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G-raps
10-01-2008, 12:27 PM
yoo

brought back one of my boys old beats

it straight

check it

http://www.myspace.com/graps203

let me know what ya'll thinkk


g-raps

White_Mouse
10-01-2008, 12:33 PM
listened to coming for the kill, ummm well deck already used that "Tupperware fresh", line but i don't' think you knew that, well hmmm your flow was on point, but your presence was a little weak but that might just be the quality, but i don't feel like your really saying anything, just random lines, lots of filler idk man, but it's listenable, was this just a freestyle? iff so good job keeping up with the beat, but if it's written i'd work on writing better lines and shit, and in case you don't know this is a wucorp not many cats will be feeling the gangster swagger,
if you could i'd appreciate if you left some feed on my latest project @
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=64169