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Yuen sam
12-13-2008, 03:18 PM
Suttin i wrote quick a while back still, all feedback welcome.

Im a Crane Fighter, capable of causing Unbearable Pain,
My deadly style of the Crane, is Compairable to Rain/
Seemingly, having little or next to No Effects,
But thats incorrect, I deal damage when a Blow Connects/
And im so elegant in combat, its truely Stunning,
The pace I process is mind Numbing, so its no good Running/
I attack vital areas forcing you to Surrender,
Broken arms Render you defenceless leaving you Tender/
The smart give in upon realising my style cant be Beat,
This cranes never tasted Defeat, im the Shaolin Elite/
So I aim to deal minor pain untill your Minds Right,
And you know you wont the Fight, Cah my Grinds Tight/
Resilence mixed with skill, im known to never Submit,
I feel no pain when Im Hit, so I wont ever Quit/
I block out pain with the art of Concentration,
And then with Meditation I mastered the skill Levitation/

As a Crane, im so paitent, calm and Laid Back,
Yet i'll brutally Attack, you and your Affriad Pack/
I'll study the enemy for hours then attack weak Spots,
My special Technique Shots will make blood Leak Lots/
As a crane, its obvious my skill levels above Yours,
Cranes leave circular Soars, im a veteran in all Wars/
No weapons are needed, i defeat dudes Hand to Hand,
Ive dualed from Land to Sand, and im always last to Stand/
Im always mentally prepaired, i Expect the Unexpected,
Im Shaolin Selected, Unpretected areas get Neglected/
I focus on my Defence which is Speed plus Offence,
My training was Intence, so now im all round Immence/
I got the raw strenght of about a Billion Dudes,
Prepaired in all Moods, unbeaten after a Million Fudes/
Tryin to fight this Crane is a recipe for Disaster,
Stronger, Smarter, Faster, im the ultimate Shaolin Master/
Im The Crane Fighter...

Peace.

Yuen sam
12-14-2008, 02:35 PM
Uppin on some feed please?

J.T.S.
12-15-2008, 09:14 AM
The pace I process is mind Numbing, so its no good Running/
I attack vital areas forcing you to Surrender,
Broken arms Render you defenceless leaving you Tender/
i like these lines

Resilence mixed with skill, im known to never Submit,
I feel no pain when Im Hit, so I wont ever Quit/
I block out pain with the art of Concentration,
And then with Meditation I mastered the skill Levitation/
dope

As a Crane, im so paitent, calm and Laid Back,
Yet i'll brutally Attack, you and your Affriad Pack/
I'll study the enemy for hours then attack weak Spots,
My special Technique Shots will make blood Leak Lots/
As a crane, its obvious my skill levels above Yours,
Cranes leave circular Soars, im a veteran in all Wars/
No weapons are needed, i defeat dudes Hand to Hand,
Ive dualed from Land to Sand, and im always last to Stand/
Im always mentally prepaired, i Expect the Unexpected,
Im Shaolin Selected, Unpretected areas get Neglected/
I focus on my Defence which is Speed plus Offence,
My training was Intence, so now im all round Immence/
I got the raw strenght of about a Billion Dudes,
Prepaired in all Moods, unbeaten after a Million Fudes/
Tryin to fight this Crane is a recipe for Disaster,
Stronger, Smarter, Faster, im the ultimate Shaolin Master/
Im The Crane Fighter...

This whole verse was good,

Ritter
12-15-2008, 01:27 PM
Yuen, this shit is good, I'll need a verse from you, something hardcore, kung-fu if you wish.

Could you manage to send me an 8 line verse in the next 3 days?

peace.

Yuen sam
12-15-2008, 01:54 PM
Bless for the feedback my dudes, the love is appreciated, real talks.

Shizzah ima PM you.

Peace.