uploaded a bunch of my tracks

[G-raps]

check em out and download if you want
feedback on any of em would be apreciated

http://www.g-raps.blogspot.com

i been really busy lately...but now i'ma check out everybodies threads and give some feedback

pretty pumped cause i might be an opening act for method man and redman

g-raps

[White_Mouse]

you have a lot of potential you have a dope voice and an alright flow but a lot of you lines are just...corny, idk man that's the best way i can say it "fake like i can't believe it's not butter" you can do better than that, i would also work on your verse structure add more multi rhymes to make your patterns more interesting, i'm not sure if anyone else on the board will like this, idk though