Any feeback (probly criticism) welcomed...

[SynsCei]

Tests
And the answers only raise questions
Pencil broke use the blood I signed for bad intentions
Devil laughs
Echo reaches depths now it’s trapped
Playing every second each second daggers in the back
Pain felt
Piercing glass or a burning welt
Not insane lift my plane towards Orion’s belt
Meditate
His eyes in the sky sees my fate
An arduous path must keep a steady rate
Contemplate
One ideal way to live many ways a neck can break
Calling him my ‘Homey’ a brother’s gentle shake
Crying
Tears erode the skin every time I am trying
Southing the soul feeling better why am I still lying?

[OTB]

nice flow-

i like how use the long sentences, that makes for a nice flow-

like i like to write-

word-

[J.T.S.]

This was nice flowed like water and visual pretty good , wouldn't mind if you build in my thread.