View Full Version : Wandering Thoughts (years of progress)

08-19-2005, 04:15 PM

This is solid, gimme some fair criticism

08-19-2005, 05:15 PM
i dont like how u chang ur voice when u rap

08-19-2005, 05:55 PM
what do you mean? my inflection?

08-19-2005, 07:55 PM
yea the hook u sound normal but when ur verse hits u change ur voice like ur trying to obtain the hardcore sound like jedi mind tricks or somthing ..u know...i mean hey do what u want..im just saying what i think........

but keep donig ur thing...lets see what others have to say

08-19-2005, 09:34 PM
like I said dude, criticism is what I wanted here, I know you're not hatin on it. you're right too, I do sound too gravely, and it does kinda remind me of what vinnie paz goes for.

08-20-2005, 12:26 AM
Pretty Good!
Work on the delivery some more and you got it.
You can tell who has heart!

08-21-2005, 05:54 AM
just relax with your spittin , your goin for the pissed off sound that's aight , but just chill a bit , might be just me but i really wasn't feelin the hook and the beat needs a bigger bassline , the atmosphere is aight for an aggressive tune but i think it could probably use a bit of "juicin" up .