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WARPATH
09-02-2005, 07:32 PM
one verse let's do this-

Like an alchemist I sythesize-these gold bars just materialize-
causing jamel to realize-reread,edit,revise, then redevize-
his best rhymes from his minds eyez-
but he can't- his brains been crystalized
and he can no longer verbalize what he's feeling-
the brain freeze is so bad his foreheads peeling
Yet I flow so hard you can't stop it
you try to valve it off but your dealing with a broke faucet
I'm speaking of a method to destroy Jamel the Prophet
-a techinque used to kill with tiny droplets-
Chinese water torture- the liquid scorcher
I cause death with the tiniest of matter-
yet it doesn't envolve broken bones or brain splatter-
It's just a little bit sadder to witness a grown man loose control of his bladder
as drops rain ruckus through your dome-
they irritate the mind and run through your hair like a comb
you can't take it- you try not to cry but there's just no way to fake it
for god's sake it's- just to much to handle
you try find a phraze to decipher then dismantle
but you realize I come brighter then a candle-
and pan handle these lyrics to gain a profit
this the how you stop the man they call a prophet:

Like a child without a crayon trying to play pictionary-
I smack him upside the head then jack him for his dictionary-
now he just babbles
tries to drop a word but it's a loosing game of scrabble-
like a kid distrought going through a divorce-
I jack him for his thesorous
now his synonyms are broken down to a mininum
and his spirits broken-let it marinate awhile- it'll soak in

hollywoodrealty
09-03-2005, 06:02 PM
where is jamel?

Ballad Ballistik
09-04-2005, 01:21 AM
already charge killed him ....he is lost for days....charge is my man.....im oct blast i had to change my name....charge killed it nicely....precisely like i pictured you.. on point and dicing these fools.....

Robert
09-04-2005, 07:14 AM
Soory man, I haven't been on the site for a couple of days, you prolly should have called me out when we were both on. Do ya still want me to respond? bit of a delay. If so I'll be on the site a bit later (like 3 hours) and i'll drop then.
peace

Robert
09-04-2005, 12:33 PM
Just signed back on I'll have a verse in about 15 mintues

Robert
09-04-2005, 12:55 PM
Here it is....
Charging Soldier The alchemist, the name of a rap warlord?
Who's frontin' on Jamel like he gon' hang me with the mic cord?
Foolish kid, alchemists ultimately failed to create gold,
just like soldier gon' fail to dismantle my mic hold,
Theosaurus? Dictionary? simple tools for the uneducated,
my mind is my only weapon, thoughts sumpreme and elevated,
chinese water technique a method for beating prophet?
if thats all you got homie then you already lost it,
the fact is, my wordplay is extra terrestrial,
your usin' mere mortal techniques to combat the celestial,
matter of fact bitch, if I gave you the ammunition,
you wouldnt defeated me with it, you an emcee without vision,
an emcee without flow, an emcee without skill,
an emcee who hopefully, has finalised his death will,
coz after this battle you suicide with deadly pills,
Jamel's style is ferocious, check the list of emcee kills,
You needed a whole verse for your rap to even phase me,
I needed 2 bars with verbal darts to erase thee,
leave you lke a pincushion for daring to irritate,
the heavenly rap angel and current battlefield great,
your courage amuses me more then your idiocy,
especially, since you messin' with pure rhyme prophecy,
you already beatin' but i'll continue to lascerate,
teach you a lesson in perfection while you violently masturbate,
what were you thinkin homo, that you could fuck with this?
simple and plain man, your styles as weak as piss,
while your insults annoyed me, the completed verse was disgustin',
you sounded jealous and jaded like its my style that you lustin',
the fact is, nobody but me has prophetic rhyme ability,
you lucky your still alive coz I showed you some humility,
You wanna defeat me? go back to the lab alchemist,
maybe you'll synthesize battle gold, then i'd be impressed,
till then dont fuck with the style jamel honed,
afraid to say soldier, your ass just got owned.....
peace homie, you dropped a good verse. Interesting to see how votes go. Get voting peeps

Robert
09-04-2005, 01:41 PM
Vote peeps

Grim Reapa
09-04-2005, 03:06 PM
sorry jamel yours was good but CS killed like the first 5 lines we still homies right???????

v=CS

1

Robert
09-04-2005, 03:10 PM
thats cool cuz, dont mind being voted against as long as the other verse is dope (which it was), keep voting peeps, 1-nil to Soldier sofar

Ballad Ballistik
09-04-2005, 03:49 PM
i gotta to say charge took it

Sicka than aidZ
09-04-2005, 05:13 PM
i unno man, seems like a tie

hollywoodrealty
09-04-2005, 05:25 PM
im glad sicka said that, bcuz im on the same boat, too close to call, tie

LordAnk
09-04-2005, 05:59 PM
charge came out strong and left strong
prophet tried to reply to his shit too much thas why it got weak
u shoulda just rolled off on him like u were spittn first...u woulda won then
anyways
vote
CHARGE

Robert
09-05-2005, 12:56 AM
thats two nil to you soldier, that fool ballistic didn't explain his vote so it dont count, keep voting peeps finish this one off
peace

Ballad Ballistik
09-05-2005, 01:55 AM
was it not clear i said CHARGING SOLDIER....
WHY CAUSE HE DROPPED SOME UNIQUE SHIT ON YOUR ASSS....
OVER AND OUT IS THAT CLEAR ENOUGH...
I LIKE YOU BUT HE CLEARLY KILLED YOU...
CHARGE IS NASTY..HE HAS BEEN ON POINT ...
YOUR NOT EVEN UNDERSTANDING MY VOTE...DAMN COME ON MAN......

Robert
09-05-2005, 11:27 AM
was it not clear i said CHARGING SOLDIER....
WHY CAUSE HE DROPPED SOME UNIQUE SHIT ON YOUR ASSS....
OVER AND OUT IS THAT CLEAR ENOUGH...
I LIKE YOU BUT HE CLEARLY KILLED YOU...
CHARGE IS NASTY..HE HAS BEEN ON POINT ...
YOUR NOT EVEN UNDERSTANDING MY VOTE...DAMN COME ON MAN......

Thats great man (sarcasm), all I wanted you to do was give an explanation for your vote (like everyone else does), instead of simply saying charge won. Also I dont think he killed me. When homies like hollywood and Sicka are saying its a draw i'm pretty confident the verses were closely matched. Anyway, thats three-nil, dont look particularly good for me. Congrats Soldier you got this, next time maybe not so lucky (lol).

RockD
09-05-2005, 05:18 PM
danm i vote = jamel
although Cs came hard
jamel responded with an actual response and thew in his own darts
i fealt that he discredited everythin that CS said about him and finsihed him of by just rubbin him off like he is nothin

i know i'm late but i wanted to post my opinion :)

Grim Reapa
09-05-2005, 05:27 PM
Jamel dont even count ballads vote

lets let ppl hoo have actually 1 a battle vote alright

Ballad stfu CS didn't murder him

Jamel is 1 of the best so be quiet

Robert
09-06-2005, 12:00 AM
Nah its cool man, his vote counts, I just wanted some explaination. Shouldnt shun peeps from this part of the forum, goddamn this shit is slowly dying out. No one except a select few (masta, hollywoood, me, soldier, sicka etc) actually battle. C'mon peeps that's shit. More peeps gotta start using this part of the forum. Some peeps prolly think this is corny but you gotta understand its just for fun, amusement etc. Fuckin get envolved, if you post shit in temple of darts (which has a freestyle section) you should be doing battles in here.

Fucking get your acts together, I see so many peeps do like three verses in here then piss off coz someone dissed there shit. You know who you are: RockD, Oct Blast and many others. You only gonna get better if you practise. Those cats should still be here laying down verses and calling peeps out, they gotta be supported.

Too much fucking hate in here, I can understand why peeps ignore this forum coz when they do drop something they get the fuck dissed out of them unnecessarily. Gotta be more support, less hate, less dickriding. Cmon people get some battles going!!!!

MC MIDAS
09-06-2005, 09:36 AM
That Was A Good Battle!!! Chargin Came Tough With Some Good Shit To Start But I Think Jamel Clawed It Back And Made His Shit Tougher!! That Shit Was Close To A Draw, But If I Have To Vote Its To Jamel Cos I Think He Just Clinched It!!
Props 2 Both Tho....peace

Robert
09-06-2005, 11:24 AM
what's going on, is this first to three or first to five, what you say Soldier?
peace

WARPATH
09-06-2005, 11:42 AM
Peace to all voters- Peace to Jamel-


Yo I as for the voting it don't really matter cuz as long some peeps felt my rhyme it's all good. It doesn't really matter to me if I win or lose as long as i came wit it. Just wanted to have fun and I did. If peeps want to vote for their favorite rapper then vote -it's all good. Jamel if you want a battle some more then start a new thread some time. Battleing helps me exercise the mind. Yo- my old lady read this battle and siad Jamel beat me- talk about a blow to the ego. If you ask me my vote would have went to jamel too. So there you go.

Robert
09-06-2005, 11:59 AM
cheers soldier, but you did come with the ill raw shit. I guess some peeps like that and some dont like my poetic style (bet some cats dont understand it). Yeah, you should be the one deciding about votes coz you called me out, so do as you like with that. I will prolly call ya out some time in the near future. We gotta get some new peeps in this battlefield!

Robert
09-06-2005, 12:01 PM
danm i vote = jamel
although Cs came hard
jamel responded with an actual response and thew in his own darts
i fealt that he discredited everythin that CS said about him and finsihed him of by just rubbin him off like he is nothin

i know i'm late but i wanted to post my opinion :)
cheers homie, thats what I was trying to do. you wanna battle some time?

WARPATH
09-06-2005, 12:04 PM
ok first to 100 votes then peace-

Idiom
09-06-2005, 12:14 PM
^lol

uh i'm wit HoLLy and Sicka

very good battle but i felt that it was to damn close
and i can't say who's rhymes better cause you could
be doing it to a beat or something and i'd be aLL f'c'd up

nice battle tho girls

nah j/p

Peace

OmO < Idiom

Robert
09-06-2005, 12:33 PM
thanks I guess idiom. 100 votes it is LOL, get voting peeps? sofar 8 votes dropped (3 to soldier, 2 to jamel and 3 for a tie), only 92 to go.
peace

RockD
09-06-2005, 12:46 PM
cheers homie, thats what I was trying to do. you wanna battle some time?
I sure do :) love to battle :hooray:

Idiom
09-06-2005, 01:57 PM
yo jamel, you ever get in touch wit that character i refered you too?

OmO < Idiom

TeknicelStylez
09-06-2005, 06:21 PM
Jamel although I enjoyed CS's verse jamel came harder, I don't wanna say because of his responses because CS didn't have that benefit. But the wordplay was on point.

Robert
09-07-2005, 08:59 AM
cheers homie, keep voting, still like ninety votes to go.
peace

Visionz
09-08-2005, 06:17 AM
Gotta say that one went to Prophet, Charges lyrics were tight, good raw rugged shit but I still felt Phophet's word play more. Close one thou

Robert
09-08-2005, 06:49 AM
5-2 and 3 votes for ties, cheers homie. keep them votes coming in

WARPATH
09-08-2005, 10:55 AM
Jamel just let it go homie cuz now you're just mis counting votes- You win Okay?

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-26-2005, 06:25 PM
Like an alchemist I sythesize-these gold bars just materialize-
causing jamel to realize-reread,edit,revise, then redevize-
his best rhymes from his minds eyez-
but he can't- his brains been crystalized
and he can no longer verbalize what he's feeling-
the brain freeze is so bad his foreheads peeling
Yet I flow so hard you can't stop it
you try to valve it off but your dealing with a broke faucet
I'm speaking of a method to destroy Jamel the Prophet
-a techinque used to kill with tiny droplets-
Chinese water torture- the liquid scorcher
I cause death with the tiniest of matter-
yet it doesn't envolve broken bones or brain splatter-
It's just a little bit sadder to witness a grown man loose control of his bladder
as drops rain ruckus through your dome-
they irritate the mind and run through your hair like a comb
you can't take it- you try not to cry but there's just no way to fake it
for god's sake it's- just to much to handle
you try find a phraze to decipher then dismantle
but you realize I come brighter then a candle-
and pan handle these lyrics to gain a profit
this the how you stop the man they call a prophet:

Like a child without a crayon trying to play pictionary-
I smack him upside the head then jack him for his dictionary-
now he just babbles
tries to drop a word but it's a loosing game of scrabble-
like a kid distrought going through a divorce-
I jack him for his thesorous
now his synonyms are broken down to a mininum
and his spirits broken-let it marinate awhile- it'll soak in

I like the word play in the begining thw water torture lines the multis and the child references near the end but it somewhat lacked strong punches it was nice none the less


Charging Soldier The alchemist, the name of a rap warlord?
Who's frontin' on Jamel like he gon' hang me with the mic cord?
Foolish kid, alchemists ultimately failed to create gold,
just like soldier gon' fail to dismantle my mic hold,
Theosaurus? Dictionary? simple tools for the uneducated,
my mind is my only weapon, thoughts sumpreme and elevated,
chinese water technique a method for beating prophet?
if thats all you got homie then you already lost it,
the fact is, my wordplay is extra terrestrial,
your usin' mere mortal techniques to combat the celestial,
matter of fact bitch, if I gave you the ammunition,
you wouldnt defeated me with it, you an emcee without vision,
an emcee without flow, an emcee without skill,
an emcee who hopefully, has finalised his death will,
coz after this battle you suicide with deadly pills,
Jamel's style is ferocious, check the list of emcee kills,
You needed a whole verse for your rap to even phase me,
I needed 2 bars with verbal darts to erase thee,
leave you lke a pincushion for daring to irritate,
the heavenly rap angel and current battlefield great,
your courage amuses me more then your idiocy,
especially, since you messin' with pure rhyme prophecy,
you already beatin' but i'll continue to lascerate,
teach you a lesson in perfection while you violently masturbate,
what were you thinkin homo, that you could fuck with this?
simple and plain man, your styles as weak as piss,
while your insults annoyed me, the completed verse was disgustin',
you sounded jealous and jaded like its my style that you lustin',
the fact is, nobody but me has prophetic rhyme ability,
you lucky your still alive coz I showed you some humility,
You wanna defeat me? go back to the lab alchemist,
maybe you'll synthesize battle gold, then i'd be impressed,
till then dont fuck with the style jamel honed,
afraid to say soldier, your ass just got owned.....

Jamel you started off with the first 2 lines slowly but quickly excelled and brang a fucking lunchbox to this battle with a lot of punches and nice flow....

My Vote Jamel