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Robert
08-24-2005, 12:40 PM
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Jabba Jaw
08-24-2005, 12:49 PM
"Rap clones, attempted to dethrone the god from his position,
but the original stands alone, so I defeated my opposition,
bodies lay, where my sword had swung and created a blood bath,
Vultures fed on the remains of those who crossed jamel's path"

this was my fav lil section of this rhyme

you got potential son
it started off a lil choppy but got better after a few lines

keep at it you got a nice vocab just gotta be a bit more creative with it

Grim Reapa
08-24-2005, 01:01 PM
that was ill i see u took some vocab from are battle huh jamel????

Robert
08-24-2005, 01:08 PM
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adedwutang
08-24-2005, 01:13 PM
When I first dropped people thought I was spitting hieroglyphics,
to be specific, it was too complex for the neolithic,


hot dam,that was ill

Robert
08-24-2005, 01:17 PM
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adedwutang
08-24-2005, 01:25 PM
yea realized that 2 but didnt feel like copyin the whole verse
haha peace

Robert
08-24-2005, 01:33 PM
cheers

Life-Giving-Sword
08-24-2005, 05:37 PM
sickness pure sickness

Robert
08-24-2005, 10:17 PM
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Robert
08-25-2005, 10:25 AM
More feedback please

Robert
08-29-2005, 01:28 PM
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