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Robert
08-24-2005, 11:40 AM
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Jabba Jaw
08-24-2005, 11:49 AM
"Rap clones, attempted to dethrone the god from his position,
but the original stands alone, so I defeated my opposition,
bodies lay, where my sword had swung and created a blood bath,
Vultures fed on the remains of those who crossed jamel's path"

this was my fav lil section of this rhyme

you got potential son
it started off a lil choppy but got better after a few lines

keep at it you got a nice vocab just gotta be a bit more creative with it

Grim Reapa
08-24-2005, 12:01 PM
that was ill i see u took some vocab from are battle huh jamel????

Robert
08-24-2005, 12:08 PM
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adedwutang
08-24-2005, 12:13 PM
When I first dropped people thought I was spitting hieroglyphics,
to be specific, it was too complex for the neolithic,


hot dam,that was ill

Robert
08-24-2005, 12:17 PM
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adedwutang
08-24-2005, 12:25 PM
yea realized that 2 but didnt feel like copyin the whole verse
haha peace

Robert
08-24-2005, 12:33 PM
cheers

Life-Giving-Sword
08-24-2005, 04:37 PM
sickness pure sickness

Robert
08-24-2005, 09:17 PM
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Robert
08-25-2005, 09:25 AM
More feedback please

Robert
08-29-2005, 12:28 PM
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