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Rain
09-10-2008, 08:50 PM
Struggle With an Alter Ego:

I'm the hybrid mixture of a violent figure
with a silent whisper behind the trigger
Paintin' vibrant pictures with what the voices say
Then destroy the page as I deploy their rage
One thought, and the pistol screams and whistles
The reaper sheaths his sickle, only leavin' me riddles
I'm a liberal watchin all the visceral options
Until the ritual blossoms my physical coffin
These pitiful doctrines try to ruin my life
Misconstruing my sight through diffusional nights
When the fuse ignites, then I'm ready to blow
With my enemy known, I'm the deadliest foe
So, I even the odds, pulling a knife on snakes
Just beatin' ya gods rolling the dice of fate
My lifes the stake, so I'm raising the bar
embracing my scars 'till I fade in the dark
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Guarded By Martyrs
09-10-2008, 09:45 PM
I'm the hybrid mixture of a violent figure
with a silent whisper behind the trigger
Paintin' vibrant pictures with what the voices say
Then destroy the page as I deploy their rage


Dope !!!!!

Rain
09-15-2008, 07:35 PM
Samurai -- Collab (my verse)

I swing a sword of vengeance on each fraud and fake
Then bring a war of penance upon the god of snakes
Collectin' bounties placed on the darkest of souls
Draw my blade for harvest, n fill a carcass with holes
A lethal weapon evil's destined to feel the wrath
There's no sequel session when ya skin's peeled back
You can't sheild the attack, death's past due
Catch a stab wound, then aim for the neck and slash through
I'm comin at you, faster than ya eyes can focus
When you realize that moment you die before you know it
Time foretold this like you dropped an hourglass
A shower of glass, present stops, in an hour you're past
Devoured in a flash when you encounter the math
With every degree intact, precision empowers the act
So cowards keep back, I plan to find justice
In this land of mindles puppets, I'm the samurai of justice

Rain
09-20-2008, 03:15 AM
I'm surrounded by social clones in the year of the beast
It's sounded the vocal tones; my greatest fear's unleashed
Appears in my sleep, I hear revere of the deceased
Mental capacity depletes, then gravities released
The battery leaked. What a tragedy in the least
What you actually believe is factually deceit
Even against the odds, to survive this nightmare
The reason god provides, is why I fight fair
Walkin a narrow path, only few enter the gate
Tossin arrows in the past, to render my mistakes
Sever the fate of the clever snakes and dismember their shapes
To better this place, I'm the dispencer of faith

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
09-20-2008, 03:18 AM
dopeness

Ritter
09-20-2008, 04:06 AM
Extremely dope bro.

Rain
09-20-2008, 01:31 PM
I don't really like this last one >.<

OTB
09-20-2008, 03:18 PM
nice rimes g-

yo heres a little rain instrumental for you>

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-pb3skc3mnQ

peace-

Rain
09-21-2008, 03:59 AM
I hate the neglect. For ages it's crept
from a dayless depth in the pages' text
No painless steps... or rain checks
Just the same stress til' my frames bent
scathed and cleft, and the blade disects my neck..
It's vileness..
A viral pest that's my final test,
let this trial commence
Is it mindful not to bench too much
In depth discuss death and such..
NEVER press my luck, I'm better off NOT to mess up
Like a present from above, to turn the tables
What the message does... the words enable
A merciful angel, immersed in fables,
with a curse thats fatal, recites the verse so playful
Like he's 8 years old... Why fear his ways
Does he appear cold like a dreary day
Does his soul clearly say.. what the mirror reflects
Or is what you see just inferior defects

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
09-21-2008, 04:22 AM
nice

Rain
09-29-2008, 10:01 PM
while head of state co-operates with serpentry
insurgency grows to a case of emergency
I say replace the dirty fakes positions
with worthy persons and equally based divisions
let be driven this lost cause were livin
drop em in the distance, or rot in prison
theres no stoppin da system..free people forgot to listen
and became evils victims on a spree to perdition
9/11.. an excursion behind real purpose
we were blinded by the serpents.. the deals certain
they succeeded in diversion.. with a veil
and a curtain.. I'm revealin the turgid..portrayal of life..
and the foreplay thats like.. somethings fuckin us at night
a covenant lusting after satans sight
Masons takin away whats just and right
With a nation playin games fakin to touch the light
They say I'm blind but really I see the truth
As they erase minds and plant the seed in the youth
They're demons on the loose, providing deceit not proof
Treason's beneath the roots as you all believe the news

Rain
09-30-2008, 09:49 PM
As I struggle inside with my troubled mind
I'm putting together pieces that the puzzle provides
I know I'm gonna die at the front of the line
I'll be alone as I roam, with no one by my side
I'm not goin' to hide, nor will I fall so dastardly
Abused drastically, I'm ressurectin' walls of apathy
I call it tactfully protectin' what I have left
I've been so neglected, that I'm on my last breath
I won't let you stab my chest, instead stop the action
Until you've lost your traction, I'll block what's happenin
As you talk fast and try to create illusions
Connive and debate, like maybe today I'll elude him
You best keep movin, I don't have time for petty games
Every day has been aligned just like your steady aim
But when your eyes gaze at my picture and see I'm smilin'
You'll realize YOU'VE been framed, and played like a violin

Guarded By Martyrs
09-30-2008, 10:01 PM
Feeling that one alot^

Rain
10-01-2008, 08:01 PM
Finished verse above

Soul Poet
10-06-2008, 02:40 AM
haha this shit is fucking DOPE

Rain
10-07-2008, 09:46 PM
Switch off every 8
hook -- person a person b person a person b

Here's my 8

I leave my first impression, gun cocked and scope aligned
'cause I know that as I speak, I have one shot to blow ya mind
This artist's words trigger the rifle, as I stake my claim and call
No games, I figure it's vital to paint ya brains on the wall
See..I aim at all prospects who talk less and listen
Observe the worlds objects, its nonsense, and pitch in
Give their two cents on my music and try to reason
It's not useless if you find my meaning by believing

let me know

Prince Rai
10-08-2008, 07:16 AM
its good, add more lines though, the more darts the more epic it gets like the previous works you put up which were dopeness!

peace!

Rain
10-10-2008, 06:32 AM
??????

Rain
10-26-2008, 08:18 PM
Midnight; a bell tolls, crossin the river styxx
A sick sight of hells souls blossoms in bitter bliss
To the bottom of the abyss is paved a route to satans house
Around the maze and out, 8 snakes spit flame from the mouth
As it rains down, you're bothered by your fathers doubts
Depraved of sound like no waves when water begins to drought
Breathe in and out.. As you now focus on all the scenery
See men consumed by theivery.. hopeless and so eagerly
Nothing but darkness inside these caverns of vastness
Traveling deep beneath, the path swerves into blackness
Quick question..
Is this my rite of passage.. the trial of my testing
Did this really happen, my final in the ending

Rain
11-11-2008, 10:31 PM
People that hear me talk never knew that I could
Cause when I was little I grew up in the woods
I learned from nature that words could break ya
The birth of a savior.. crusader.. soothesayer
Whos greater than all the lies
We fall through deep halls of the mind
See walls inside.. to find that we all die
Until the struggle retreats,
I'm muzzled and leashed.. Puzzled by speech
Troubled deep underneath that bubble beneath
That safe spot, free of wolf bites and each conformist
I shaved off the sheeps wool at night to keep the warmest
There's a little resolution to the revolution that's going strong
I'm the proof of evolution because I keep moving on

J.T.S.
11-12-2008, 02:55 PM
Switch off every 8
hook -- person a person b person a person b

Here's my 8

I leave my first impression, gun cocked and scope aligned
'cause I know that as I speak, I have one shot to blow ya mind
This artist's words trigger the rifle, as I stake my claim and call
No games, I figure it's vital to paint ya brains on the wall
See..I aim at all prospects who talk less and listen
Observe the worlds objects, its nonsense, and pitch in
Give their two cents on my music and try to reason
It's not useless if you find my meaning by believing

let me know

Good stuff !

Rain
11-28-2008, 02:51 AM
No one can hate me.
You have to have facts to support something of that magnitude.
Everything with emotion is subjective,thus bringing a biased decision.
Anything that is biased is to be considered invalid to the burden of proof.

Word...
I heard you're in search of the truth
I've looked into meta physics and question existence
Walking a path filled with math and it's a definite difference
I feel crazy like there's drugs eating my brain
But I feel I need to do them because they're keepin me sane
I have my demons chained there's no reason to change
That's what I believed until the day my dreams decayed
Peep the display and you'll see a plea to be free of dismay
It's in the scene I paint beneath each speach I say
-In a panicked breath-
I danced with death on the eve of destruction
Then advanced my steps to see it leads to nothing
We all believe in something til our perspectives change
When I stared in the her eye's it reflected my grave
Destined to be a slave on this plain of despair
I dropped into flames as she gave me that stare
Thought there's no way to hinder the lips of this angel
As we met in the middle time rippled and her kiss was fatal
Cradled in her arms weeping screaming to the sky
This picture began streaming and she was bleeding from the eyes
-We're receding back to the mind-
I'm not competing to be alive nor do I believe the lies
Like death row you can't let go just free the mind
Ask what do I need to find..This is listening and evaluating
When it comes to issues I been through, I'm a mathmetician calculating

Rain
12-02-2008, 05:02 PM
If life were a story I'd begin at the beginning
But beginning where we begin is the minute we start sinning
My art is fitting 'cause it let's my heart do its bidding
Even in the dark I shine from the sparks it's emitting
Apart from admiting I'm the weak sheep of the flock
Don't leap from the dock.. I'll keep off any subject of deep talk
I hate when you assume past any assumptions made
Cause along with assumptions made there's something I hate
And for all those dirty thoughts, it'll only muddle the brain
And you'll find you're in trouble from every puzzle you've played
Anguish And Apathy Arranged In An Age of Advocacy
After me Aimlessly Attackin me
As I'm claimed by tragedy I only have a page backin me
I'm no slave in the factory I'm working to be paid
Yall payed to be working but we're both hurting each day
.....Ha..that's just the...
Flaws of a Saint

Rain
01-16-2009, 12:09 AM
Between the bars misery sits in human form
I'll reach the stars -- Belief lives in me through the lord
What seems so far isn't -- Surpass you, Criuse and soar
Every dream I've seen screams you're going to lose the war
I'd choose to be poor 'Cause I'll always have my music
Have you been in my shoes before -- Judging is nothing but useless
I'm such a fucking nuisance touching a bitter past
Like something that lived in the grass -- jumped up and bit your ass
Red symbolizes life and I see death as pitch black
I'm confused -- The colors Eye see are all mismatched
Written in glyphs and graphs was the tale of this hell I'm facing
Of Scientists who stole the grail before the end of revelations
-- Yall be sent to satan -- When he arives on that pale horse
I'm stressed - Neck painin' vexation -- Stiff like a stale corpse
I'll unveil the source soon as to where I get my power
Bloom with Christ in righteous sight -- Resting in a bed of flowers

Rain
06-25-2010, 03:46 PM
This isn't really all that new, but I figured I'd share it with yall.

From my moment of birth, my life has been spent in the dark.
It's where I've chosen to lurk since being dead from it's start.
Yet never knowing it's hurt, because I was left with this art.
It's how I ease the pain I seem to gain which gets shed by my heart.
Hopes and dreams've become broken pieces after they're shredded apart;
'Cause the weakness in me simply gets fed to the sharks.
Headed at stars - led to the heavens ahead to the endin' that's ours;
Are we headed for cloud cover now brother? I feel we'll never depart.
What do I try to do? Not lie to you.
Only TRY to define the TRUTH the way I'VE seen things through which my EYES have VIEWED.
Describe it through divided groups -- aiming to produce a final proof
Conclusions for those confused when there's no solution to supply the youth.
I won't dive into the mind of you, unless perhaps you provide some use.
Leave you strangled and tangled; entangled dangled and mangled --
A hanged soul -- as you die tied in a noose.
'Cause it's the ways of man which plagues the sands of this forsaken land.

Rain
07-23-2010, 01:17 PM
I watch all life change; as light waves bright rays.
on white days from sight fade to slight grey then night shade.
And darkens the spectrum -- Hearken; the end comes.
The sky's parting to provide pardons for a red sun;
which is fading; saying that stars then a dead one.
Plants whither from climates like winters come violent & left none.
Animals die which leaves most people to dine with bread crumbs.
Life seems cold, but is three fold with the silence death's brung.
I look to the sky -- from the ground and see galaxies;
Push and collide beyond boundaries of clouds and trees.
Comets fast advances down to sea; avalanches from mountain peaks.
Volcanoes fountain debris; into the air and out in the streets.
Tornado tunnels funnel -- tearing through towns and then cease.
While tsunami run offs flood blocks which drowns about half of each.
Amidst the chaos since the days lost; this holy justice begins;
And the sands of time lift as mans reminded they're only dust in the winds.