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Ritter
07-22-2008, 09:05 PM
beautifulrock & Shizzah


Since when I was a little baby, things were always a little crazy
The burning blades of poverty, things were always riddle-shady
Standing in line for cartons of milk and loaves of bread
For a food-coupon you could get shot in the head
Faith failed me, casualties were daily
Bad dreams used to chase me, my own past is scared to face me
But I picked up a book, kept my head up high
To fall down all shook, naw, I ain't that guy
We were family, united as a whole
My bro changed my diapers, when he was 10 years old
Now he a philosopher, got thousands of books to hold
What they did to us, it was truly sick
They were fucking us, like a live porno flick
We got out of the mess, now we struggling for less
We going for the light at the end of the tunnel
Like pouring water into the wrong end of a funnel
Things will get better, I keep reassuring myself
But as time goes, it looks like I'm fooling myself
That's just one of the stories under my belt

She was 16 years old when my mother had me
they called us lower middle class, some fancy words for poverty
step-dad married mom when I was only four
but he was like an empty vessel and quite a fucking bore
there but never there, and Mom began to drink
a few years later she didn't give a fuck what people think
One day when I was thirteen I came home from school
Mom was sloppy and slurring her mouth covered in drool
She started fighting for nothing, said she wished she had an abortion
I lost a huge part of myself, and not just a portion
My grades went to shit, I became dead inside
my head started spinning, thoughts turned to suicide
suicide, suicide, hummina homi-homicide
run little kiddies, bitches you can't even hide
Theres nothing you can do when my anger comes to pass
except burrow in a corner with your head wedged up your ass.

OTB
07-22-2008, 09:19 PM
illmatic wizardry-

real dope-

Ritter
07-22-2008, 09:21 PM
Thanks O, you'd be surprised if you found out how long it took us to write this.

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
07-22-2008, 09:33 PM
Thanks O, you'd be surprised if you found out how long it took us to write this.

man y'all weaved a great song this would be a nice audio track

OTB
07-22-2008, 09:36 PM
^^i'd be surprized if it took more than half an hour-

suuuuuuuuu-

36-
supreme wu-tang forever killa bee clientele.
sunz of man maccabee masta kill cappadonna bastards.
immobilarity resident patient uncontrolled liquid pillage movements

i'll drop another dart- no said date tho

Ritter
07-22-2008, 09:38 PM
man y'all weaved a great song this would be a nice audio track

Thanks ^

Appreciate the support, you know what's up.

Ritter
07-23-2008, 09:37 AM
beautifulrock & Shizzah

- Necropolis Now


Who is the winner when both sides believe they're right?
and neither will concede to a thing, they'd rather fight
a metropolis the stage for a battle of 2 factions
drugged up and slaves, no control of their actions
microchips implanted at the base of the temples
electronic signals overriding the mentals
No free will to live, just live to kill freely
stepping over bodies in a city thats too seedy
civilians like rats are slaughtered by both sides
their eyeballs are ornaments the skins used as hides
The lands left in ruins, the the food inedible
Death from all angles on a mass that's incredible

At the age of sixteen they took me as their own
Since that day, I've never seen home
Never spent a second without the rifle in my hand
Been fighting for so long, I don't know who I am
In this battle land, you can only hope the rifle won't jam
No medics were alive, so you had to cover your behind
It's a surprise, all these electrocutions never left me blind
Slaughter on both sides, you can hear the battle cry
All this death and suffer is fucking with your mind
I pick up my rifle, and shoot everything on sight
Almost everyone died during the bloody fight
I point that pistol to my head... *BAM* Good night.


Doctrine of dying, dead children bodies lying
Feasting on the corpses, the soldiers are starving
Suicide is the easy way out, the bullet wounds are carving
If you're alive get a clip in the mouth, and the war is just starting
Insanity is roaming in the air in the form of gas
The morale of the participants is breaking like glass
You're dead, no time to think about your past
Towers of apocalypse, constructed by the arsonists
Firing shots at the charging masochists
Death Rules Everything Around Me, DREAM
Life is just that at this moment it seems
Will this battlefield ever see sunbeams?

The machine is alive, the man inside no pride
Man after man, humanity becomes stolen
thirstful enemy, lips cracked and swollen
death is free will ,who is next to be chosen
the present is the future, the future has passed
Few soldiers remain in the struggle for Algian Fast
to see the end of war and peace could come at last
10 9 8 like the countdown to blast off
5 4 3, 2 are left, armor is cast off
Dreams Eat all Tyant's heart's, DEATH
A hole opens in the sky that their masters left
A massive light shines bright as they take their last breath

THE MASON
07-23-2008, 09:46 AM
^ you guys are killing it, keep posting tracks, Shizzah every time i read oyur shit, it make me wanna start writing. beautifulrock your first verse made me feel like i was in war, props too both

VZA
07-23-2008, 09:52 AM
"The machine is alive, the man inside no pride
Man after man, humanity becomes stolen
thirstful enemy, lips cracked and swollen
death is free will ,who is next to be chosen
the present is the future, the future has passed
Few soldiers remain in the struggle for Algian Fast
to see the end of war and peace could come at last
10 9 8 like the countdown to blast off
5 4 3, 2 are left, armor is cast off
Dreams Eat all Tyant's heart's, DEATH
A hole opens in the sky that their masters left
A massive light shines bright as they take their last breath"

Insane shit, especially:
"The machine is alive, the man inside no pride
Man after man, humanity becomes stolen
thirstful enemy, lips cracked and swollen"

beautifulrock
07-23-2008, 09:56 AM
This is a concept idea I came up with, basically tells the story of a futuristic war in a desolated metropolis with humans on both sides being controlled by microchips, the masters deceived the warriors who were pawns anyway, and when one was left on either side, they dropped a nuke on them. Verse 1 is from the perspective of a sole survivor from one of the penthouse buildings watching down and verse 2 is from the perspective of one of the soldiers. verse three and four are told by an archangel of death. I hope this clears things up a bit as to what we were thinking in this song I even have a beat idea in mind that changes up half way through.

Suga Duga
07-23-2008, 12:17 PM
keep it comin

Ritter
07-23-2008, 04:44 PM
*Bump*

VZA
07-23-2008, 04:47 PM
I could submit a verse or two to this little collab unless you guys wanna keep it between you two.

beautifulrock
07-23-2008, 04:53 PM
actually we are looking for a few guest spots, but not yet, a little album structure has to come into place first, the core theme of the album is death so think about what you wanna say, thx

Ritter
07-23-2008, 04:55 PM
^ I wanted to say that myself. PM either of us when you come up with something you consider worthy.

beautifulrock
07-23-2008, 06:11 PM
skit #1 - The abortion

Hush little baby, don't say a word
Mama's gonna end you before the third
trimester, and if you try to cry
mama won't hear you you'll die inside
and if you try to scream and kick
mama's gonna blow you out like a wick
you may wonder why, you may wonder how
Mama doesn't need or care for you right now.

Ritter
07-23-2008, 06:16 PM
On some deep shit... that's emotional... Should this sear into a "Childless Family" theme?

beautifulrock
07-23-2008, 06:19 PM
Yea, something like that, I also wanna do a couple more skits, like the evolution of death, things like suicide, homicide and capital punishment

Ritter
07-23-2008, 06:22 PM
We could do that later...

Wanna do that solo track now?

And then we do a together one...

Then my skit

Then my solo?

beautifulrock
07-23-2008, 06:25 PM
We could do that later...

Wanna do that solo track now?

And then we do a together one...

Then my skit

Then my solo?

I'm gonna work on my solo for a while, I want to do a Red + Mef style song with u bouncing lines off one another

VZA
07-23-2008, 06:28 PM
That abortion one was savage man... Really, fucking good.

I could do the suicide one if you wanted.

beautifulrock
07-23-2008, 06:31 PM
put something down 8-16 bars, I can't promise anything, but drop it in my pm box, I really appreciate the enthusiasm man.

OTB
07-23-2008, 06:50 PM
WOW b-rock

that abortion rime is top-notch

i'm thoroughly impressed-

get a copyright registry for that-

it could be used in a commercial or a pamphlet by some company-

i mean it king-

seriously top-notch yo-

beautifulrock
07-23-2008, 06:54 PM
WOW b-rock

that abortion rime is top-notch

i'm thoroughly impressed-

get a copyright registry for that-

it could be used in a commercial or a pamphlet by some company-

i mean it king-

seriously top-notch yo-

coming from you I'm honored because your short bars blow me away, I'm my own worst hater when it comes to my shit, I always think I could come better. Thx man.

OTB
07-23-2008, 07:09 PM
every head at the temple needs to see this sh-t

how did you come up with that gem?

unbelievable b-rock.

yo that's one of the illest darts i've ever been blessed to see or hear-

peace b-

Ritter
07-23-2008, 07:10 PM
For real ^

We should ask a mod for an announcement.

Brock's a beast.

beautifulrock
07-23-2008, 07:13 PM
All I can say is thank you

VZA
07-23-2008, 07:18 PM
For real ^

We should ask a mod for an announcement.

Brock's a beast.

Co-Sign.

Suga Duga
07-24-2008, 03:03 AM
the core theme of the album is death

you on some necro shit?

I'm my own worst hater when it comes to my shit, I always think I could come better.

that's the first step to greatness - abnormal ambition

ask Kobe

Maccabee Ridah
07-24-2008, 03:27 PM
beautifulrock & Shizzah

- Necropolis Now

Doctrine of dying, dead children bodies lying
Feasting on the corpses, the soldiers are starving
Suicide is the easy way out, the bullet wounds are carving
If you're alive get a clip in the mouth, and the war is just starting
Insanity is roaming in the air in the form of gas
The morale of the participants is breaking like glass
You're dead, no time to think about your past
Towers of apocalypse, constructed by the arsonists
Firing shots at the charging masochists
Death Rules Everything Around Me, DREAM
Life is just that at this moment it seems
Will this battlefield ever see sunbeams?


One of best verses I have heard lately...!!!
I really dunno what to say, I'm really amazed with flow and thoughts told in, even, only first 5 lines of this verse, and not to mention the whole song!!! Really great!!!

Keep it up guyz, u r really killin it........

Peace.............

beautifulrock
07-27-2008, 07:17 PM
Modern Day Slavery


A wicked plan
In 91 before the dawn of man
The sickness spread
The Kurd Minority, left for dead
A stitch in time
burst open in a way sublime
The buildings fell
Red White and Blue unleashed hell
A Scapegoat needed
Saddam the target but Iraq left bleeding
Shock and Awe
bombs and death is all the children saw
A generation
lost with hatred for our lovely nation
Greed is Blind
A stigma wrapped the soul of mankind
Reconstruction
Making money off Iraq's destruction

A nation held hostage with shackles and chains
We do the damage, they sweep up the remains
[chorus x 2]

This is another form of Modern Day Slavery
To speak the truth it takes bravery


A wicked plan
spread to we on our own homeland
Rich and Poor
The gap widens in two thousand four
The hybrid car
Did you see how much they are?
The Poor spurned
The great depression has now returned
Fair for some
With a checkbook and a real big gun
Without means
You are robbed blind so it seems
twice the price
gas is killing dreams and killing life
Rich get richer
While the rest must stick to digging ditches

Whatever happened to the American dream?
When Uncle Sam takes forty percent of your CREAM
[chorus x 4]

This is another form of Modern Day Slavery
To speak the truth it takes bravery

What's to come?
A sticky nation like they stepped in gum
Going nowhere
Don't they know that Mars is out there?
Concerned with money
It's really not real, Ain't that funny?
Killing for paper
representative for value, killing nature
Our Earth is dying
we ignore it but it's ourself to which we're lying
What is freedom?
What are warnings if we fail to heed them?
What is life?
Why's your throat being held by a knife?
What is love?
Why do the rich hold themselves above?

The Earth, the nation? and all God's creations?
Leave the world in ruins and a trail of devestation?

This is another form of Modern Day Slavery
To speak the truth it takes bravery

[fade out]

OTB
07-27-2008, 07:23 PM
i would have rather read something about cars, jewelry, or clothes.

h ha, just buggin b-rock-

nice-ass drop yo-

true wickedness-

and i'm american!

later for bush and them-

i'm votin for obama this year yo-

peace fam-

Ritter
07-27-2008, 07:25 PM
Who smuggled a Wu-General in the Temple of Darts? I thought I was working with a guy from Connecticut...

Brilliant stuff Rock. I see you incorporated your ideas you posted in that "Sinister Plan" thread a couple days back.

Shit's crazy.

beautifulrock
07-27-2008, 07:30 PM
i would have rather read something about cars, jewelry, or clothes.

h ha, just buggin b-rock-

nice-ass drop yo-

true wickedness-

and i'm american!

later for bush and them-

i'm votin for obama this year yo-

peace fam-


I'm American too, it's much deeper coming from me than somebody who lives outside the US and hates America








Who smuggled a Wu-General in the Temple of Darts? I thought I was working with a guy from Connecticut...

Brilliant stuff Rock. I see you incorporated your ideas you posted in that "Sinister Plan" thread a couple days back.

Shit's crazy.



Sorry i took like 3 days on this, but ya know, wanted perfection or close to it. I also changed up the flow on this one, keeping it different makes things more interesting. thx again

beautifulrock
07-27-2008, 07:32 PM
also the hook is a sample of RZA, so you don't think I just ripped it off.

beautifulrock
07-27-2008, 08:10 PM
added a bridge to verses 1 and 2

Ritter
07-27-2008, 08:13 PM
Master touch ^

beautifulrock
07-28-2008, 06:02 AM
Things are coming together nicely, here's what things look like so far

1. intro skit abortion
2. Lost Child
3. Broken Flashlights
4.
5. skit suicide
6. Teenage Angst
7.
8.
9. skit Homicide
10. They always talk, when their head's in a vice (feat. ??????)
11.
12. Bootleg Patriots
13. Skit Capital Punishment
14. Modern Day Slavery
15.
16.
17. Necropolis Now
18. Outro Apocalypse

Complete
In the Works

Ritter
07-28-2008, 06:08 AM
Looks great bro.

Isn't white complete, and yellow in the works?

beautifulrock
07-28-2008, 06:10 AM
whoops edit yikes

VZA
07-30-2008, 05:04 PM
This is coming together nicely.

Ritter
07-31-2008, 10:52 AM
Bootleg Patriots


7 million people gathered in a land
Where a fascist is the defintion of a modern man
Supporting a war criminal as a hero
Pounding your chest yelling "Kosovo"
What's worst of all, first of all
Kosovo ain't even Serbian at all
Political gimmick, crawling around the state
Where the free spech is the talk of hate
Gravediggers turn out to be heads of Parliment
A war criminal, murderer gets a monument
Don't blame the criminals, blame the society
For accepting them as proprieties
Common sense is a variety and a minor element
It's evident, that the people are irrelevant
Thoughts corrupted, men's wills obducted
Fake patriotism promoted on daily TV
Fuck that NISMO MI KRIVI
Narod je kriv jer se ovako zivi

Chorus (x2)
Pressure piling on the backs of people
Tricked us all to believe we was equal
A horror story, with no prequel no sequel

The year 1994, I was just 12 months old
We were standing in the cold, we were told
That everything would be aight, but no...
Standing in a row, for food and clothes
Where a loaf of bread was valued like gold
Food stamps and coupons, for a pack of bonbons
If you disagree with the system, they pull out a handgun
In an isolated state, that's where you can't run
One March there was an earthquake that broke all
We didn't have anything in our house that could fall
It was that deep, now we rose on our feet
But still nothing's cheep, and the reek
Of nationalist pigs is still here and present
Corrupting the minds of simple peasants
My auntie Ana got her head severed cuz she was a rebel
And ten thousand more innocent people
This ain't conciousness anymore, this is cerebral

Chorus (x2)
Pressure piling on the backs of people
Tricked us all to believe we was equal
A horror story, with no prequel no sequel

R.I.P. Z.D....

Maccabee Ridah
07-31-2008, 11:16 AM
^^ Ohhhh shyt, must say major propz 4 that!!! 2 verses explaining whole balcan system, history and everything....

Brilliant!!! Fuckin brilliant! Yo shizz, u should really record this one! I would play it on RTS! :D

It really kicks pure truth....

Keep droppin joints man.......

Peace.............
-suuuuuuuu///

Ritter
07-31-2008, 01:30 PM
Thanks... I may add another verse later on... on that song.

beautifulrock
07-31-2008, 04:03 PM
Bootleg Patriots


7 million people gathered in a land
Where a fascist is the defintion of a modern man
Supporting a war criminal as a hero
Pounding your chest yelling "Kosovo"
What's worst of all, first of all
Kosovo ain't even Serbian at all
Political gimmick, crawling around the state
Where the free spech is the talk of hate
Gravediggers turn out to be heads of Parliment
A war criminal, murderer gets a monument
Don't blame the criminals, blame the society
For accepting them as proprieties
Common sense is a variety and a minor element
It's evident, that the people are irrelevant
Thoughts corrupted, men's wills obducted
Fake patriotism promoted on daily TV
Fuck that NISMO MI KRIVI
Narod je kriv jer se ovako zivi

Chorus (x2)
Pressure piling on the backs of people
Tricked us all to believe we was equal
A horror story, with no prequel no sequel

The year 1994, I was just 12 months old
We were standing in the cold, we were told
That everything would be aight, but no...
Standing in a row, for food and clothes
Where a loaf of bread was valued like gold
Food stamps and coupons, for a pack of bonbons
If you disagree with the system, they pull out a handgun
In an isolated state, that's where you can't run
One March there was an earthquake that broke all
We didn't have anything in our house that could fall
It was that deep, now we rose on our feet
But still nothing's cheep, and the reek
Of nationalist pigs is still here and present
Corrupting the minds of simple peasants
My auntie Ana got her head severed cuz she was a rebel
And ten thousand more innocent people
This ain't conciousness anymore, this is cerebral

Chorus (x2)
Pressure piling on the backs of people
Tricked us all to believe we was equal
A horror story, with no prequel no sequel

R.I.P. Z.D....




this is truly a stroke of genius, not only a conscious track, but an amazing flow as well.

Ritter
07-31-2008, 04:16 PM
You know it's appreciated bro. Thanks.

Peace

Lil' Ruger
07-31-2008, 08:34 PM
i dont think you should post all the songs if this is gonna be a text album save the rest for the debut!

Maccabee Ridah
09-18-2008, 08:27 AM
Wutz up with this..?!?

Is this text album comin out, or not..?!?

Propz to Bronc & my bro' shizz...!

P.E.A.C.E.

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
09-18-2008, 08:54 AM
this shit is still fire