the affliction of addiction

to vanity ...

a state of sanity

is becoming a thing of the past

searching for the arms of security in something that was never meant to last

time to remove the mask ...

and dismiss the fear of shame

never point and outward finger when you only have yourself to blame

see, real strength can be found once a man can admit his faults

feelings of pride, brought to a halt

inner depth, now able to exalt

now free from his former self

heís finally obtained true wealth

a sense of oneness/being whole, a pleasure he has never before felt

he accepts the hand heís been dealt

because he believes in the power of choice

no longer afraid to lift his voice, he now has reason to rejoice

viewing the world with new eyes is his first step towards ecstacy

and becoming a "true" master of his own destiny

a Man Iíll be proud to have stand next to me



Peace

K.E.G.
10-04-2005, 05:02 PM
V - EMPIRES

Why kill Kings and Queens that can live off water and bread?
Dropping bombs a thousand years at daily rates like gun fire to head
Assassin secret Op's title's focus in scope zones in on target of child
Killing Gods children are veterans
Who hold those who intend to inject the lead poisoning into the skin
Can lead an entire Roman empire to an untimely end
The words revolve propaganda like the Dark Era
Full circle must emit now back again on powered ground by men.

Like reincarnation of the all mighty nations
Becoming incarcerated burn victims enslaved to pay for the brand new Mack 10's
With Uzi grip
Price of umbrellas up for when it starts raining and wine willl drip
We all paid for it
Might as well load one up and let one rip
So the peaceless rest in pieces
Leaving heir of throne to 'Je-sus who spite the speechless
Says he's sent by father Zeus to teach us.

Before we self-destruct in writing thy Tyconderoga fill the page up
The cuticle heat cracks ground and Beelzbub comes up half way drunk
Or half filled cup?
Will you sip the blood or eat the crust?
Densley crowded churches turn corrupt
But self conscience is Duracell science to do the power up.
Fool of knowledge
Leading our herds of fellow people like cannibals of carnage
Brainwashed as we approach new sets lead by Osiris
Freezing to ice all after the carbon.



try and sssssteal thisssssss

GuardianOne
10-05-2005, 01:40 AM
Sanity

" If the processes where not in their order, all amongst would be bewildered so they speak, what victoriosly dominated for only it is its own works, many develope so progress, what else shall they need when have got everything, deaths own truth revealed itself, not many can claim to have experienced, for thats not happened to you, and have not taken part, all its tears fade with the morning light, that generates in its own darkness, humblest of all its kind, survivers of its being, it does not support any, that it was made for, but has effects on much of creation, and its there, all must take to it ahead to bring its end".

GuardianOne
10-06-2005, 12:47 AM
Comments


" When another was silly others did not have time to wait and see how silly you thought you where, some predictions left to instinct, summoned for anothers return, confrontations expected accorded to the remittance meant, was there any purpose to escape, what others knew, faults continued till one was known, with every move set by the averages, volumes loud upon heavy notes, distant facts unfolded amongst the inhabitance, seemed to drag on with not witnessed effective loss, through the active modes once related before".

GuardianOne
10-07-2005, 01:27 AM
Offsprings


" Yes all has come out, at least came through true at the first than later on, showing consideration for was the cycle of all creating harmony, thus can appreciate yet had been an experiment, with shoulders turning, traveling within natures might, it was just awsome, yes days that changed what was to occur was too late with other things vast and past, there were not to relate, a game which had lasted for so long, females with flirteous patterns, both seemed to try too much, seeking to discover who got caught first, a terrible matchless, now can proceed on as the gradual cycles of all things, having to keep within decipline with reality taken passed that should have been done, somethings thought resembled as the real influence of the process, had to place what was before to history, would not extend any further for had come to its area,trying to make another experience the purpose of use, yet was for providence, as could be able to prevail deep beyond with balance that is in flow, soon to be forgotten, those that are in their passage in quest to find what they seek, yes humans went on for so many days, life was of its own, creation of heavens will to be cultivated yet seemed no problem so went and searched for another being".

GuardianOne
10-08-2005, 03:19 AM
Departures


" As one changed their moods, just to develop the proper atmosphere, so one can take advantage, yet lately have experienced most of all, these give the most complete view, its plain truth is natural, the process takes, that is to make place at that moment, those that shamefully did, now there was circumstance, others only stare, and remains in those possession of it, many use the best they have around, proved in their coverence, the others don't know, continued as planned, but had changed were not concerned, now chains of thoughts rattle to their beloved deathly process, it took in its finest way, for was its own gentle skill, which was rememberable".

nut_end
10-08-2005, 09:10 AM
like the blood from heart
plug brain water stain to claim
character conscience



for the sword that cuts
either from or neither nor
end compass what abhor



being dirt unworth
offering to be cohort
a mud slide abort



knowing not body
while embody met alchemy
in body of wisdom



taking salt grain
to wrath paired with fury ness
leaves bliss mix bless



a board of chess
analyst stress and what press
holies of mind chest



pitted trove treasured
for stay clean match to be fresh
life's stream flow measured

White N Dangerous
10-08-2005, 06:38 PM
How can you justify the ways of your religion
When my god tells me that killing is forbidden
Just think of this position, making that decision
Iím having this vision of a religious collision

My minds full of hate, nobody can contemplate
This template in my brain that I canít translate
When all you want to do devastate not legislate
Against the violenceís suicide bombers instigate

Investigate why most of us were against the war
Yet you tore out hearts when you stained the floors
Skies painted crimson our innocents was the reason
The thing that makes my blood boil was the treason
Gave you a home when you were exiled for your own
Yet you come to America to blow holes in our domes

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-09-2005, 05:24 PM
scenes picture frames we've seen the same
across the global pane concrete is stained
another body lay slain blame the dope game
cold nights and cold shame cold heights and cold rain
blown pipes spring leaks blown brainstems seap
sharp shooter aims for the heart or brain
dogs trained to maim who's to blame??
faces red stained from the night train
hoisted into the pits of hell with a crane....

K.E.G.
10-09-2005, 10:31 PM
GuardianOne has darts.
publish it if you haven't already.

GuardianOne
10-10-2005, 12:40 AM
Testimonies


" Explanations caused the effect in mind, often disposed with reluctant forces, even the claimed did not return, nor the proper exposure to reflect upon, how far had africans gone, there were visions as desperate ones tried, yet all was ordained, through impressions the gifts reduced, and mortal experiences which led toward indepth research, begotten lists for the make belief, went other ways to strive, though situated positions within an inbalance, what most wanted known, just a glimpse to achieve its worth".

GuardianOne
10-10-2005, 12:44 AM
Thanks K.E.G and keep to the good work, also White N Dangerous and nut_end keep up the good work. Bigben....
K.E.G yah I'll publish it in my music (thanx for your concern)
Peace
PS: And everyone that's here in the temple (and this thread). Keep posting

GuardianOne
10-11-2005, 12:10 AM
Stance

" Other communications placed to retain the normal positions, those involved attained what many had not expected, was able to apprehend the gradual presence, difficult methods sustainable toward few, with the actions made if concerned, witnessed occasions reclaim the conditions subdued, often expelled when had no interest, death repeated its works, tampered pressures layed delegates for supposed reason, while the match contained its centre, definitions exposed taboos left from the ancients, how observations continued, than common lapses which meant little, or effects that where taken for granted, situations soon returned to give their purpose, though did not need to get involved nor show our personal achievement, had been shown what occured, teachings came in various forms, heard measures became obsolete, whilst the audience could not differ, protests always maintained the way to penetrate, yet most tried to witness and pertain its passage".

koncretegorilla
10-11-2005, 06:12 AM
'iight, lemmi do my thang thang right here 4uall..


Searchin' for answers, on better livin' standards/stranded, in barron lands with plans of advancement.
Start from scratch, knapsacks' packed with scraps/black track the planet, prepared for the traps.
Mad corrupution and greed, women, wealth, wheels and weed/killers, pimps, hustlers and thieves.
Hellbound, spellbound, countdown to meltdown/mass crowds surrounded in clouds, 'suphagus drowned.
Crippled with fear, scared, riddled with tears/your screamin' inside so aint nobody can hear you.
...So do the knowledge and grip, clench yo fists'/resist the clutch n gettin' caught in the mix
Cos' its warfare, raw flair, best wait for the all clear/ain no point in spillin' blood all over your sportsgear.
So let a nigga relax, im loungin'/shit its all i can do up in this public housin'

RockD
10-11-2005, 12:20 PM
i understoof from age five to be a man was to strive
although that thought was inate before i was alive
from birth destined to own the earth only at my will
but struggled through life times a stomach try to fill
but to reach the hill is to be cream of the crop
you'll fall many times before you reach the top

i understood from age five that a 'dream must not be defered'
expectation must remain high and never be detered
i dint hear this from a grape vines althoug i thought it was inate
that from birth i'll be a great mind and on flows i'll contemplate
never hate just dislike but try all that u havent its experience
wisdom is gained from learnin among other ingredients

cause i understood from age five that one plus one is two
i dint know that from brith but inate was the clue

hollywoodrealty
10-11-2005, 07:01 PM
what seems good is bad
what seems bad is good
rich kid wants to look poor to fit in
poor kid wants to look rich to get chics
chic with no tits wants teh fake ones
girl with big tits wants a reduction
skinny lady wants a big ass
lady with huge ass wants lypo
shits is backwards, want what u cant have
and what u can have u dont want
spend your whole life searching for that special one
when u find her, bang her and leave her, thats dumb

Ballad Ballistik
10-11-2005, 07:06 PM
ever day has a new dawn..
ever thought has a new song..
they continue on like the day is long..
trying to get my head strong..
trying to get where i belong..
smiles to the ones who live on
respects to the ones already gone..
moon to sun the earthly rotation.
divided..by lines called are nations.
fueled by hate with are race son..
heavily armed to erase some..
dont want to look above seeing were done.
hit by missles i dont want to look above..
i show love and stay grounded..
giving respects when i pound it.
now lets get back to sound bits..
of the lyrically astounded..
the music gets me bounded
the rhythm gets me drownded.
thank god i found it..
love to all ..and the soldiers who fall..

GuardianOne
10-12-2005, 12:31 AM
Prevailed

" What had to bring, duties remained as many by-passed, those able to glance upon, restrictions gone to normal stances observed, how reflection cast its own signal, with somethings not fully magnifined, stretched toward the lengthened limit, yet most escaped as communities differed, just in pattern for accomodated through the environment, less tactics to conserve distributed powers within the system, all this having to be noticed, analysed still while factions retreated, distant features which related their own history, where had one begun from, and similarities at hand, the types which deserved their motion, rapid revolts and others that witnessed, heard many talents acted out of departure, that was not accepted, yet was the points access, while some watched as if manifested truths, even continuous when desperate folds maintained its own, difficult measures but had to listen to all eventualities, just for simple instances, known of what had come for, positions chanced to gain better advantage".

Ballad Ballistik
10-12-2005, 12:46 AM
huh

nut_end
10-12-2005, 05:07 AM
behold - sat the knowing eye
that sight foundation upon high
granting support - though seem to sway
placating and leaning through varying arrays of actions
noticeable the ascribing relations of factions
in the due course of summer the bees come out
as the pendulum scales time the birds fly south
gesturing the vapor humidifying marine aqua
letting loose the adamah's terra firma cotta
booning wishes pleas cries and joy in life
while amidst stocking death with faith hopes grief and strife
considers no rationing for deals with impartialities
extracts due accord when integrity of justice is called
has neither heart nor head that's to be charmed
turning unders and rounding overs leaves lessons still unlearned

MefMan36
10-12-2005, 04:18 PM
I need a Queen
Who's sweet in the streets
and a Freak in the sheets
but only for me
cuz she's beautiful, smart, nice and clean
Need her at the lonely times, nahmean
She amazes me with her eyes
never stares at other guys
cuz its me for her and her for me
we can just lie down, chill, watch TV
I don't take her out to eat, I cook for her
Because I dont want other guys to look at her
But that's not jealousy, thats just preventing
because I've been hurt before
and I don't need pain no more
I just want to start a family
don't wanna cheat and party
Because she's the realest girl I ever met
And she's the only girl who's jokes I get
So I'm just sitting, waiting, wanting, longing
for my beautiful, nice, smart, independent woman
I need her now, well soon I mean
I'm waiting for my queen

Still waiting 4 my queen
My first real attempt at writing poetry, what u guys think?

White N Dangerous
10-12-2005, 04:33 PM
2nd poem/rap on here check it


im dreaming, of cases of m-16's, the smell is clean like listorine
lazer sites locked non stop atomic bombs rock the roof tops
of underground dwellings, above the ground shellings
theres no telling how many will come, ill empty the drum
on my tommy gun, ill bomb some, from robotic remote control
im 3000 years old, 5000 lies told, to keep the young growing old
Im folding space and time in rhyme to decline the advancing line
of marauders, my width is broader, im deeper water,
gaurd your sons keep your daughters, watch your borders
await your orders, the angels will not leave us, believe us
they use angles to decieve us, the attempt is needless,
they try to breed us and keep us, fattened up
beaten and battered up, tenderized, slenderized
were like fries at mc donalds to them, another franchise
im lookin for riders, not drivers, im not Fahrvegnuegen
you far-from-groovin, I stop the stars-from-movin
like a black hole, im redefining gravity, like-newton
define reality like poor people in new-orleans-lootin
like more people in venezuela coo'in, political ruin
is insuing, somethings brewing, religous war is the distraction
for alien factions, they want to make us into rations
to feed there hunger, and passions, transmitting from there mansions
they bring us under with veils and lies, controlled by scary lulabies
the revolution will not be televised, youve been advised, to rise
devise a movement, make improvements to your defenses
lay out the mines and razor fences, raise your senses
dont be defenseless, theyll be relentless,
dont scream they are not listeners,
youll be hospitilized and cant have no visitors
Im the new public enemy and I take no prisoners
this isnt an exercise or a drill, its time to fufill your destiny
open-sesse-me, your DNA is your weaponry

GuardianOne
10-13-2005, 01:00 AM
Practices


" Each able to be made a culture or religion, as it went further, distinct discussions while concerntrated, the types centred by their truths, whilst dreams that snake-bite attcks as in its accordance, yet recessed factors claimed the worth, how many were to experience, though was with a deciteful companion, as family concerns where of those alive, not involved amidst the dead, motives changed which signalled the end, now for the ones to depart, what seemed complete, already if others had witnessed, bygones set at prepared refusals, was to remind that received and heard all, operations planned against someones agreement, nor forced strides to fix it again, there where medicine women that wanted ones services, with first rituals that had to bath in blood, of a certain totem or animal, vivid reflections of their kind, offered businesses yet unable to persue for traditions altered its types pattern, but many went to try and change the cycles, through its self distruction, as we honour all energies and life, those set on different tasks, while pressures made less effort accorded by the purpose, how much had restrained, encouragements placed the methods which others insisted, for was portrayed amongst true essence".

PsYkOsUs
10-13-2005, 02:24 AM
audio comin' soon...


((\\\::~ 3rd World America ~::///))


this punishmentís sinful if crime in Heaven blackens Christ

but governments dwindle if Nine-elevens happen twice

so you listened to a fool, who contrived election from Gore

whose religion was a tool to disguise intention for war

it laughed at feds, but more truthful: you lie and shed tears

Bin Ladenís dead, just more useful alive to spread fear

crash conspiracies, Anthrax, Weapons of Mass Destruction

fascist tyranny, hands clap, Presidentís last discussion

conquer nations, Apaches eat Ďem, as cobras slide over soil

Operation Iraqi Freedom, though soldiers died over oil

it coulda created democracy, we took the strongest coward

if Bushís greatest hypocrisyís we put Saddam in power

. . . .

rules alter our rightís precedence, in essence of legislation

schools offer us life-sentences instead of an education

faceless classism and Stalinism of systematic communities

racist fascism of politicians with diplomatic immunity

we know the Tuskeegee Project was preparation for AIDS

below it was greedy logic with reparations and graves

now we pray for assassination in this fervent murder story

and weíd slay for a vaccination in his urban purgatory

blasphemy killed a blame-scoffed atheist he aided betrayal

factories buildiní brainwashed patriots, created to fail

War is peace, Freedom is slavery, and two plus two is five

sworn defeat, even in bravery, Ďcause truth was suicide

. . . .

Home of the Brave, how blessed this nation to let Ďem die

hope for the slaves, found gentrification and genocide

tanks roll through the streets over Molotov hand grenades

ranks rose to the feat of a holocaust, damned brigades

if hearts should fall, repeat fate, we fight to stop intrusion

itís Martial law, police states rewrite The Constitution

sacred files, wars pushed, to see if our nation could wither

Satanís Child, George Bush: a reincarnation of Hitler

American rebels praised if dead, shows no manís impurity

our terrorist level raised to red, no Homeland security

why my breath of resolution is stifled and tried for treason

I cried: death or revolution, my rifle provides a reason





Copyright © 2005 Psykosus, The Soulless Survivalist

nut_end
10-13-2005, 05:24 AM
partial of farce y'all


last man standing, surveying what's been happening
from the transgressions from laws, forcing regression to flaws
in making a race hog like rats, and another too dogged from that
playing up the politics to economics, splitting the hair blinding optics
believing make them illusions, running with cruising for bruising
roads be slow when picking and choosing, not wanting to be rocked from misusing
told in scrolls print press in molds, the struggle is by far epic and bold
generating generations in general, casted in sides to instate residuals
battling in fights for a war to strike, live dead or died living like birth right
to grow or go retro never neo, for duped to stoop their id as plastic placebos
a washed with waves that pave, the mentals left to the sentiments of slaves
backs with burdens making crossed with cursing, the little lie snowballing as worsen
for the world gets colder and seem slower, and time becomes a boulder never meant to shoulder

Queen Of Poetry
10-13-2005, 08:35 AM
I need a Queen
Who's sweet in the streets
and a Freak in the sheets
but only for me
cuz she's beautiful, smart, nice and clean
Need her at the lonely times, nahmean
She amazes me with her eyes
never stares at other guys
cuz its me for her and her for me
we can just lie down, chill, watch TV
I don't take her out to eat, I cook for her
Because I dont want other guys to look at her
But that's not jealousy, thats just preventing
because I've been hurt before
and I don't need pain no more
I just want to start a family
don't wanna cheat and party
Because she's the realest girl I ever met
And she's the only girl who's jokes I get
So I'm just sitting, waiting, wanting, longing
for my beautiful, nice, smart, independent woman
I need her now, well soon I mean
I'm waiting for my queen

Still waiting 4 my queen
My first real attempt at writing poetry, what u guys think?

This was excellent.........I can feel exactly what u r talkin about (since we talk so much).........

I really enjoyed this!

RockD
10-13-2005, 11:30 AM
i flow for soul power as i devour writen lines
because in time i will fill the sky like shine
and rays of sun light as my plight reaches its peak
from the devines words i speak
never reak although i drip of nectar and syrup sweet words
a beautiful mind like a decoration of horderbs
if was a degree i be a threehundread and sixtyeth full n compleat
never runin out always on full not depleat
never spoken wit the heat just to parallel hands
like a sholin monk who can prophecize to any man
follow my own band, beat my own drum
sing my own victory song so i have my hum
and hynms, my lines lie between the uncunsious and the awake
never lookin back cause to the future i'm never late
but people still hate but i will continue my motion
and give the world the everlasting potion.
wat ya'll think?

White N Dangerous
10-13-2005, 12:01 PM
i liked it alot keep it up man!

everyone's poetry is very good im impressed!

PsYkOsUs
10-13-2005, 12:40 PM
((\\\::~ 3rd World America ~::///))




this punishmentís sinful if crime in Heaven blackens Christ
but governments dwindle if Nine-elevens happen twice
so you listened to a fool, who contrived election from Gore
whose religion was a tool to disguise intention for war
it laughed at feds, but more truthful: you lie and shed tears
Bin Ladenís dead, just more useful alive to spread fear
crash conspiracies, Anthrax, Weapons of Mass Destruction
fascist tyranny, hands clap, Presidentís last discussion
conquer nations, Apaches eat Ďem, as cobras slide over soil
Operation Iraqi Freedom, though soldiers died over oil
it coulda created democracy, we took the strongest coward
if Bushís greatest hypocrisyís we put Saddam in power


. . . .


rules alter our rightís precedence, in essence of legislation
schools offer us life-sentences instead of an education
faceless classism and Stalinism of systematic communities
racist fascism of politicians with diplomatic immunity
we know the Tuskeegee Project was preparation for AIDS
below it was greedy logic with reparations and graves
now we pray for assassination in this fervent murder story
and weíd slay for a vaccination in his urban purgatory
blasphemy killed a blame-scoffed atheist he aided betrayal
factories buildiní brainwashed patriots, created to fail
War is peace, Freedom is slavery, and two plus two is five
sworn defeat, even in bravery, Ďcause truth was suicide


. . . .


Home of the Brave, how blessed this nation to let Ďem die
hope for the slaves, found gentrification and genocide
tanks roll through the streets over Molotov hand grenades
ranks rose to the feat of a holocaust, damned brigades
if hearts should fall, repeat fate, we fight to stop intrusion
itís Martial law, police states rewrite The Constitution
sacred files, wars pushed, to see if our nation could wither
Satanís Child, George Bush: a reincarnation of Hitler
American rebels praised if dead, shows no manís impurity
our terrorist level raised to red, no Homeland security
while a breath of resolution is stifled and tried for treason
I cried death or revolution, my rifle provides a reason






Copyright © 2005 Psykosus, The Soulless Survivalist

Potent1
10-13-2005, 01:46 PM
i flow for soul power as i devour writen lines
because in time i will fill the sky like shine
and rays of sun light as my plight reaches its peak
from the devines words i speak
never reak although i drip of nectar and syrup sweet words
a beautiful mind like a decoration of horderbs
if was a degree i be a threehundread and sixtyeth full n compleat
never runin out always on full not depleat
never spoken wit the heat just to parallel hands
like a sholin monk who can prophecize to any man
follow my own band, beat my own drum
sing my own victory song so i have my hum
and hynms, my lines lie between the uncunsious and the awake
never lookin back cause to the future i'm never late
but people still hate but i will continue my motion
and give the world the everlasting potion.
wat ya'll think?
bery nice!!

K.E.G.
10-13-2005, 08:27 PM
When i die
I take off with made height
flying over graveyards sacrificed to do right
flooded bodies rock the underbelly of illuminati
star struck
Fade on our eyes with third sight
Ray bans reaching out to my body
With one way to die inside a quarantined fire
its in the up turned dirt
the ground we played on at birth
Massive Supplier
We fuckin' up when we get down there kid
recess with resuscitation daily and vivid like dream
rest then recieve it like cream
forth coming of the never been seen
I hope your exoskeleton is clean
Cuz after every cover up the covered become more interviened
Mostly Spotted
Our rock takes hold your atmosphere
Engines can't fuck with discs from crystal clear
With a telegram A.K.A. signed off as mr. grey a headed straight for the milkyway
Pray, its our time the Hades clock ran up
The streets is flooded now the walking dead shall walk among us........

there is more but i thought of that years ago.

GuardianOne
10-14-2005, 12:49 AM
Dismantled


" Would not have accepted, though confronted on a whole scale, if had known, the propulsion of existence, with those that get things done, while expected to control, misled conflicts returned toward the guideline, later involved with discreet intentions, wails then which continuously came, what was real was left so sould be mocked indeed when noticed, these trully than that went wrong, nor justification of where was to strike after, still revealed there was an abnormality between the relationship, as there was only non, certain acceptences prepared the types inplanted, further contributions attained things forgot, these suspended before its course, what heard later disbanded, the stolen sights while searched for another, parted efforts changed the positions to accomodate the inbalance, often tributes expelled what others thought not wise for the ones that died and some faced the rest plus taken cared of offsprings, situated in patterns which displayed articulated moves, though thorough through all mankind".

GuardianOne
10-15-2005, 01:51 AM
Aspire


" Discriptive hearts when got caught at that which gave no part, plus those solemnly forgotten, distant facts where led others toward distruction, methods thought now unable to be recalled, the types that expressed, how far had it gained, as all it seemed only a dream, whilst the stream adapted to its habitual form, them lost not remembered, what helped sustained the begotten, mentioned remorses caused little effect to progressive tones, unbalanced notions rear and involved in action as stored, after marriages a female had sex with the one allowed, and before performed intercourse with the ones that wanted, just to be brought to point, while many miss what could have been real, not known of rapid strides, with humanities success, granted facts which gave treatments to certain kinds in society, though trends shared their half, out placed occasions which retaliated in norm, those that heard, now soon relinquished".

White N Dangerous
10-16-2005, 01:55 AM
The death of the reciprocal/
I reach a pinnacle of imbecile/
A few years ago, and I mean in the literal/
Was pitiful, in mythical proportions/
Knowing the eventual residual emotions/
That would erode my soul in slow torment/
Boughs disposed my ambition from my reason/
To every event there is a time and is a season/
Chronologically I logically needed lesions/
Legions of reason, ta bleed ink in, a better harvest season/
Treason against Him, but the heathen within refused to repent/
And my soul’s slow roll to the black hole wouldn’t relent/
I prayed to men, not the Lord and Saviour of them/

It was the money, since cents made sense/
In a life where there’s only popper and prince/
No proper dimension for median ascension/
And since you’re either the sacrifice or sacker/
In a lynchin’…best to be the lynch pin/
A sinister sinecure, when the minister’s miniature/
To my cerebral cortex, preachin was out of context/
To succumb to duress, suppressed by the mess/
A melding of confused reality an’ sinning and vex/
Lucifer’s nest became my preference to rest/
And Devil’s pie to subside my hungry eyes/
Gluttons of immoral imagery, a sinful synergy/
Of shared energy between a mortal and the Enemy/


Keep droppin those fire poetry scriptures peeps!! i like wat i read

K.E.G.
10-16-2005, 02:12 AM
put your life on the line for the crazy masses of The People and you get your future revealed as a sacrifice like the holy book states. your sig intended for me to say that.

Dae Ja Nae
10-16-2005, 07:21 AM
I need a Queen
Who's sweet in the streets
and a Freak in the sheets
but only for me
cuz she's beautiful, smart, nice and clean
Need her at the lonely times, nahmean
She amazes me with her eyes
never stares at other guys
cuz its me for her and her for me
we can just lie down, chill, watch TV
I don't take her out to eat, I cook for her
Because I dont want other guys to look at her
But that's not jealousy, thats just preventing
because I've been hurt before
and I don't need pain no more
I just want to start a family
don't wanna cheat and party
Because she's the realest girl I ever met
And she's the only girl who's jokes I get
So I'm just sitting, waiting, wanting, longing
for my beautiful, nice, smart, independent woman
I need her now, well soon I mean
I'm waiting for my queen

Still waiting 4 my queen
My first real attempt at writing poetry, what u guys think?
I think it's very beautiful for your first "real" attempt at Poetry. It captures the purity of an emotional transition from boyhood to manhood. I appreciate the fact that you were not afraid to let your insecurities show. A word of advice though (from someone who's learned the hard way) ... never let your past dictate your future, and always stand stronger than your fears.

Keep at it, this was really nice (I need to drop more in this thread myself).

tijani
10-16-2005, 07:53 AM
In Shadow Of Death



In shadow of death there exist many forms of moans
You'll hear the horn when Lord opens his door
He doesn't care if you was poor or rich
But if you was bitch
If you was good or you burned down the witch
Be witched, be lynched
Sunshower is here I know it surely
If you don't believe just open ya eyes, you'll realize it early
Lil' curly boys, lil' blondie girls
Throw out all ya toys, you don't need ya pearls
Diamonds, jewels or gold
Only bleedin' Earth to hold
All the pretty stories was told and all the redemption was sold
We brought apocalypse to ourselves, I see dark clouds all around
And I hear gun clap, the same old sound
Dead man fallin' on the ground
Stains of blood is what we dealin' with
Sippin' it, spit or swallow, swallow or spit
Bitter taste in mouth begins this final part of way
Which part of day will we see in the end?
Noon is midnight, evening is morning, message sent

K.E.G.
10-16-2005, 07:44 PM
Strenuous Smoked Out and Now I'm high hypnotized the lie
On fakester studying of the rhyme recreational past time
Chillin' with the $10 extra I charged menace
passing the suffocation to his children I puffed on behalf the ones of kindred
Passed it back quick, my body functions flew through the ceiling
"I'll be right back"
Probably sounded odd with my last breath
Got up all casual with tightening in my chest and to the kitchen to rest with my head in the freezer
Wasn't doing any good, I crossed the house to try and get a breather
Made it to the AC cooled room i saw a cloud when i looked in the mirror and soon turned to nothing
Flat out on my conscience meter I grabbed for something to hold onto
This big kid fell and the last of his senses heard his skull hit the floorboards
Pure nothing echo
that's it
No longer trying to gasp for air
Stars shaped a blown out white face asking if i wanted life or death
I chose fuck it
All of a sudden there's a cold sweat running, it felt like I was passed out for years got up to my feet back into my wonderland
Cause I've been Smoking for years not knowing my much better chances of strenuous heart attack, born with low blood pressure cardiac, intoxicated sperm cell grown from my dad.

extreme asphyxiation.

MefMan36
10-16-2005, 07:52 PM
I think it's very beautiful for your first "real" attempt at Poetry. It captures the purity of an emotional transition from boyhood to manhood. I appreciate the fact that you were not afraid to let your insecurities show. A word of advice though (from someone who's learned the hard way) ... never let your past dictate your future, and always stand stronger than your fears.

Keep at it, this was really nice (I need to drop more in this thread myself).
Thanx for the feedback, I appreciate it. Also thanx for the advice, I am trying to work on that, btw.

peace

GuardianOne
10-17-2005, 01:11 AM
Postures


" Prostitutes taught alot, things that a mother would not tell or inact, even though did not practice sex with them, other thoughts put in perspective, slow with remorse the phase continued, how many folds returned after its worth, plus those that heard, got captivated turning simple tasks, the normal sequences chanced for its revenge, while descriptions differed to where most gave, lonely methods which detached from those among, and tributes cared for their existence, waited measures to achieve what was left, forgotten myths and dusts fates great timed design, skills maintained their effectiveness, as conditions prepared its focus, the two walked away toward the plains as if a couple, female and male during the night, with love in mind, yet the man just hired her physical service, whilst they just left the local bar, and after would part then lead to his own house, she only needed the charged amounts worth, which is to be paid upon completion, when possible could capture another customer, as long the conditions are acceptable, they recalled on the street that passed one".

ElusiveFugitive
10-17-2005, 09:23 PM
Props bro! Guardian this piece really struck me...Props bro!
By chance I was listening to one of your audio samples "onwards" and the flow of the piece and the perspective instantly came clear to me

ONE LOVE

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-18-2005, 06:33 PM
northern cali the dormant rats rally scrambling like eggs swallowed whole by snakes sadly digested those who oppose tight budded like a rose clipped thorns pierced the gardeners hand upon contact the shears fall to the sand the callousness of man strategizes the upper-hand movements made calculated and planned to divide the lands supply and demand trade sanctions that slam the economic strength but wait lets start from our plate served with hate like a side dish plate quickly we consume these marketed traits enemies struggle under low economic states the gardener holds the rake collecting leaves the have fallen through the changing seasons and storms ya'll been warned I'm cooking heads till straightened or curled like a perm ya'll asexual worms just eat dirt and squirm!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-18-2005, 06:37 PM
catch the unofficial clues of societies foolish fueding views blistered index fingers misused gun powder residue the dreaded mules carry the cues the weight is pulled with various tools measured precisely ruled miniscule imperfections amplify misdirection correct those connecting words reflecting mirrored contention supported by unproven suspension nowadays tongues are lynching powered by executive decisions negative thoughts only poison like emissions nothing is contested heads full of ignorance and envy become cemented sculpted sluggish thoughts demented blocked logic and lack of common sense!!!!

DANKZILLA
10-18-2005, 06:41 PM
that shit is dope...^^^^^^

GuardianOne
10-19-2005, 12:53 AM
Hey Thanx Elusive-Fugitive!

I have not seen much of your posts recently. Keep writing and reciting. Keep posting.

Take Care

Peace.

nut_end
10-19-2005, 01:22 AM
abstract concrete when relief like a pep show about whoa
for go out like the fall clout the nuclear bomb spout
turning the earth into the moon can't breathe to bloom
need the suits from chem class to stay active on this base
touching down in space on zero ground the snow globe effect
surrounds to square like a t crossed every way which it
shift from winds that wind like twisting serpentines of
the mind in brain ingesting rain when damn breaks cram
from plug protracted compass directing compromised ass
into instinct away intuition presinct shelter where siren
alarms when calm too quiet before riot of carnage as relative
to general perspective into special dynamics blowing back
drafts as vacums suck out breath from life reducing by half
the multiplyer zone of death quarantined damage and control
savage as post apocalypse of winter after burn from active summer
radio controlled thunder to against conscious like concussions
rushing hammers to drum ears splitting hear from listen causing
dissension from apprehension incomprehension no descion long
from living no mention of tension thicken with friction got
wacked to static forming stasis geling to basis home of hiatus
late rush to mush from contact leaving mapped like day after the
seal repealed sun from shine froze the time between to and fro
where only glow is neon from charged ions atomic like neutrons
in nucleus mutate to jump start a date with nature somewhere fate
provided inference from enter fear rinse nurture akin murder kill
essence from pressence reverse blessing and curse carriage to hearse
can't hurt now numb from torque central to fuse petals to not love
convorting inner workings to anti-matter plaster ante towards master
sense to tense stiff stuck from lift up like ash thrash to dust down
with the rain coating stain the hot flash of cold fire under skin akin
to desire that don't aspire shocked from shells to retire like oblivion
rocked the zeal to obliterate living blasting dom nowhere near king coming
in a war where less blood list hoods like good or bad ball black chalk white
minor notes to casualities ties bind bond coexist to perish thoughts to
unwrought iron make lead to weight crush from brow beat like plow quick
to swords unseen words costing dollars of two cent of five don't vie in
block of chips where egg heads scramble fry and poach to dedevil uncredible

GuardianOne
10-19-2005, 01:28 AM
Resolutions


" What thinked before not done, proving to be essential, as the actions had their images to be gazed upon, and recognized what type trully is, with that could not properlly be relieved and continued to get mingled within the vast system, how soon was to come blame when experienced a point of mistrust, now others had thought they found the chance as was only once, left what was behind but no sympathy at all, for the centuries had been in pattern one after the other, with many that faced what they saw, other things seemed scarey had to go on and be consulted, yes everyone where in their own process from the beginning of birth, to the end of death, thus got consumed within anothers potential, all had to continue with minimal disturbance, though had tried getting further attention, almost had different things going, yet was the same process again and repeated, each with their unique method only to be displaced with what had to take place, function had its cause showing how led astray, many don't mention only watch, as the positions take their moment".

GuardianOne
10-20-2005, 12:31 AM
Persued


" Getting worsened when knew the better, and was a moment not expressed, yet now had become actions, those forgotten with their death having been early, where they to deserve the title hero, did not know even though had to not try, as having to replace but was the same, many accepting the pattern, yet was not the type, realizing what had done, and persue only in ones path, each that determined the difference, how activities had become used of, those going to what they expected and the methods continued to separate, all bearing this in mind, not having to rush trying to explain but now all is within ones procedings, with each revealing all its secrets that where too much, what got wanted obstructing the proper flow, exerted with a better centre at its own strength, cultivating the natural purpose of the cause, questions that seemed to need to ask, just leaving them going by loss, and had taken a human stance and fell out, for there was no effort anymore, the beings upon all the activities, whilst humanity delapidated".

nut_end
10-20-2005, 02:38 PM
just dotes to note


i say intellectuals are factual
not ones to speak of status quo
for not about the haves and nots
just the smarts to enliven ones lot




once upon a plane called brain
there was an outpouring of rain
destined to refresh at best the mind
the happenstance of conscience in time



to heed the workings of ghost
the inner speaking playing host
a choice its not much about
stilled in silence need not to shout



there was a step off the earth
where one should go to perch
neither above nor below as it go
just much to consider about so and so



its proven that really need one woman
a ladyesque feminine in the blooming
where head and heart are always persuant
for wisdom's work is never consummate



its deep as the questions of life
and as shallow as political strife
where mirrors are emminent quicksilver
intro and extro convorted define the sliver



their ago in time is common sense
desicive in the split of mice and men
though for are want to gut instinct
far removed from ones wanting to think




:eggy: me stepping off the face is a fall into space, trying to follow is their drop from grace:eggy:

GuardianOne
10-21-2005, 12:36 AM
Just dotes to notes - that was a good verse, nut_end.

Peace

GuardianOne
10-21-2005, 12:50 AM
Final

Retaining the effect once thought, other times sensed with that always effect, yet there is that one of the opposite, taking different talents now noticing that all was a procession of what was to occur, for started upon their own, all was not mentioned, but did not have to show change, as the average actions only possessed, what many soon compared, suppose encouraged by anothers purpose, just for all to know, how the reactions showed trying to define ones patterns, but there are to reflect on other moments, those given paths to their own flourishment, so must progress, many would only notice, returning remembered that of past, yet can be recalled , types in tempretures rate tell of a similar cycle, did not want to attempt such proceedings, and should not lead to a destructive pattern, most lost for had participated, with not much to be told, though could only understand that had been done, departures had no meaning to anyone, they did not try but had to be brought to mind of all that lived accross the surface, while was within its domain, with others that thrieve together, seeming as though was intense, yet later would be thought of, past notions that could not be reversed, all must continue in its cultivation towards new deciplines, yes and it was grand with its vast challenges, that each one could develop in".

nut_end
10-21-2005, 01:58 AM
thank you.

Queen Of Poetry
10-21-2005, 09:43 AM
MIND SEX

QOP

With no penetration
Just mental relations
Seductively sexing your mind
Your body temperature rises in no time
With steamy verbal intercourse
The sex has greater worth
Making your knees go weak
From these words I speak
Intellectual talks
While we walk
In the aura of your mentality
Is your true sexuality
Not how your physique is viewed
But how your mind is used
Thatís what turns me on
And I have desired for so long
Iím feeling your vibe
And want to take the time
To get to know whatís on your mind
Your passions and desires
What it takes to set your heart on fire
Verbal foreplay
In the words we say
Subliminal injections
Of melodic erections
Light some incense
This could get intense


Blackwisdom

We mentally kiss
our verbals destroy the need for defense
as the walls come down we get a glimps of each other's eyes
it's your mind not just your titties and thighs
are you surprised that we can bond on this level
other's intentions mirror that of the devil
a thief in the night trying to rob your treadures
but we're as natural as weather
feel the breeze as I talk to you with silent words
i'm on my knees to lower myself to be heard
i stroak your hand feeling it's warm
i want to kiss you and I'm caught in your storm
eyes are like magnets with opposite ends
irresistable there's no need to pretend
lets touch and allow our wild side to show
but first lets earn respect before i walk through your do'
I love you and with love comes respect
I think I'm calm now but what can we really do next

blackwisdom
10-21-2005, 09:47 AM
Thanks for bringing some goodness out of me Queen. A real beautiful mind.

Peace

Queen Of Poetry
10-21-2005, 09:50 AM
U made it what it is.......I am honored for u to add on to my pieces anytime.......

Razorsharp
10-21-2005, 10:11 AM
dope shiiit from the both of you.. QOP u got that banner working yet....

PEACE

blackwisdom
10-21-2005, 04:19 PM
Iím in the room with demons
And what makes it worse is the season
My eyes are bleeding
Thinking that this alliance is treason
Against everything Iím fighting for
But Iíve opened the door
And my hands are tied
Oh God knows Iíve tried
But I just canít escape
If so theyíll seal my fate
And that of those around me
I almost feel as if Godís not around me
Cause Iíve deceived my family
And everyone that can stand me
But the secretís too deep
I canít sleep
Cause thereís just one picture in my brain
I have one thought in my frame
One shame
And one name
But I will die with it
You think Iím gifted
But Iím more so tormented and cold
But that story will never be told
Because it dies with the ones involved
I sit still and watch the world continue to revolve

Just some stray thoughts.

Peace

GuardianOne
10-22-2005, 01:57 AM
Just some stray thoughts.

PeaceHey is that part of the verse or just an explanation?
Anyway nice verse, and also Mind Sex was good from the noth of you. But i think its was mischievous , Queen Of Poetry and Blackwisdom nice verses.

Peace

GuardianOne
10-22-2005, 02:12 AM
Passage


" That has upon, now chased what should have been doing, matters had their own equivalent, with the nature of all things given their choice, how had come to not notice what was within, manifested with each ones own things, is wanted most, as those that chose what they passed, with many having their naughty actions which they rather to tell another, but if wanted did fully know the procedures to attempt, with the surroundings placed its own, many tried to obtain yet the originals had taken root, watched with daunted eyes, for their process had begun long before, was just communicated between in that state of mind, knowing what has to be done, a sort of protection reveals all that perpetrate the covered zones, a form of boundaries and is only left to those authorized, yes and can attain much within its vast source, still get drawn towards its works, would not need to get entangled, all must know their proper part, as can be sustained with the gradual change that time brings, most survived just for the sake, thought had been, not at all with only its construction being distroyed naturally, for was distructed whilst humans inhabited, now back to its simple purpose".

nut_end
10-22-2005, 06:06 AM
the world as the trip
of a lifetime in blips
each step a day ripped
the page tells to answer
past future winner loser
the turn like the screw
in and up to over and out
a journey take end to mind
each place in sight to find
with end encompass all such
from the one square to where
know no where by now here
the end and in of by for all
the macro micro eye balls





:yes: embrace each day like the first but grace each day like the last:yes:

nut_end
10-22-2005, 08:15 AM
how i be what are am
when as is was to will
where in ex id formed ego
mine of self know a else
my facet me about super see
quint the sense loft relent
fiber airs aura in vibe moral
with aesthetic mind's ethic
sow forged gold a thread's mold
fiber needle's silver line eye
knit waxed wits of hay stick wicks
stringing pearls the mother unfurl



i conscious of d conscience makes full of id the it

nut_end
10-23-2005, 09:46 AM
:learning: life inter sex course rest in u al:learning:


being held down by love
while raised up from passion
for set straight by rapture
when pushed ahead from ecstasy
knowing backed up by bliss
where at ease from understanding
know how engage with peace

Man @ Armz
10-23-2005, 04:07 PM
Blue Thought Process (One Love)

Sunshine on my mind to light to the insight i write to recite this poem to you.
So you may have a clue when you due what to do when they come for you.
Who?
The ones with the power searchin for the money to gain the respect of the people who care....about what they ware
about people who care... to whom they pair
about people who care... not to share
thoughts and cloud out your theories.
The beginning of top hat conspiracies.
Stay leary. Hold on to your thoughts
and remember your soul cannot be bought.
Stay true always look back
cause one day you may wanna come back.
Thats a fact youngin and i ain't tryin to tell you. I'm tryin to guide you
to think for you and DO what you should do.
Add it up 2 and 2 get 4
think about who this is really better for.
cause once you walk out that door you may just wanna come back through that door.
Take your time...think alittle more.
Thats WHAT THE FUCK your brain is for.
Don't be caught as a corporate whore.
Cause they will fuck you till your ass is sore.
And then your back at the door except there ain't no "welcome mat" here no more.
Cause what they want they try to force
but youngin as people we gotta stay on course and feed the soure
of our city which is us the people
who gotta rise above the evil
just to stay equal...One love ya'll, One Love

GuardianOne
10-24-2005, 05:54 AM
Further

" How had come to its position, and knew that done nothing during this while, for only was the other, trying to comprehend taking place, experienced the effects now shown weakness, yet must proceed within, only getting the desired feeling, as is supposed soon would be departed and did not need to mention, only communicated with the neccessary, this signified the failure to inact upon actions planned, with the earths force changing in gradual momentum, yes all was placed with the heavens watch, drawn towards the source, wanted to be able to always give at will, but is the type that has taken, now to a new part, that others render inconceiveable, each known and have to be given the signal, to consider others as actions tend to become impulsive, always to cheerish ones presence, only need to see the real, giving off reflex actions that have been patterned, kept as have to accomplish things, the vast planets own ventures, not for others to later believe in but the process of all things that are natural, why reasons had to be named to be given acceptance, waiting until all is set, having to get the proper type of certification, and know from the personal choiced voice, which was the original that those watched, the connection always being there, that now notice most that wanted to know even in depth, but could only take the amount".

Strange Fruit
10-24-2005, 09:57 AM
Summer RainÖ



Never thought i'd see the smiles again, the light again,

never thought i'd see the summer rain... like

a, breath of fresh air after sufforcating all throught the midnight

hour. like a hundred acre would with passion in disguise!

Summer rain, tell me, will you fall again...



and again and again, oh so easily its rhythm flows gently like

the Nile meets the Jordan, an unexplainable reality forbidden

by fantasy realistically formed to open to new ideas -> ideas

harboured by minds that oh so, easily flow gently again and

again and again and we laughed and we sighed as we smiled

and we stared over and over...



and over and over this pitter patter pitifully pattering

over the plains of passion and all we can do is play and play

and play...



play like the young minds of an unconstructed playground,

swinging on the branches of... innocence,

copywritten smile on the lovechild's playful

face, as he plays and he laughs and he sighs as he smiles

and we stare over and over and again and again...



summer rain triggered a rainbow of hopes and dreams that

leads into a stream that seems that my heart is being

captured by your being...

Strange Fruit
10-24-2005, 10:33 AM
when i sit and stare at you all i can think of is how i never see you.
Your body covered from head to to with make up, jewerly and designer clothes.
when i undress you to make love tattoos of jail bars surrounded by butterflys hide your soul.
inching my hands over your body from your breasts to your toes trying to get a feel of the real, the untainted beauty that i see so deep withing your eye's the sames eye's that i wipe tears from at night when you cry. everyday is a new day so everyday can bring a fresh approach to life. and as we open our eye's to the sunrise open yourself to me and let me inside.


bong bong.
feeling this... imagery is amazing, and so is the language...
i just had to say that.

peace.

GuardianOne
10-25-2005, 01:08 AM
Magnitude

" Though seemed as revealed, all that could have been spoken, with only reflecting what they are, a procession of actions depth and belief was bleak, traced that what went back, how did they expect to be taken, after all had collapsed with no intensions, others that had experienced whilst leading towards, yet accepted each moment for what it was, continued the tasks set before as the heavens forbid what was out of cycle, there was no blame yet that one had done it all, for within the time that had ticked to many dieing, repeated matters that needed no questions, and survival was still amongst with this earth, that they thought once they were alone, days having past from vast proclamations such as those, that led many how others set what they had become used to, still persued and enjoyed the normal combat, many things left to be maintained, some did not fully mean, just thinking for put towards that occasion, needing not to take rapid actions for are not in harmony, how those that had come to know more of that placed, given the chance to their own centre, all to find its proper position as the distant amongst".

GuardianOne
10-26-2005, 01:13 AM
Truths


" What seemed done, as they had only created what was not there, other actions where in their own purpose, how all seemed connected knowing that was to be imposed, though many had tried to receive, with only noticing their different aspects, was trying to give an escape route, for had a written grip that needed no explaining, now witnessed the agony, still had to tread on, with only the path that was one, saw different things, and still the essence was always there, both had chosen what was seen, many that tried not to know, the difference had to be taken, how others cheerished the potential, with the irritance that had begun to occur, trying very hard to get to know more, as was the gradual process of all things that where in cycle, many had stumbled on what they did not expect, which was exempted,and had to be accepted for what it represented, only to take care, as the distance inflicted its own distaste, yet had been fixed upon for a great while, not to be spoiled, whilst the smoke was suspended drifting continuously, those that had to be given their desired effect, now had to be implicated in various ways, yes and knew but kept very quiet, as inflicted was to manifest all, and continued to serve heaven".

GuardianOne
10-27-2005, 01:37 AM
Images

" There is no time to mess around, as all have showed their true purpose, just to bring towards their own attention so can inact as they wish, but now all that which has stopped, going to be more lethal than stealth, have to keep to the normal ways, not getting twisted towards what is irrelevant, and those that thought was all used to the proceedings, will only discover the change of things, the living that are heartless, experiencing what had not yet and had a gentle tongue as social discussions prolonged the friendships past, with many not giving a damn, yet seems to always come back, and thats how they keep thinking, sending prayers that they always hope for, not being able to save themself and help each other, now caught in actions lost to the path of heaven, but we keep in pattern and is no more for others, what was difficult, as they begin to know the difference, and nothing was to ever be changed, for was supposed to be done long before, suspended in realities quest to misled others".

GuardianOne
10-28-2005, 01:44 AM
Imagine


" Taking actions that have to reveal the pain of anothers outcries, how we must tend to what should be concerned, most patterns getting contracted with their limited value, the difference would not be able to accomplish anything, that would be of help, having to create a central place for lost beings, that they would dwell amongst, captured at a certain point in the universe, the earth was then formed from substance and matter, with all beings having centred their elements to give immense purpose, from then being able to generate within itself, others were placed so could notice their wrong, many distructed themself from this and got engulfed with the patterns of the worldly system, that had become permanent, for the difference was recycling lives, always having to get a new one, and there were those of the first kind, that had started the cycle witnessed to this day, as all kinds had to test the strength of struggle, the reward which was survival, though become possessed with what was not, yet notice how simple it is to convert from the one path".

GuardianOne
10-29-2005, 06:18 AM
Progeny

" Other decisions had been made, what others later experenced, and those that had been likened to what was not, getting to know better with different explanations, all could have taken its course, but had to change to fully comprehend, taken back to past actions, with patterns that later showed their cycle, which could be appreciated, how would use one continued developing others with that in mind, split with its own varied effect, noticing some of past conclusions, for at the time was differed, did not give much attention to the occured situations, now with most participated, yet had been real so the true concern is not openly known, yes and know the mystic amongst its atmosphere, the beginning had its difficulty, willed to get better, now the chosen getting closer, other things had to be organized soon, and are honestly wanted, but is to keep the constant communication so others varied resistance would have no great strength, often displaced for had to be left not having a clue of the proceedings, for was the only one that could change the present position, trying to get proper, and seemed to be getting more similar, had talked to those for a long period which had its circumstances, but was natural to be able to control, yet very used to consuming the surroundings, before not knowing that this was one path, all things that must be manifested as one to proceed and prevail".

GuardianOne
10-31-2005, 01:44 AM
Suggested


" When music was before, vast civilizations had not been formed, creation having not yet existed, many worlds with their distructive state, going past within the relm of the forgotten that reigned, now confined to their domain, by strengthened beings that had opposed, yes and they must still exist and create their own becomings, how truth hurt now having been hidden, those that survive through other creatures, and can dwell with all that is to be upon, for they where elements of those past creators that had lost appreciation by many for them, the actions that others supposed, as those that tried to be amongst, not part of that kind, what was imposed did not have to force others without the pure intentions that have been placed, why should they ever remember but they still keep coming back, though had to purposely take the advantage of those before the first known beings within existence, as they watch what is in occurance, knowledge that revolves within the ancients that can be remembered, what had been taken as was the effect of those that had been in process, the cycles had to be in self protection, doing what is only in the interests to discover these new creations, that had been labelled, and now all knew that had been overcomed for they are those infinitely past that have dwelled before creators of humanities own, and have had their own immortals within the universe, that could have been a pattern of the untimed unknown".

Man @ Armz
10-31-2005, 08:10 PM
Pc free Poetry

Believe what you want to but im tellin you shhhh listen to the winds message of foreign mutitude of achievments and how you can see this if only you believe in you thats the clue to accomplish anything its all on you magma eruption feed off the hot flow of lifes gravitational pull and relise its not completely holdin you down we all had wings once but as fallen angels we must test ourselves to not depend on clouding items and make due with what we posses call it a Magiver if you will your free child your free run wild lakes mountains valleys cities strollin grass trails to allys from the bricks to the valley fuckin shanana or sally anyone can talley

Man @ Armz
10-31-2005, 08:21 PM
Lights Lights shine on me to ignite the Ora Oh so slow but wait the glow growing growing towing forward Darkness expelled to the trenchs to fight battles left at that right on track back to back excellence refreshed on memories of slain fallen angels lost lost no ill hold you i'll do for you what you should have stayed to do in me an army stands two by two so i grow to conquer the midas touch the birth of the golden authour

GuardianOne
11-01-2005, 12:47 AM
Relations

" Chosen ways that one tries to reflect their intentions, had to be guided from what continues with, and to inflict what is of no concern, for is the character that has taken, all needed what is only normal, how others had to second question each moment thought, seemed to occupy the present which is supposed to be in action, taking revelations that leave one seeking what is only artificial, but still there remains what had cheerished together, distance having been shed outward, to give general purpose symbols, retracted to seem misled in correction, thus received what had been given, could take it in anyway for was part of the existent, time had progressed, those that left where only to be recognized by their inferior agitations, to partake that wanted various methods to pass on so would be equalled, other things that had to be taken alone, with experiences shown upon the attitude, soon realized what seemed insignificant, was to change the environments entirety".

GuardianOne
11-01-2005, 11:54 PM
Refused


" How had longed for so long, the choice seemed to have its effects, the taken had been revealed, but was a waste, only able to keep in a better form, till took the more advantages, for had started in a different type, now is the way, what was to be appreciated, all having been worthless, should not appear to be illusioned, as the real purpose would be witnessed when actions taken, others that knew but left off what could have been, many had to contain their own image, that which had to be done was fulfilled, yet was right to those true in self, that did not have concern and was done for the well being of the moment, now coming to terms and have taken meaning, soon left only to be forgotten, yes and was not to be there, for was to be no sympathy, days that had passed many that where to come, did not really know the purposes, but had to remain in form as all beings dwell amongst heaven, just a process of the patterns placed upon this earth, some seemed to have less meant, but distroyed the memories created, where trying to phase out other things, as its important".

GuardianOne
11-03-2005, 12:13 AM
Responses

" Had to keep in the proper way, tastes of different types, were given towards the extent, operating individually as they proceeded with only their own purpose, once was placed would be able to not continue, there was no restoration, as the cycles dissolved with their own existence to distruction, only the lessening of the given length, what others did not know, were given the desired plan, that could not sustain, noticing those that had not been, some revealing their personality, for knew what type it was, would not mess with that, already caught in its own retaliation, yet had started as though was not real, which soon stole the other part of the living, did not want any chances place, with reasons not displayed, now many seem to purpose their own wanting, and were only seeking another path to penetrate ones point, but all had to be equally balanced, what did not worry, and non that formed once thought, all being the real thing, yes and had recognized how one is replaced or not trully known, took the way to endeavour that which was normal, still relating of what could not have done, seeming to be in the proper yet not, always one must be able to recultivate, in new cycles and were still in progress, given the distance to complete all, yes revolved in its centre, for had brought the proper effect, that should be always and had to give some space".

GuardianOne
11-03-2005, 11:33 PM
Revised


" Each is to help, all decisions were not thought of, it was a real deed, why was of its cycle, sitted as plain time ticked, words spoken soon gone, and was nothing of it, but once would have been discriminating, all saw was what was to proceed in some way, that all stayed is it a problem, for there are no conflicts at the moment, waves blew forward, to their roleful state of action, others could only watch and went, whilst coping the other, for is different, but try to understand, may be how it is conveyed, by the patterns for all times, in its rays".

White N Dangerous
11-04-2005, 10:13 AM
The grains of sand observe the pains of a man with indifference/
When freefalling re-calling shameless plans of increments/
An instant is defined by a second thats combined with a lesson/
Time is perspective a seductive ocean, condutive lotion/
Tastless, invites you to waste it, but sum obstruct the motion/
An instrutive potion of enlightenment, thats heightened when/
Innocence Nixes ignorance inside divine and righteous men/

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
11-04-2005, 01:21 PM
its hard to imagine invisible horns on ni66as we hang with,
its hard to live lavish with a life torn and damaged,
minds rotten established get boiled with the beef and cabbage...

triggahappy187
11-05-2005, 03:40 AM
I pray to my father, that he may give me the strength and energy to wake up every morning/
My father prays for my safety on the streets, Other mothers wake up to a different mourning/
Senseless acts of random violence plague my city, as mayoral candidates promise change/
History repeats itself, their words are lies, the winner will win.... But brothers will still be begging for change/
That's our future, Detroit city is gone, deleted like that, we allowed the typist to white us out/
While outside Detroit suburban teenagers worry about who they are going to take out/
While I plead in my vehicle that no one stands in the way of me as I commit a robbery I hope there is no one I have to take out/
You have to do what you have to do to survive this is my life/
And God grant me the strength to withstand a 25 to life/
Sentence history repeats itself I told you all, my seed is on this path, and he was even before he was thought to exist/
I wouldn't want to exist If I knew life would be like this/
I'm not a thug, I try so hard, Kweli don't know how hard it is just to get by/
People tell me to follow that straight line that straight road out of povery/
I was born in a circle, there was never a straight line for me to follow/

History repeats itself

Khan, Napolean, Hitler who will try world dominance next?

History repeats itself..........

the funky drunk
11-05-2005, 04:33 AM
as the rays of the sun shine bright on my face

i find it hard to concentrate

to many things disturbing me

maniacs try to murder me

but thats a norm in our society

i wonder ... do people still care?

are people still curious

what would it be like ...

without the violence and crime

the only thing you cant lose and find again ... time

Strange Fruit
11-05-2005, 04:40 AM
slightly ill cadence there^^... i like.

go back to the place where their dreams were free,
the simple life where the black man was the master
and the cattle his slave.
run forward to the land of rhythmic feet, a mark of
true afrikanizm, the justified colloquial party,
that never ceased. her feminine contours,
virgin and beautiful, were the temple of divinity....
they worshipped the earths and it's mother....

back when they knew free.

the funky drunk
11-05-2005, 05:12 AM
one day mr.billy was thinking

thinking of revolution

he was staring no time for blinking

he's eyes remained wide open

many people walked by

and reacted rather strangly

why was he standing there?

why was yeh so still

the rumours spread quick

that the 'crazy man' was ill

he didnt move for weeks

still he stood in the same position

still thinking of change

to his thoughts ... he would listen

soon months went by

he still stood

was he a statue?

nope , he was a normal man

with a simple plan

to make people stop and think

the funky drunk
11-05-2005, 12:30 PM
As anger spreads across the land of the wondering man
the animals calculate a plan but its too late .. Bang
the eagle drops to the ground the ant is crushed by the force
their lifes hijacked by the death no more life for the horse
as the animals lay in graves the man stands in the cemetery
laughing at the results of his horrible experiments
he doesnt care for the life of anyone thats not himself
murder to him comes as naturally as speech
oh how the animals wish that the man couldnt speak...

the funky drunk
11-06-2005, 02:59 PM
across the landing the small child creeps
as her creators squabble about irrelevant isues
she turns the corner to where the elders reside
taking a look at the mess they have made - and she sighs
its off to work again she must pick up the pieces
collect whats not broken
mop up the blood and dispose of the broken glass
all she wants is a normal life is that too much to ask??

the funky drunk
11-06-2005, 04:03 PM
i wrote this whilst drunk...


'who goes there??' yelled the curious blind creature
as the uneasy tresspaser picked the monsters apples
the creature yelled once more 'who goes there???'
the theif did'nt reply
scared for his life he ran as fast as he could back to the bench
the bench on which he had been sleeping for the last week
only untill he got a job and some money
he was left in the cold
neck stiff
nose runny
the next dy he returned to the creatures rest spot
he didnt have a choice he had to eat!
he wore some year-old rags
And bread bags on his feet
little did he know
today he would die
whilst walking down the street
he picked his fruits as usual and began to run as usual
when he was suddenly shot
hmmm....
how unusual ...

GuardianOne
11-06-2005, 11:38 PM
Nice people, everyones verses are extremely impressive. If its not too big a word "great"

Peace

GuardianOne
11-07-2005, 02:09 AM
Proclaimed


" Entertain what can be, many things await yet to reveal themselves, till that time what more to do, as years are marked by basic intelligence, yes it is in its own pattern, much has to occur, as more and more attention is drawn, what can be done, and enjoyment of that moment is meant to have other implications, here there is no harm,did not one notice, plus there's guilt put against, appreciate that point in time, yet did have to always remind, but remain in mind, that's how much had to be believed by those at peace, as a message drifts accross the passing breeze, in its own truthfulness, solidified by realities confirmation, belief is in its spokenless transparency what could have been, but all is trying to survive".

Aqueous Moon
11-07-2005, 12:13 PM
I can't tell time wit out a rhyme
Being divine I change my mind
So I write with no rhythym or beat
till I find that my soul will never meet
The kind of flow wit nowhere to go
It bores me to death so I turn on the
radio...

GuardianOne
11-07-2005, 11:14 PM
Processes

" All gradually came forth, now makes it able to proceed, with troubles and all can learn as they go, for there's no one teaching, amongst there is equality, each give their best output, the better skill as there was to be much that was ahead, through the day, experiences change with the going times, cannot stop which all has its cycle that it proceeds with, not to be changed ever again, in its way, and to not correct in any place, but help for all, in pattern with various systems, experienced and prevail".

GuardianOne
11-08-2005, 11:49 PM
Bequeath II

" Firm as always, yet it always changes the appearence, this is not to worry, from long before and life, continued in the way, as memories become more vulnerable to realities past, and seems to be different, but has grown with in it, yet is the same surrounding, in its own process, what it gives is slow in communications output, in its own decreased cycle, for its present and might is only true, the vast changed, we are part of the change, the less things that don't experience the smaller, try to create great pace, as all this will be soon and eager to fulfill its part, as it has, one in all vastness, many try to be of its being, distroying the patterns, and think just to the point, all was real and gentle, as was a position to undergo various things, but should not influence our mind unnecessarily, yes and must proceed, those are just places that one time shall be recalled, it was a better place, how difference joins when there is set a goal, that can be distroyed, with basic conflicts, for cannot be damaged if willed, the moments took theirs, what has to be reality is passing and shattering came those spoken, with the strength was for only that, right attitudes created with few differed".

Strange Fruit
11-10-2005, 08:47 AM
One Step at a Time. (freewrite)

same illusions
drift...
drift....

stop.

is this the concrete evidence i was told to wait for?

strange to look into a mirror
and not recognise The Fallen in front
of me.

slide....

my hands, down this unusual scene:

scars fro a razor i stole in Paris,
burns from a cigarrette i killed for.

they called me criminal, spat,
and ended their days with a visit
through my cut womanhood...

it still stings...

i thought the cutting would work,
the wound stays,
the pain is greater,

and i'm bigger than i should be.

they called it my cleansing process..

it was all i could do.

and now,

concrete evidence of a freedom i never wanted.

Not Guilty.

but guilty in the eyes of the white women whose
husbands i have killed.

when they rap....ed me.

RockD
11-10-2005, 09:54 AM
the moon aura shines
speakin of dimes as dames and i just write lines
destined for shine as i write n keep it real
like a land of yields and land merchants i hold my skill
thirllin mc one afta another i kill
speakin of pressure as u feel that spine chill
like bill a mastermind facing a tragic fate
while i errect mentaly ya niggas just masturbate
rubin of ya'll i feel the hate but i just put the bait
ya'll took it and now are exposed as fake
is to late to lament the commonents of past times
i'm not flo'etry but my poetry trancends rhymes
schemes i'm reedemed by each word even in a battle field of many
my overflows rises and yields plenty
i know is an envy of how can he be so simple and yet original
because on the flow i'm not generic brand i'm high class chemical
if mathematics is the answer then my logic is supream n pure
cause my arithmic flow is the answer for an aching hearts cure
i'm the lure the adored the mc wit a purpose n a goal
i'm the suit all played and the dimond within the coal

look at battlefield 444trumpets thread for ORIGINAL

Wat ya think?

White N Dangerous
11-10-2005, 09:57 AM
Trials and tribulations got me hopen for new inovations/
Revolations become a #1 because of soul elimination/
Hopen for a better life, rappen about the same subject every night/
Gotta fight to survive, liven in the darkness with no light/

White N Dangerous
11-12-2005, 12:54 AM
The past effects the mind, through deja vu, it's passed a second time/
I have to press rewind, far away enough the track makes a U turn/
but few learn from the relationship the past drapes the future/
Flooded with cynical thoughts i release the first notion/
and freeze the time by suspending the earths motion/

the funky drunk
11-12-2005, 01:58 PM
you carry a gun 4 a rep
others carry to protect
but whatever the reason
death will be coming - looking for souls to collect

and when he knocks on your door
dont act all surprised
like you dont sell drugs
and you dont tell lies

he's coming so start running
you better watch your back
cos theres nowhere to hide
from the devils sadistic attack

bullets cant hold him back
his figure exists in the darkness
and one things for sure
the muthaf**kers heartless

once he knows your location
your as good as gone
facing unholly incarcaration
dont you wish youd lived your life differently?

Now your burning in hell
and your never gettin out
and its all your fault
arent you proud???

remember when you killed that man?
for talkin shit?
his family said they'd have revenge
yeh this is it

for all the sins commited
all the murder
all the rape
this is payback fool - enjoy

Strange Fruit
11-12-2005, 02:18 PM
Night after night, you whistle tunes of a foreign descent

And call it tradition.

Little Child, Melancholy stood there.

Come and see what I see everyday, on the other side of silence,

The bruise which faded quicker than that of your cheek.

It shouldnít happen, not in this homeÖ

Silence breathes hereÖ it laughs hereÖ

It exists.

Donít forget yourself.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
11-12-2005, 06:45 PM
damn as I'm sitting here,
I can literally hear the tears,
falling from my fallen peers,
eyes swollen eyeliner smears,
we all follow what we fear,
death surrounds us as we adhere,
caught in a tragic sphere,
evaporated souls seared...

White N Dangerous
11-12-2005, 10:14 PM
everyone gettin real deep in this piece. i like what i read , stay up everyone


A surge potent enough to tear the surfaces texture in a sense/
Like weight is measured in pounds, time is mesured in events/
Text words can't impress, so i'll help you invison this incertinty/
A old timer has a short life, while a teen lives an eternity/
it opens the next chapter and captures the bland design/
that we can live long and leave our footprints on the sands of time/
Draw it, it'll boost progression, and it will erase the proceedings/
It's time to throw away my clocks and put faith back into my feelings/

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
11-12-2005, 11:27 PM
why do we fight? ignite the superficial hype,
throats hoarse screaming all fucken night,
bodies tired dead burn in funeral pyres,
look at the iris and see the liar,
for what they are cosmic rays meteoric scars,
litter the earth archeologist I'm feeling the hurt,
spilling my science all over my shirt,
forcast overcast cloudy days no one laughs,
my feet are swollen walking with the torment...

White N Dangerous
11-15-2005, 03:21 AM
i call this one


~~Wanted to know~~

can true love out last time/
can i do time and still except you to be mine/
will you think of me even t hough i can't be there/
will you be true to me cuz you trully care/
can u be strong enough to make it through another season/
can u have heart enough to defend my honor if given reason/

girl i just wanted to know...

can i count on you to be on my team/
can i tell you i love you and you know exactly what i mean/
can u be my support when i need a crutch/
can i confess my love even though it can't be measured how much/

girl i just wanted to know...

will you confide in me and tell me how you feel in this letter/
will you try your best to make this bit easier and make me feel better/
can i count on you to accept my calls and be there to answer the phone/
when this bit is done can i count on you to take me home/

peace to my brother for writing this piece about his girl that they recently broke up. show sum love for emotions ya'll..

Revolution
11-15-2005, 05:36 PM
Night after night, you whistle tunes of a foreign descent

And call it tradition.

Little Child, Melancholy stood there.

Come and see what I see everyday, on the other side of silence,

The bruise which faded quicker than that of your cheek.

It shouldnít happen, not in this homeÖ

Silence breathes hereÖ it laughs hereÖ

It exists.

Donít forget yourself. Do you think you're a prophet or something? You're not deep, you're just another attention whore who can't get her 'poems' published in real life so you post it online. Your typing style is stupid, also. You're not unique, you ain't special. You lost as a poet and you lost at life.

Strange Fruit
11-15-2005, 06:01 PM
Do you think you're a prophet or something? You're not deep, you're just another attention whore who can't get her 'poems' published in real life so you post it online. Your typing style is stupid, also. You're not unique, you ain't special. You lost as a poet and you lost at life.
hmmmm.... i think i've seen this somewhere... oh wait, yes! your PM... did you save this just so you can copy and paste it?? just for me???? that's so cute Revvy!!!!

awwwwwww!!! :f :f :f :f :f

well... now that you've been noticed you fucking louse,
go crawl back into your little hole and wait until the world decides to notice you again.
i've had just about enough of your bullshitting on this site and you make me sick.

so BACK THE FUCK OFF YOU CREATURE!

thank you, and have a nice day.


people, continue with your poetry writing.

Cheech Da WildKard
11-15-2005, 06:06 PM
Do you think you're a prophet or something? You're not deep, you're just another attention whore who can't get her 'poems' published in real life so you post it online. Your typing style is stupid, also. You're not unique, you ain't special. You lost as a poet and you lost at life.
What's up with you fam? ...The lady is just posting her poetry, like this thread is for. If you don't like it, kill yaself.

White N Dangerous
11-15-2005, 06:07 PM
lol straight up

nut_end
11-15-2005, 06:44 PM
its said that the woman is wisdom
between the state of mind and regeneration
the center of heart that bears soul
the temple betwixt holy of holy
where lessons of the civil towards lies
are brought like eyes to the skies
and reproduced like earth and fruit
granting substance that metaphysically replenish
thoughts to thinking that lead amongst brink in
ledge where know edge thats hot and cutting
for the temperance of bearing all or nothing
about the paths pointed where compass annointed
from words to encourage prudence over courage
full hearted but never to be fool hearty
giving teeth to chew to discern smart be
patience waiting brewing and instilling
virtues veritable clues to ways not to lose
through the birth from out their womb
though preconceived in brain as full bloom
to guide along days through nights twilight
until the outter limits are transcended
and reflections are reflected before tomb is heeded

Potent1
11-16-2005, 01:26 AM
the games people play are reflected in their shadows, mental battle

cupid shot the poison arrow, leaving a weak heart sleepless in Seattle

and for a full beat it almost seemed real, before you sealed the deal

your motives were revealed, this moments familiar, still feels surreal

Iím just your sport, another thought, a spectator on this nuccas court

but truth is Iím built like war forts and your games fall a fourth short

these eyes experience truer lies that were bluer then cloudy skies

ILL tries, but like a soldier you fall in line with these other guys

digging trenches with plastic spoons, impression of a blue lagoon

in sand dunes, but dreams like these only produce a new buffoon

my blind eyes are fine tuned, to swiftly spotting Waldo and frauds

queens accord mastered the design of your wooden chess board,

Iím naÔve to why you choose play with mine, I was stuck in time

you went back, its clear as day, like a posted sign, my feelings pine

still faith hold fast but not for long, Iím always there when ALL is gone


and thatís just wrong, but what doesnít kill me, will make me strong
sing your song - Iíll play my position disguised as the devils pawn
check mate your illicit game, reaching square 8 when evening dawns
remain queen of my throne, I warned you too, you shouldíve known
game of hearts, youíll stand alone, already knew I was playing your clone







Ja tu sabes!!

nut_end
11-16-2005, 04:45 AM
their minds don't benefit, for the heart thought too



rock from heart when stick with mind the words from mouth to hurt the blind forming no pain in death when know gain is better breath to breathe like alleviate re instate like works of brain where cells can range the gamut making game a slam shut being case is brief though the statements increase like foot notes to headers more post scripts on letters sent like bottles plugged with stoppers unless blow as kettle when drummed by genei inside for eternity or spirit of the century that zeitgeist that might bless showing signs in or not gest like swallow when truth accept the whole wisdom allows for chew with tooth unless cavity provides hole to stumble choke on the facts like to mumble piling geez whiz c'mon no bids knowing the place time person rhyme come bind to intertwine not tain abstain from strain to stain come clean like rain water fall on pane still can't count down the drain the shorts this card retorts be bards like shaking spears not fist they wagging tongues shooting spit really riled to a file grinding down from the nile so ancient when place meant more in terms of dates since formed out the norm standing apart in the storm for head in clouds where shoulders wear shrouds get talking to with stars and walking for the bar raised from the scar for battles fought hard outside the door or behind the eyes taking it to streets without knowing why better ways to act thinking redact the fact that knots fiction through science of diction the jargon in lingo sound smart to sprinkle names or speech like out of time to consider reach where split allegiances makes tongues believe its in power though coward to end their flight snaking after achilles while grems of hermes take flight.

sign what?!
ecaep, pu s'emit .c.o ot tcepser eud lla htiw

Potent1
11-16-2005, 12:26 PM
"ecaep, pu s'emit .c.o ot tcepser eud lla htiw"


does this mean you didn't write it or is that anotha handle you go by??

nut_end
11-16-2005, 02:30 PM
yes i wrote it and no not another handle, not into aliases. its a nod of appreciation to another poet written backwards. what it says is:

with all due respect to o.c. time's up, peace

Potent1
11-16-2005, 02:54 PM
no I understood, I thought you were giving props to the original writer...

Revolution
11-16-2005, 03:25 PM
hmmmm.... i think i've seen this somewhere... oh wait, yes! your PM... did you save this just so you can copy and paste it?? just for me???? that's so cute Revvy!!!!

awwwwwww!!! :f :f :f :f :f

well... now that you've been noticed you fucking louse,
go crawl back into your little hole and wait until the world decides to notice you again.
i've had just about enough of your bullshitting on this site and you make me sick.

so BACK THE FUCK OFF YOU CREATURE!

thank you, and have a nice day.


people, continue with your poetry writing.All PM's are auto-saved, in case you didn't know and thanks for acknowledging me. I like how you don't type in the usual bullshit typing style you do. I post my opinions (the truth) and you get angry? What is this world coming to? I didn't know that white girls loved Erika Badu this much.

dif de la rev
02-03-2006, 01:05 AM
sex six sexes from ninety million miles at one eighty six thou in a second call it the play before satellite displays quarters or phases the base running is actually summon to go forth like worth of while the eight miles to the limit and the infinite to spend it in vicinity or vacumed where the suction and friction make soliciting like election the two for one like menage a trois for the sun waxing and taxing the moon with hickey that shine to sweating the earth like profusely at birth that come out like ejaculate isms or eggs as given to be dispersed in the earth through moon from sun the hot sex on the cool set

dif de la rev
02-11-2006, 07:40 AM
nine mental militants from knowledge to born sat around the table like a caper to get plenty of corn from cornucopia taking the cream that deems sweet to mind the asinine crime of working the mine to dig the pine that tar the spine like a feather unable to weather the storm the brain forms under duress fighting the drought to gather whatís best in war the nine had the one twenty in store for takers fakers and do not but sayers being serpent slayers using pertinent layers of tactics akin to wisdom the henchmen squad takes quads and curves battling back doodads with out swerve for straight in line the connection of time to disperse what dispense the seed that weeds like raise from raze in the garden be snakes rats dogs and monkeys hoping to land a back to pig the g the ode to d vine of three triads with forms for by peace in piece knowing stand ledge under no wonder to thunder when connect to blunder the passive into potential active taking arms and hoods reworking the blood to good from evolve the nine bent to solve the retro with avant the guard not changing

ST .PAUL
02-12-2006, 04:46 AM
Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary,
and more Bloody Mary, this Living Dead bitch is fuckin' scary!
Nailz through my skull, Chordz in my exturnal plugged in full, don't ask why,
Trailz of shells and Cigarrette butts, Techs burn you all, Paul, don't ask why,
Seein' tha Angelz crie, I wipe the blood from her eye,
Holding the only thing I ever loved, covered in blood and dirt from what I dug,
Bein' a gravedigger gotz to mean something,
momma always tolled me the devil was coming, cuttin' off the flesh & A.I Plug,
Hiden' corpses under the rug, What have I done,
Waking up in a bloody mess, somethin' must've tolled me to grab a gun,
possesed at the alter I might stab a nun, feelingz left me commaticlyenhanced
emotionz I got none, Call me Azrael fallin' Angel from Heaven,
Burning in Hell, holding ol' world weaponz for armaggeddon,
Nevermore said the Raven as the headz were taken, with soulz forsakend,
After the end I awakend, For if I didn't see the devil himself I wouldn't be here
No deal under the table can be worse than the fuck over I got,
A chain drags my body while my brains wrapped in lost morbid memories,
Laying in Hells Pitt for Centuries covered with flies and maggotz on my corpse,
Barbwired shut Tourniquet woundz drip slowly out of marbles laid by my gutz,
Addicted to something I can never have forever mad, Mantled on satanz wall,
What a nice call, the devilz pie is never worth the slice, see the childz fall,
and stz creation, with a glock 9 in ya' mouth you may call me Paul, soul taking
Brains splattered on Walls which wrote my namez fourth coming,
Plague Poetry Proffesional!
Plotting to take over the world and watch tha blood start running...
Plastic dollz i'm breaking.

ok sorry I tried 2 make it a poem i just got into it, my bad, I'm high...WUUUU!!

dif de la rev
02-13-2006, 12:47 AM
ode to death

where does thou hide in in this ashen face revealing a smile with vacum stares that foretell the coming of the reaper in the i know it not is it a telling of what life is all to be the last laugh having others be their own burden by the butt of their joke i ask of my face again smile or scream when the spite did strike off thou nose this reminiscence of a life once upon alive uttering the one silent screaming truth i dare or should not grasp for the phantoms that lie in thine eyes which arise