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SKAMPOE
06-19-2008, 03:51 AM
my sword dismember, putcha ass back 2getha, then give ya head to skampoe 2 eatcha brains for dinnah!

http://collect.myspace.com/music/popup.cfm?num=3&time=undefined&fid=212149071&uid=1&t=jBnFSt0zQf8SXL0VswT6y2JwkOLx3bGCxAAOCGbfFRXYA1UX ZIPZNIM1Wbuc

clik duh link

SKAMPOE
06-19-2008, 03:55 AM
bump

DR. NICK RIVIERA
06-19-2008, 04:43 AM
BUMP!


Flow could get some improvements, but other than that - solid shit. U r still my fav. here.


yiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

NIGHT MAYOR
06-19-2008, 04:45 AM
nice. so thats yo cousin ?

LORD NOSE
06-19-2008, 06:03 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v237/LOUDBIRD/250px-Pan.jpg

NIGHT MAYOR
06-19-2008, 06:21 AM
http://www.sonofthesouth.net/leefoundation/civil-war/1862/november/black-slaves-1500.jpg (http://www.sonofthesouth.net/leefoundation/civil-war/1862/november/black-slaves-1500.jpg)

JASPER
06-19-2008, 06:36 AM
You're fat.

Tony Bandana
06-19-2008, 08:27 AM
yo whats with all the pics of you and the naked dudes on your page !! ONGH'

lol

Tony Bandana
06-19-2008, 08:33 AM
i clicked and listened ..and imma leave it at that. Keep at it though 4 real .

ongh

Tony Bandana
06-19-2008, 10:20 AM
and lyrically your most defintly inbetween Eminem and Lil Bow Wow

ONGH

:D

LORD NOSE
06-19-2008, 10:25 AM
sounds terrible


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v237/LOUDBIRD/rahmanheadknot.jpg

VZA
06-19-2008, 12:00 PM
You're fat.

+1

TSA
06-19-2008, 12:40 PM
ya'll try to be funny about the gayest shit

anyways,
ya'll don't sound confident on the mic a lot of time, expecially jigsaw.
don't read from the paper when you spit, take a swig of duh lika, have your shit memories, and rap at the mic like it's a punk bitch and shit got real

INF
06-19-2008, 01:07 PM
ya'll don't sound confident on the mic a lot of time, expecially jigsaw.
don't read from the paper when you spit, take a swig of duh lika, have your shit memories, and rap at the mic like it's a punk bitch and shit got real


^Real Talk and rep to TSA for bein serious for a minute.



Ya'll be doin it though and I'll give you that. Sometimes it sounds like ya'll fall off the beat real quick. Like , you rush that shit.

Tony Bandana
06-19-2008, 01:21 PM
ya'll try to be funny about the gayest shit

anyways,
ya'll don't sound confident on the mic a lot of time, expecially jigsaw.
don't read from the paper when you spit, take a swig of duh lika, have your shit memories, and rap at the mic like it's a punk bitch and shit got real

TSA you tryin to be a rapper jigga..yo whatever happened to that dude Bubba Sparks ONGH?

no really?

hahahaha

SKAMPOE
06-19-2008, 02:07 PM
BUMP!


Flow could get some improvements, but other than that - solid shit. U r still my fav. here.


yiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
thanx yo, dats peace 1
nice. so thats yo cousin ?
dats jigsaw.45 aka father times older brother!
You're fat.
ur gay sooooo?
ya'll try to be funny about the gayest shit

anyways,
ya'll don't sound confident on the mic a lot of time, expecially jigsaw.
don't read from the paper when you spit, take a swig of duh lika, have your shit memories, and rap at the mic like it's a punk bitch and shit got real
cool, thanx 4 da feed back
^Real Talk and rep to TSA for bein serious for a minute.



Ya'll be doin it though and I'll give you that. Sometimes it sounds like ya'll fall off the beat real quick. Like , you rush that shit.
thanx 4 duh feed back



peace to duh godz

TheWolf
06-19-2008, 02:12 PM
Sounds quite good to me.

Think you need to sound more aggressive some of the time - I guess like TSA was saying, more confident and some more energy.

SKAMPOE
06-19-2008, 02:17 PM
no doubt, imo not every track is on sum fight music, sum times it be on sum higher level of thinkin!

TSA
06-19-2008, 02:31 PM
lol yeah, there's those types of tracks but you guys sound nervous almost cause your flow is so shaky and you say words are awkward times, which is unique but still need mastering. I say you just get a shit load of beats and keep going at it non stop until you've master'd duh flor

confident doesn't mean aggressive too, you just gotta sound like you know what your doing and ya'll lack that, expecially jig
and you come up with some super bugged out funny shit on here, you should incorporate that into your rhymes more to make them more entertaining.

like when you said you measure my flesh of a scale and call up hannibal lecture to tell him what you got for sale AHahahahahaha, shit like that more wouldn't hurt, but it's not like you don't have it already. When i listen to Skampoe da god i expect those strong bugged out lines, and it's kind of a let down when i can't find em

skampoe da proffitt cracks me the fuck up tho, that shit's dope, expecially the little gimpy echo ahahahahahhahahah

SKAMPOE
06-19-2008, 03:19 PM
no doubt!

JASPER
06-19-2008, 03:41 PM
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Tony Bandana
06-19-2008, 03:56 PM
no doubt, imo not every track is on sum fight music, sum times it be on sum higher level of thinkin!

jigga ...

if someone signz you...


they smoke more crack then Pookie from New Jack City

ONGH

hahaha

SKAMPOE
06-19-2008, 06:04 PM
hahahahah @ shenkie

Ol' Dirty Trixˣ
06-19-2008, 07:00 PM
i agree with tsa and wolfman. i liked it though.

Tony Bandana
06-19-2008, 09:08 PM
ONGH
iz there some fuckin imagenary link here in a special room for all the putz'z to listen 2 that I aint hearin?

hahahahhaa


thatz the wackist shit i ever heard , man i can drop an iller verse over a Souljah Bitch beat

likw Skampoo aint no kick in the door wavin mm 4.4. type shit man.

hez a lil soft yo


ONNGHHH!

Tony B like dat real shit!

WhaT