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Young Gun
12-11-2008, 07:52 AM
I get-
Compact in the disc format/
Rip more cats and dispatch when they detach/
High as numerators, verbal tranquilizer/
Over denominators elevate float skyward/
Eardrum supplier, welcome to actuality/
Stage beyond reality, where your thoughts can travel free/
Ditch the formalities, be imaginary/
In this dictatorship claimed democracy we all carry/
Cherish precious as a novelty item/
See the long distance, but my peers are close sighted/
My intention is to go my fullest extension/
With high hopes masses greet me with apprehension/
Hold my complexion, in heavy hands with low regards/
Several dimensions past the tired game of pullin’ cards/
Recognize pure skill based on strength and passion/
No need to redefine, my design is everlastin’

BornPower
12-11-2008, 09:37 AM
That's what the fuck i be talkin about! why couldnt jayz young gunz sound like this? maybe somebody woulda felt em then...FANTASTIC opening effort. keep it up

Guarded By Martyrs
12-11-2008, 09:56 AM
Eardrum supplier, welcome to actuality/
Stage beyond reality, where your thoughts can travel free/
Ditch the formalities, be imaginary/
In this dictatorship claimed democracy we all carry/


Oh Dear...

J.T.S.
12-11-2008, 11:15 AM
Cherish precious as a novelty item/
See the long distance, but my peers are close sighted/
My intention is to go my fullest extension/
With high hopes masses greet me with apprehension/
Hold my complexion, in heavy hands with low regards/
Several dimensions past the tired game of pullin’ cards/
Recognize pure skill based on strength and passion/
No need to redefine, my design is everlastin’[/quote]


i liked these lines the best here especially!

Recognize pure skill based on strength and passion/
No need to redefine, my design is everlastin’[/quote]

Those lines are strong!

Young Gun
12-11-2008, 03:48 PM
Thank you guys for the feedback, I'm glad ya'll are feelin this, I should have the recorded track out soon.

Yuen sam
12-13-2008, 03:16 PM
Nice drop my dude, the 4 bars Whers quoted were crazy still.

Dr Sleepwalker
12-13-2008, 11:24 PM
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High as numerators, verbal tranquilizer/
Over denominators elevate float skyward/
Eardrum supplier, welcome to actuality/
Stage beyond reality, where your thoughts can travel free/
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this chunk was my favorite, whole thing was nice and I enjoyed readin' it

pea2e

Young Gun
12-15-2008, 07:44 AM
Yeah, I'm all for Obama, I just feel our system goes much, much deeper than presidency. And that's where the strings are pulled and curruption is.