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Ritter
06-07-2008, 08:32 PM
Verse 1 : Shizzah

Classified paragraph, I use the main element
Give me a pen and I'll make you irrelevant
While I gaze at the stars,counting the sky scars
Put my eye through the lense of the telescope
My mind blown,hence the verse I wrote
Twisted graphics you don't see in horror flicks
The answer to all questions,written in the mix
The blend of stars forming an irregular pattern
The nebulae in the distance,glowing like a lantern
The energy,it just blows my mind
It's funny how in one moment you see millions of years behind
A gas cloud looking like a flock of gryphons
To unknown sources of life I'm driven
Born to be an astrophysician
The extraterrestrial is the answer for which I'm livin
I hear knocking at a door and I don't give a damn
I wan't to see as much as I can
I saw an asteroid cluster and was amazed
For minutes and minutes in the same spot I gazed
To wonder across the sky,that's how I was raised
But the images aside,let the two great lives collide
Let my man whers tell you about what's blowing his mind

Verse 2: whers

Thanks Shizzah...I Got 'Em In The Piledriver
Like Zangief Your Gonna Need More Than A Handkerchief
Coz You Be Deceased For Showing A Lack Of Belief...
Me & Shizzah Silence Beats
From London To Belgrade Our Style Is Tailor Made
With A Touch Of Black Swede On Headstones Names Are Engraved
Zombies Rise Out Of The Grave And Feast On The Afraid
You'll Be Amazed At The Display But Wish You Never Stayed
Yo It's Been A Long Time...Since I Wrote My Last Rhyme
Come Through Rocking A Sword On My Arm Like Optimus Prime
I Bring A New Meaning To "Off The Top Of The Dome"
When I Point At Yours...And Watch You Moan
Picture A Platoon Of Baboons Hanging From Baloons Holding Harpoons
Or Apostles Reading Demonic Gospels I Burn Your Eyes Like Hostel
I'm Colossal Take You Deeper Than Fossils
Or The Dreams Of Stephen Hawkins Anything Is Possible
I Bring Forth The Warmth Of Hell And The Weapons Of Heaven
Like Six And Seven You Got No Clue Where You Heading
The Sectret Societies Are Running The Globe...
Turning It To Mould But I Doubt The Truth Will Ever Be Told
Have To Wait And See And Grow Old

Verse 2,5: Shizzah

People think they can stop the lyricism
We split light into colors like a prism
But we split heads like brutal assassins
Cutting with axes, through the masses
Invincible to blasters, the rhyme masters
You can run fast,but we can catch you faster

Verse 3: whers

It's A Natural Disaster Like The Wu Rhyming Over Starter
The Man With The Hook Roaming The Harbour
My Shaolin VS Lama Possana Smoking Blunts At Safaris In Botswana
Never Fearing Karma We Attack Harder And Bombard Ya
Whats All The Pularver ?

Guarded By Martyrs
06-07-2008, 09:00 PM
http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk173/whers1/sylar_landslide014.jpg

I'm feeling this.
Kicking back with some food.

I would like to hear some opinions..............

Ritter
06-07-2008, 09:13 PM
http://www.latenightconspiracy.com/maddy/laurie.jpg

His mind is blown.

Maccabee Ridah
06-07-2008, 09:34 PM
Yo guyz, I am fuckin amazed...
Great verses...
Just fuckin dope..
I would like to hear some1 rap this over some sick beat..
It would be fuckin great....
This reminds me of da RZA..
It is like his style of rhyming...
Full of the knowledge, and wisdom...

Biggest props for shizz & whers....!!!

Peace..........
-suuuuuuu///

OTB
06-07-2008, 11:32 PM
yo this sh-t cuts clownz-
too swift to bite and record and write it down-

epic work Shizzah and whers!!
epic!!

i'm lookin 4ward to more of this, and i mite just jump in with a verse sometime-

peace-

worldwide rimez yall--

Guarded By Martyrs
06-07-2008, 11:34 PM
Much appreciated bro...
You know your welcome anytime.

PEACE

Ritter
06-08-2008, 05:04 AM
Thanks fam,expect more of us these days.

PEACE y'all,appreciated

OTB
06-08-2008, 12:39 PM
Wu-Tang lieutenant - I wave the iron pennant
wifey'z pregnant or I'd knife you daily with my sharpened pendant
penchant for ill penmanship
scripts like Zen and sh-t
repent - amongst my brethren of henchmen youll never attain membership
swerve w/ emceez from London and Serbia
OTB murderin herbz for fun in slumz or suburbia
servin up international head-cracks thru the Pioneer speakerboxx
Reeboks to your teeth before I'm out - then I'll be back like the equinox

Ritter
06-09-2008, 04:44 AM
Wu-Tang lieutenant - I wave the iron pennant
wifey'z pregnant or I'd knife you daily with my sharpened pendant
penchant for ill penmanship
scripts like Zen and sh-t
repent - amongst my brethren of henchmen youll never attain membership
swerve w/ emceez from London and Serbia
OTB murderin herbz for fun in slumz or suburbia
servin up international head-cracks thru the Pioneer speakerboxx
Reeboks to your teeth before I'm out - then I'll be back like the equinox

That is real dope my man OTB... keep em coming. Expect a new written soon.

J.T.S.
06-09-2008, 02:47 PM
Excellent guys no critique needed!

Sleep Sinatra
06-09-2008, 05:27 PM
dope imagery yall bringin it

good shit

Ritter
06-10-2008, 07:52 PM
Verse 1 : Shizzah

Six days lying in the bed with my knees bended
My brain cells are dangerously rendered
My pupils red instead of black,almost as if they bleed
Waiting for days to get at least an hour of sleep
Nothing to eat, I can't feel myself breathe
My stomach failing,I can't even feel it
Someones calling,but the voice is too faint to hear it
If it could get nearer, because I can't move a bit
How come sleeping pills are a hypocrit?
'For better and longer sleep',you wish
In the past week, air was your favorite dish
Pictures quickly rushing through my head
As if in one of them, I saw myself dead
Voice in the back of my head telling me to give in
I'm shivering,and pretending I ain't listening
'Open the window, open the window'
'Fuck you, I ain't making Mary a widow'
'Take the knife, take the knife'
'Shut up,get the fuck out my life'
The smell of strive, I could feel it around me
The killing spree pictures surround me
The real situation is not as good as it sounded
Crest on my chest, and a sore in my veins
A couple of meds should take away the pain
Am I capable of reaching them with my one hand
I spit on the floor whats left of my PT gland
The image was grand, the colors were non-existent
How could I be so persistent,listen
There's a lot of sleep I'm missin
My neurological system is self-dissin
In the house with no lights,sleep is everything
And I don't seem to get any,it's tragic
But what's keeping an eyelid open for a week? Magic

Verse 2: whers

My Eyes Haven't Closed For Over A Year And I Fear
That I Will Never Dream Again...
Like All I Hear Are The Chimes Of Big Ben...
So With The Pen I Transcend And Start To Comprehend
Why Sleep Is No Longer My Friend
I Toss And Turn Let The Ganja Burn
As The Clock Hands Turn...
It's Like My Eye-Lids Have Been Burned
Look Out Of My Window Listening To Kiss Of A Black Widow
Flip The Pillow...I Can't Sleep...All I Can Hear Is My Heart Beat...
With The Sound Of My Blood Flow...
Is It Me...Or Does The Joker Look Like The Crow ?
And Didn't They Both Die While Filming...Bewildering
Similar To The Abilites That I Was Concealing...
Like Holding A Man Up On The Ceeling
Now My Eyes Are Closing...Should I Surrender Or Endeavour ?
Will It Be Like This Forever ?
Brain Swirling Like A Propeller...And It Severs
The Top Of Your Skull Whether Friend Or Foe
If You Got Shit Ain't...I Wanna Know
Take It Back To The Days Of Old...
Making Angels In Snow When I Was Too Young To Know
My Search Is Fast And Frantic...
It's All Semantics But When I Killed That Mechanic
For A While I Couldn't Stand It Somehow My Weakness Expanded
But Through Time I Came To Understand It...
Now I Can Hear A Pin Drop From Miles Away...
Amazing Wouldn't You Say ?
Like MK I Stalk My Enemy Like Prey
And Deliver Fatal Hits...On Some Fight Club Shit...
Everywhere I Turn I See Brad Pitt....

Ritter
06-11-2008, 06:35 PM
Bumping the thread so I could see some opinions
When you read this, you'll know we're two in a billion

OTB
06-11-2008, 07:22 PM
yo shizz-
the joker/crow linez are straight SPECIAL homey-

peace-
keep postin gemz-

Ritter
06-11-2008, 07:24 PM
yo shizz-
the joker/crow linez are straight SPECIAL homey-

peace-
keep postin gemz-

That's whers' rhymes actually. I flipped when I read it.

Peep my Mental Asylum.

peace fam

OTB
06-11-2008, 07:28 PM
off the top-

so tired
i cant go to sleep
seedz sowed inspired grim flowz of raps reaped
peep the overly optimal weed level in the Optimo
tropical-red optical - the Lord'z sword chops iz droppin hoez
top of your knot got lopped off when the windz blow
you forgot OTB pump shots, what the blood clot-
your momz and pops like willowz weep
you 6 feet - i'm blowin peach philliez billowz sweet

beautifulrock
06-11-2008, 07:30 PM
ill

OTB
06-11-2008, 07:30 PM
oh yeah^^

nice whers!
what up bro-

yo shizz i peeped your asylum, ill darts-

i saw the pics before the rimez-
sherlock holmez, the graveyard and all that-

nice work bro-

peace-

Ritter
06-11-2008, 07:36 PM
Thanks OTB, you've got some mad talent from what I've seen so far. Props

peace

beautifulrock
06-11-2008, 07:44 PM
See if you can comprehend this juxtaposition
of darkness and a revolving prism, wrapped around my mind's vision
submerged into the depths of Hades, smokin' blunts with naked ladies
While a fierce Cerberus with rabies, guards my wealth, and jewels and babies
puffin on clouds with angels, Celestial bodies that nave no angles
and nobody around's a stranger, I feel so tranquil there is no danger
it revolves again and the sun don't shine, everything's fucked and nothings fine
but i'll be iron until when, the sun comes back around again

Ritter
06-11-2008, 07:57 PM
See if you can comprehend this juxtaposition
of darkness and a revolving prism, wrapped around my mind's vision
submerged into the depths of Hades, smokin' blunts with naked ladies
While fierce a Cerberus with rabies, guards my wealth, and jewels and babies
puffin on clouds with angels, Celestial bodies that nave no angles
and nobody around's a stranger, I feel so tranquil there is no danger
it revolves again and the sun don't shine, everything's fucked and nothings fine
but i'll be iron until when, the sun comes back around again

Motivate from the gate y'all B-Rock's in the house!!

Sinapse
06-13-2008, 10:59 PM
I don't really fuck wit text rhymes...but i figured i'd comment on this, i'm high and listening to some beats, decided to peep some text rhymes...

First, i enjoyed reading these...i read them with beats on in the background and the verses are full of imagery and in general worded quite well. I figured i'd give you some real feedback in case you want it....I felt both of you guys have a somewhat poorly structured flow, it was hard to get bars on beat consistently..cuz the spacing of ya rhyme syllables is not balanced, some of ya bars are too long and also you got a lotta lines with too many non rhyming words that sorta throw off the flow, try to make a more complicated scheme...you can use more internal rhymes and generate longer multies (mostly 2 syllable rhymes i see, not a lot of 3-4 or even more) and still have rich imagery and dope metaphors, so from a rhyme complexity stand point i think you could do a lot more...having a lot of rhyming syllables in the middle of lines, not just at the end (you have some, im not saying you have none) will help create a cadence, even if you just spit it in accapella...just some thoughts...still good creative lyrics...PEACE

Lil' Ruger
06-13-2008, 11:14 PM
Paragraphs infect the minds of young children
supa hero type rest on sky scrapers and buildings
smooth operator i felt it cloaked in red velvet
the blood you smell it Slice the heads off of the mentally dead
im credited with sellin medicine to heretics
the hatchet ive never buried it its in my left
cuz i never do the right thing i aint spike lee
smite me im too sick u catch pnumonia tryna battle me
my goons pack them ratchets they'll blast it
with a black casket to lay down you ungrateful bastards
mastered this artform the darts swarm
and torn your heart warm ive scorned
felt forlorn since i was born and ive never been on the norm
murderous like freddy krueger
carry a german luger despite my user ive disregarded lil ruger
im a shooter lil wayne leave you witta little stain
cuz ive riddled ya frame leave you maimed when i belittle the game
then twiddle your brain cuz ur fickle and lame


lol had too drop a free that was so dope keep it going if u guys want text collabs hit me up.

Guarded By Martyrs
06-14-2008, 12:03 PM
the joker/crow linez are straight SPECIAL homey-

peace-
keep postin gemz-

Thanks a lot bro...How you been ?
Yeah I thought it was a bit strange when I came up with it !!!!!
Spooky.

I don't really fuck wit text rhymes...but i figured i'd comment on this, i'm high and listening to some beats, decided to peep some text rhymes...

First, i enjoyed reading these...i read them with beats on in the background and the verses are full of imagery and in general worded quite well. I figured i'd give you some real feedback in case you want it....I felt both of you guys have a somewhat poorly structured flow, it was hard to get bars on beat consistently..cuz the spacing of ya rhyme syllables is not balanced, some of ya bars are too long and also you got a lotta lines with too many non rhyming words that sorta throw off the flow, try to make a more complicated scheme...you can use more internal rhymes and generate longer multies (mostly 2 syllable rhymes i see, not a lot of 3-4 or even more) and still have rich imagery and dope metaphors, so from a rhyme complexity stand point i think you could do a lot more...having a lot of rhyming syllables in the middle of lines, not just at the end (you have some, im not saying you have none) will help create a cadence, even if you just spit it in accapella...just some thoughts...still good creative lyrics...PEACE

Thanks for the advice...
I'm no Emcee...this is just some fun.
I spat them verses over beats and they sounded fine to me...
But I'll take your opinions on baord and try to work on that.
Regarding too long or too many random words...
I can spit those verses with no problem...
But I can understand where you are comming from
It's hard to judge others "Rhyme-Style"
But next time I spit one...I'll take your thoughts into consideration.

PEACE

Ritter
06-14-2008, 01:54 PM
I don't really fuck wit text rhymes...but i figured i'd comment on this, i'm high and listening to some beats, decided to peep some text rhymes...

First, i enjoyed reading these...i read them with beats on in the background and the verses are full of imagery and in general worded quite well. I figured i'd give you some real feedback in case you want it....I felt both of you guys have a somewhat poorly structured flow, it was hard to get bars on beat consistently..cuz the spacing of ya rhyme syllables is not balanced, some of ya bars are too long and also you got a lotta lines with too many non rhyming words that sorta throw off the flow, try to make a more complicated scheme...you can use more internal rhymes and generate longer multies (mostly 2 syllable rhymes i see, not a lot of 3-4 or even more) and still have rich imagery and dope metaphors, so from a rhyme complexity stand point i think you could do a lot more...having a lot of rhyming syllables in the middle of lines, not just at the end (you have some, im not saying you have none) will help create a cadence, even if you just spit it in accapella...just some thoughts...still good creative lyrics...PEACE

Basically, I write verses on topic. And like whers said, for fun. I don't intend to record. But if you look at it, it's hard to put up twisted images and good flow. To put up images you need various adjectives that sometimes are hard to structure in rhymes. But I try to adapt it to the flow as much as I can.

I feel you on the complexity, and the syllable opinion. English is not my primary language. So basically, I have a lot of time to improve on that.

PEACE to you.

DR. NICK RIVIERA
06-19-2008, 07:58 PM
I really like to read stuff like this - and I'll contribute - gotta write some crazy Weraziel shit to be on ya level

OTB
06-19-2008, 09:20 PM
whenever a biterz found, i bind 'em in ropes and vices
no hope for their limbz, i'm bringin down 12 inch miter slicez
polo and timz stay spotless, blood runz down the drain

blanked-
yo line 4 whers or shizz??

peace-

Ritter
06-19-2008, 09:33 PM
whenever a biterz found, i bind 'em in ropes and vices
no hope for their limbz, i'm bringin down 12 inch miter slicez
polo and timz stay spotless, blood runz down the drain

blanked-
yo line 4 whers or shizz??

peace-

Chop your head off, it's gonna leave a stain?... maybe... I wanted to chop a head off... or...

When you cross me, you'll learn the definition of pain

Guarded By Martyrs
06-19-2008, 09:45 PM
whenever a biterz found, i bind 'em in ropes and vices
no hope for their limbz, i'm bringin down 12 inch miter slicez
polo and timz stay spotless, blood runz down the drain...


Just Like Your Paper Boat You Wont Float...You'll Sink...And Never Be Found Again
Like My Man OTB I'm "On The Brink"...Of Insanity
Yall Hug The Floor Like A Manatee When I Bring The Catastropy
This Ain't No Fallacy...When I Point My Index...Like RZA I Bring The Tragedy

DR. NICK RIVIERA
06-20-2008, 04:14 AM
Somebody said 'Tragedy'? Some MCs are pussies, so why the faggotry?
Weraziel, crazy as ever, only getting more inhuman and better, sunlight is killing me
so I'm gonna kill the sun, with my shoulder cannongun
and then I hid my mechanical parts inside of me and scare a bum
Armageddon touch, killing all snakes with a Cobra clutch
I allow myself a lot of things, and I don't have any guts!!
I am my own king, I rule the same for all my body parts
and I don't react in the hug of a poisonous tarantula attack
High Definition brutality for ya, my words are sharp
like a double-edged guillotine or the tip of killing darts
I'm possesed, nobody can save me, I spit azbest
they cutted off my head once, BAH, was that their best?
I'm high off my rhymes, cuz extasy disappointed me
I'm an HIV pacient, so nobody can fuck with me
hiphop is a religion, an overdose is the right amount
so I lay my words in catacombs, so they can be found
u can hear my possessed voice, when u read the books
my trophy room show skulls on rusty hooks
I laugh without making noises in a space of endless dimensions
vibrate my voice into waves to crash worlds, I pour attention
chain-reactions, than I make intergalactic battleships
outta fractions of planets, gettin' ready for another hit
gods on thrones are over-thrown, they aren't immortal
to me, I throw them into unknown doom-like portals
barb wires in people throats when they speak my name
I'm greatly known, my fame is inflicting massive pain
I give u a revolver with six bullets at a russian roullette
and show your guardian angel trapped in a cage




get at me, what do ya think?

Ritter
06-20-2008, 07:26 PM
whenever a biterz found, i bind 'em in ropes and vices
no hope for their limbz, i'm bringin down 12 inch miter slicez
polo and timz stay spotless, blood runz down the drain...


Just Like Your Paper Boat You Wont Float...You'll Sink...And Never Be Found Again
Like My Man OTB I'm "On The Brink"...Of Insanity
Yall Hug The Floor Like A Manatee When I Bring The Catastropy
This Ain't No Fallacy...When I Point My Index...Like RZA I Bring The Tragedy

That was off the hook whers... Glad to have you back

Ritter
06-20-2008, 07:28 PM
Somebody said 'Tragedy'? Some MCs are pussies, so why the faggotry?
Weraziel, crazy as ever, only getting more inhuman and better, sunlight is killing me
so I'm gonna kill the sun, with my shoulder cannongun
and then I hid my mechanical parts inside of me and scare a bum
Armageddon touch, killing all snakes with a Cobra clutch
I allow myself a lot of things, and I don't have any guts!!
I am my own king, I rule the same for all my body parts
and I don't react in the hug of a poisonous tarantula attack
High Definition brutality for ya, my words are sharp
like a double-edged guillotine or the tip of killing darts
I'm possesed, nobody can save me, I spit azbest
they cutted off my head once, BAH, was that their best?
I'm high off my rhymes, cuz extasy disappointed me
I'm an HIV pacient, so nobody can fuck with me
hiphop is a religion, an overdose is the right amount
so I lay my words in catacombs, so they can be found
u can hear my possessed voice, when u read the books
my trophy room show skulls on rusty hooks
I laugh without making noises in a space of endless dimensions
vibrate my voice into waves to crash worlds, I pour attention
chain-reactions, than I make intergalactic battleships
outta fractions of planets, gettin' ready for another hit
gods on thrones are over-thrown, they aren't immortal
to me, I throw them into unknown doom-like portals
barb wires in people throats when they speak my name
I'm greatly known, my fame is inflicting massive pain
I give u a revolver with six bullets at a russian roullette
and show your guardian angel trapped in a cage




get at me, what do ya think?

You really have a very good vocabulary,and complexity, remind me of Gravediggaz for some reason.

That's real good.

PEACE Weraziel

DR. NICK RIVIERA
06-20-2008, 07:49 PM
thanks, I try for a foreign as much as I can =)

Ritter
06-21-2008, 05:07 AM
thanks, I try for a foreign as much as I can =)

I feel you. I'm foreign too, so I know what you mean.

Where are you from?

DR. NICK RIVIERA
06-22-2008, 06:51 PM
Slovenia. :)

U r from Serbia or somewhere there, right? If I'm not mistaken.

Ritter
06-23-2008, 02:43 AM
Slovenia. :)

U r from Serbia or somewhere there, right? If I'm not mistaken.

Yup, Belgrade...

DR. NICK RIVIERA
06-25-2008, 04:55 PM
I'm a super MC, too cool for mics, I freeze through
constructed from best body parts of your favourite rap crew
too dangerous for viruses, that's why they don't attack me
the scientists named me 'The human black arachnid'
Siegmund Freud complex, to fuck is my daily mission
to fuck heads severly even with the stream I'm pissin'
the depression Williams had was nothing, smoking a chief
I'm mostly sad, that makes me more aggresive,
please believe
I'm one disgusting ugly M-F, but I don't wanna die
altho I don't believe I'll turn to a colorful butterfly
I'll be the one caging souls in my demonic Alcatraz
experimenting my rhymes on prisoners with a blast
my dream is to be Genghis Khan, the king of the world
but the way I'm destroying it, there's barely a thing to control
so don't test me, I went through all the tests and question marks
no matter what, always in front, like Rosa Parks



i keep it easy :)

12weLvE
06-26-2008, 10:03 AM
HAHA cool shit... little cyphers going on. Dope lyrics by both.

Ritter
06-26-2008, 11:03 AM
HAHA cool shit... little cyphers going on. Dope lyrics by both.

Fam, I checked your myspace,and you have freaking bombs up in there.

If I'd ever drop an album, or a track, or whatever, I'd ask you to be my producer.

Guarded By Martyrs
06-26-2008, 12:50 PM
Yeah Chek has some serious shit huh Shizz^

HAHA cool shit... little cyphers going on. Dope lyrics by both.

PEACE Chek...really appreciate it.

OTB
06-26-2008, 09:08 PM
i got the illest, most abnormal sound and speech-
fill up seats underground like killah priest, mos, and immortal technique-
i'll serve ya momz til her kneez iz weak - you dont want beef-
OTB drop bombz like the Gaza strip and Mazar-e Sharif



h ha, yo what up whers and shizz-
jus wanted to drop a fast off the top rime tonite-

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Ritter
07-01-2008, 05:23 AM
I don't brag about guns, I pack nines for fun
I split your head in a split second
Trimmin, leave you spinnin like a record
I bring the lethal lyrical bravado
Like vampires on a Blood Masquearado

---

Here's one to keep up the cypher.

SKAMPOE
07-03-2008, 03:52 PM
dope shit whers n shizza props!

Ritter
07-03-2008, 07:06 PM
Thanks fam. Appreciate it.

beautifulrock
07-03-2008, 07:12 PM
this is a work in progress

I need a fuck, and a quick one at that
bag her if I have to but make it no time flat
If she ain't a fuck 1st dater, then call me a hater,
I'm keepin' my cheddar, I'd rather be a masturbater.
and I'm not talking loose man and not at all fat
some Kegel exercises will take care of that

Succumb to those knees,
didn't have to say NOW BITCH
please,
I don't have to say please to get a shorty to please
Me, appease me
my bobblehead fills yo mouth, bulge yo cheek

Don't keep that speed!
you won't succeed!

Your head will fall off before I reach my peak
yea thats it baby drink it up, slurp it up,
yea swallow it all, whoops (hiccup) don't burp it up
baby
yeah baby so sweet,
so sweet and warm with a pearly glow to your cheeks
I nutted
I nutted all
I nutted all in yo grill ,don't need no butterball
no shorty, not this time worty
what you need some cab fare?
heres about forty.

Now get the FUCK out.

Ritter
07-03-2008, 07:31 PM
B-Rock an his pussy...

edit: Moved...

Ritter
07-06-2008, 09:59 PM
whers & Shizzah

- The Real Deal

I Pity The Fool Who Pull Metal Like Magneto
Eventually Your Guts Will Spill On The Street Though
That's What Happens When You Refuse To Fight With Fists
But To The Weak Minded...I Guess It's Sheer Bliss ?
Warn You Test Me I Send You To The Abyss
My Index Verses Your Running Piss...
I Think We Both Know What The Outcome Is...
Murder In The First Degree Unable To Flee
Shizzah And I Travel On Space Ships...Can't See ?
Best Give Your Face A Lift
And I Ain't Talking About Women Over Forty Trying To Look Fit
Just Look Up And You Will See The Spinning Disc
Our Craft Descending For The Mass Beheading...
The Pain Is Neverending For Your People
This Is The Cost Of Human Beings Being Feeble
I Move Cerebral Smooth Elegant And Slick
Now Witness The Greatest Magic Trick Don't Blink
I Won't Even Warn You Like A Snake's Hiss
As I Turn Into Mist Even H And J Can't See Where I Is
Ask My Man Shizz He'll Tell You How It Is
I'm Like A One Man Army With The Star Of Binary
Bringing The Tyranny Of A Tyranosaurus Rex...Like Bring Who's Next ?
And Leave You Hugging The Concrete Steps For Trying To Test
You Can't Withstand The Attack...
Like The Cuban Linx Cover I've Got A Ghost Watching My Back
Venom Monsoon Surround The Room Spelling Doom
Causing Peter Parker's Heart Beat Faster...
Call Me The Master Of Disaster Or Cassius Clay Either Way...
I Still Bring The Heat Like A Flambé
And Reign With Domination Even When I Get Shot
To Quote Abomination..."Is That All You've Got ?"

No whers I've got some more for them check the plot
When we corrupt the spot, even skeletons do the "Body Rock"
A cluster of bombs devouring the ground
They found, live rounds of devastating sound
Digging up my notebook, discovery of archeology
Learn to differ Astronomy from Astrology
Blue,green,black,yellow or white, day or night
Energy in colors is transmitted whenever I write
The Sun spitting its whips of plasma and fuel
We roam around it like an Indian around a jewel
Black belt individuals with the lyrics that are critical
We a part of a residual, that visuals the miracle
The pinnacle of art, our finishing is clinical
Dark rhymes that make an optimist cynical
Lyricists unique, with the technique to speak
In a way that threatens the peeps
My man whers on some Fight Club shit, he never sleeps
Better read twice if you don't understand
And remember, we always have the upper hand
Other keep money, we keep rhymes in rubberband
Police searching us, they get banned for finding contraband
Give the universe some space and time
To prepare for the two minds combined
With a twisted psychological state
Top form generals, like Alexander the Great
No one can rest in peace when we desecrate
We instill fear like Vakill, Can You Relate?

Ritter
07-07-2008, 08:54 AM
Drop your thoughts on 'The Real Deal'.

"I stay off the hook like candyman"

beautifulrock
07-07-2008, 10:12 AM
Drop your thoughts on 'The Real Deal'.

"I stay of the hook like candyman"

the wording is weird, do you mean OFF?

Why do people not know the difference between of and off on this site, I noticed that.

VZA
07-07-2008, 10:33 AM
Shizzahs stuff is OK, but whers is poor.

Ritter
07-07-2008, 10:42 AM
the wording is weird, do you mean OFF?

Why do people not know the difference between of and off on this site, I noticed that.

No, that was a Warcloud quote, and a typo. I meant off. Thanks for noticing.

PEACE rock.

Shizzahs stuff is OK, but whers is poor.

That's just not cool. Read whers' verse.

"You Can't Withstand The Attack...
Like The Cuban Linx Cover I've Got A Ghost Watching My Back"

What did you dislike about whers' verse? It had sick wordplay, good flow, imagery and creativity...

Guarded By Martyrs
07-07-2008, 01:05 PM
Shizzahs stuff is OK, but whers is poor.

Hahahaha...Show & Prove kid.

Thats the first negative response I've received
And comming from you I can't say I'm suprised at all.

OTB
07-07-2008, 08:09 PM
wow-

sh-t took me 10 minutes to finish reading-
and i still feel i didnt catch all the jewelz yet-

rude-ass work shizz and whers-

real rude-

props!!!
!!!!!!

OTB
07-07-2008, 08:12 PM
^h ha, check how i did my exclamation marks-
3 and 6.

thats my sh-t, nobody better bite that yo-

WHAT UP SHIZZAH/GENIUS and WHERS!!! !!!!!!

Ritter
07-07-2008, 08:36 PM
OTB in the house yo!! Move from the gate!!! Peace god, thanks for the support. The VA cypher is hungry now. Third wave of guest spots.

OTB, did you send me a zShare request lately? I remember receiving some, but can't find the message anywhere.

PEACE