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09-28-2008, 05:24 PM
Murder started out like a loud banger, but when you moved into the verse set up with the quiet bells and shit it really added a nice depth to the sound, and i really enjoyed how you layered the samples in "The Silencer", that's the type of shit i would most def rock over, o and the drums on all your beats are incredibly tight, i really enjoyed these beats man
if you have time check out my thread, the youtube link is gone but i got the shit on zshare now
09-28-2008, 06:23 PM
Murder is doooope! Those violins in the background need to be brought through a little bit more...and give it a stronger bassline...shit is wicked as hell.
Slaughter is okay, the drums seem to builld up...sounds like a very very long intro lol. Dope sample though.
The Silencer...what the fuuuuuuuuck! That is sooooo damn funky bro! No criticism at all with that one! PEACE!
09-28-2008, 06:53 PM
peace fam good shit i like that first joint and the last joint good drops fam keep it up
09-29-2008, 02:13 PM
Murder: yo I like this one!! theres a few mixing issues but its got a wicked vibe to it!!
Slaughter: this has IMO the possibility to be a bad man joint!! but the mix lets it down badly I think cats have just slept on the potential of this joint all it needs is a bit of mixing and this will be amazing!!
The Silencer: IMO has MINOR mixing issues but its pretty spot on!! Erap man this fuckin joint is Ill, I loved it
yo to me you have have shown mad improvment I'm not gonna include those last four joints you just dropped in that equation tho. work on that mix game son cos you got mad talent shinning through here fam and I think you can look forward to getting even better too
09-29-2008, 02:22 PM
Ill beats, i really liked slaughter, felt like i was goin into a battle of mortal kombat, and murder was dope but let those strings shine a little more. silencer has an ill bass to it mad funky rhythme, props on these beats homie
The Prime Sithesizah
09-30-2008, 03:39 PM
My son... My son... My son lol...
Murder was on some other shit, COMPLETELY went along with the title. No serious complaints other than [well I'm not sure if thats how low the sounds should be in it but] overall.. it sounds sinful and full of evil thoughts, you're coming back on that shit!!
Slaughter's sample was dope, I feel like you could've done alot more flipping with it than what you've provided.. IMO, that would be something that you should get someone like Zero to co-produce because of that theatrical sound, very dope cinematic shit!!
The Silencer was more you, the producer you are.. just felt like it wasn't fluent.. you know what I'm saying? Like.. stretch how it sounds so it flows instead of it sounding so much as if it was looped. Alot of producers make that mistake and it counts as a heavy flaw in a musicians sound but nevertheless, I would consider just a few extra instruments BUT overall... this is good.. I'd drop a 2:00 minute non-stop verse over this EASILY...
Good shit tho... very proud of you getting back to what you know how to do best!!
09-30-2008, 04:09 PM
The Silencer is bananas man.
the 2nd joint was pretty dope aswell...but the silencer is pure hip hop. real fresh sounds...
We need to work together again.
09-30-2008, 04:19 PM
they all have that bobby digital awkwardness going for them, good stuff.
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