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Ritter
12-06-2008, 08:45 PM
Shallow wordplay, like a kid that can't swim
If y'all lyrics was legs, they'd walk with a limp
If you spat a verse with the polygraph on
The damn thing would explode, how many dicks you rode?
How many of your rhymes have you actually wrote
You pick your shit from milk cartons and billboards
I release bangers in big loads, tip-toing your career
But no fear, the ending is near, like a car past 15 years in no gear
You couldn't break out of this battle if you tattooed your rhymes on
Your style's old, make out of what's left until it's shattered
Gone forever, you can write a letter goodbye
Your last words to your verse before I call the nurse
And call 2 shots of adrenaline, just so I could beat you again
But then again, you'll get more excited
You'll like my style, and you'll bite it
Lock yourself in a room, with your sorrow
Start thinking whether your life was borrowed
So far it's been a great rap, where my cape at?
What's the mic doing in your hands, let me take that...

Forget the ringtones and the message alerts
You won't need a cellphone with your face down in the dirt
Think twice before frontin, shit really means something
You better start runnin, before you get hurt

I swish the pen in irregular patterns
Just to see if you'll heartrate will flatten
Does it matter if it's gray paint or gray matter
It's already splattered, we've already battled
Now it's the clock for the braggadocio
Gather the cattle, as we rattle the castle
And get ready for the rodeo
Let's shake hands before we shake spears
Homie yo, calm down Romeo
It's over yo, in the first round you was blown
Call my backyard N.O., cuz it got a scarecrow
The same show, same old same old
Carve death in the veins slow
When it's snow, I'm not cold
The furnace is just lukewarm
Better change the career you have took on
Some artists are better when they're slept on
When you drop a good verse, better tape that
When you're done taping, let me take that...

Forget the ringtones and the message alerts
You won't need a cellphone with your face down in the dirt
Think twice before frontin, shit really means something
You better start runnin, before you get hurt

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
12-06-2008, 09:28 PM
Shallow wordplay, like a kid that can't swim
If y'all lyrics was legs, they'd walk with a limp
If you spat a verse with the polygraph on
The damn thing would explode, how many dicks you rode?
How many of your rhymes have you actually wrote
You pick your shit from milk cartons and billboards
I release bangers in big loads, tip-toing your career
But no fear, the ending is near, like a car past 15 years in no gear
You couldn't break out of this battle if you tattooed your rhymes on

damn this was a dope piece of the dart son, u just keep getting better and better son

THE MASON
12-07-2008, 11:08 PM
shit i almost missed this one

nice dart Shizz

Guarded By Martyrs
12-07-2008, 11:21 PM
But no fear, the ending is near, like a car past 15 years in no gear



:lmao:



So far it's been a great rap, where my cape at?
What's the mic doing in your hands, let me take that...


"Where My Cape At ?"

Killed it.


I swish the pen in irregular patterns
Just to see if you'll heartrate will flatten
Does it matter if it's gray paint or gray matter
It's already splattered, we've already battled


Great wordplay Chief.


Better change the career you have took on
Some artists are better when they're slept on



That was my favourite part :

"Some Artists Are Better When They're Slept On"

As SHEEPISH said, you're just getting better and better.

Peace

Ritter
12-07-2008, 11:51 PM
Peace, brothers. I don't like to give feedback to my own darts, but I'll just say this is my favorite dart I've written so far.

Peace to whers for the thorough feedback.

SKAMPOE
12-08-2008, 12:07 AM
hahaha whoa that was serious bizness my friend, mad props sun!

Prophet Picasso
12-08-2008, 12:22 AM
This is well done, Shizzah.....very impressive.

J.T.S.
12-08-2008, 03:27 PM
crazy tight kudos straight holy water!