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martyr
08-23-2005, 08:49 PM
why should i take my time and spit lines at the newbies?
cats think they're ill but are like dick ridah and dupreez
bitch die with the groupies, you kids trying to do me
shit rhyming that flew weak, cliques lying to boost chi's
you can't kill the guy above you that writes not to see smiles
but writes to stop the weak rivals, dyke 'Pac's and geek Styles
wannabees and trifes who got my hyped drops on speed dial
psychotic freestyles are nothing but life stopped on Green Mile
your lives a waste, your spirit goes like your spine'll break
curb all that: "hurt yawl cats" shit, this is cyberspace
its set in weathered shrines that my text forever shines
and i get the wetter dimes like i'm Kevin Federline
you wretches never rhyme, you spit long, wack, weak shit
the threads are convos with your teams cause no has peeped it
and i stand for what i stand for and said in my rhymes
i am what i am -- and i'm ahead of my time
i walked in to an old forum's fall off, before most've all yawl
i left for a while and came back to folks with small coughs
pretending to be sick and thinking they're ill
everyone lacks talent so the lower class is cliqing for skills
getting props from the team hoping they're hot with their keys
jocking for peeps and votes and won't ever knock it with me


...twenty two minutes...

Murderous Mack
08-23-2005, 09:41 PM
You know you're really not good enough to warrant talking shit about everyone else here. There's people who post in here that are better writers than you. I think I've seen you do some lame shit like this back in the old Corp days too, acting like you're some sort of rhyming godfather. If you're such a superhero then get off the internet and go and get a record deal or something.

martyr
08-24-2005, 12:56 AM
...actually, i am good enough to warrant not only talking shit but telling the truth... i am also good enough to post my own thread for one keystyle where as you have to have a thread for many keys, because yours are not good enough to deserve a response... i am not trying to be a super hero, you must've conjured up those images of my actual greatness in your own mind after reading the verse... must i mention my accolades of awards and praise for published writing and performed music -- no... i will have a record deal soon, and the likes of you, dickridah and dupreez will still be twidling your thumbs on the internet, writting wack verses period, dreaming of being me... excuse me for sounding self righteous but when you take the name of a powerful gun but rhyme like an empty water pistol, i feel compelled to be that way...

Murderous Mack
08-24-2005, 01:09 AM
I keep a peanut butter jar on a desk next to my bed. Inside it is some fine Scotch whiskey. Floating in that whiskey is your mother's left testicle.

jjh_38
08-24-2005, 06:29 AM
pretty much everything ive ever read from martyr has been on point... i feel what ur sayin man....i havent read much of ur shit but i can tell that u could prolly hang with whoev when ur tryin...... first two lines had me rollin, no offense to those mentioned

martyr
08-24-2005, 09:03 AM
...thanks yawl... i appreciate it... really, i wouldn't even drop keys but cats think it's cool and aight to... on the real, in the game, unless you're ciphering (which in some threads your are), no one wants to hear you just 'spit' unless you've got the props and respect... and really, at this stage in everyones writing on this site, ciphering is good, but you gotta put time into your drops... take time to perfect your verse(s)... this is WuTang-Corp, and you should know GZA writes all of his verses two or three times... sorry if i offended you or the brash display of multis hurt your tounge, but in the immortal words of me, "i say what i feel and then you're feeling what i say", so i will continue to do so... thanks yawl for the props... everyone keep writing, and rewriting and you Mr. Mack, go sing some fucking christmas carols, and work on your writing...

Murderous Mack
08-24-2005, 05:48 PM
"No-el, No-el, No-el, No-e-el, Born is the ki-ing of Isr-e-eal"........

Nah, although I don't like your attitiude, I've been acting like a bit of a dick lately. I've been really irritable. I'll try to chill out a bit.

Btw, it was a nice verse, just got on my nerves a bit.

Peace

BlaK FuRYaN
08-24-2005, 07:00 PM
Decent verse even tho you took the piss....meaning ive definately seen much better then this....
If its your worst i feel sorry for mc's on this whose best cuddn't match this.....

Elavatin'

martyr
08-25-2005, 12:03 AM
...thanks blak, did you rewrite that verse you posted a while back? noel, it's all good, i understood, i could've originally replied "some part of my verse obviously got to you", but because sometimes i can be a dick, i replied differently... peace...

Johnny 6-feet
08-25-2005, 07:05 PM
A boast keystlye piece, and a pretty good one. You've got the hang of multi's and decent threats. An original topic would've been good to see, with some detailed imagery and strong vocab, but for an off the top effort this was pretty good reading.

Keep on posting.