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Heke
09-05-2005, 11:38 AM
Hello to all.
as you probably have noticet i'm new here and i'm new at making beats, so say what you think about some of my beats.


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=401669

Heke
09-06-2005, 09:12 AM
Now I uploaded them to sound click
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=401669

C'mon give me some feedback.

Heke
09-08-2005, 10:15 AM
Hey There are nearly 100 views in this post but no comments from anyone.
Give me some criticism

TeknicelStylez
09-08-2005, 02:32 PM
Man the beats are real ill, mad original, you got good variations, its well orchestrated everythings on point. You don't need our criticism go out and sell the fuckers lol.

TeknicelStylez
09-08-2005, 02:35 PM
Hold up hold up, nothing to do sounds straight up ripped mang, I know I heard that beat somewhere before.

Heke
09-08-2005, 02:54 PM
Thx man for the feedback. nice to hear something positive.

Heke
09-08-2005, 03:04 PM
Hold up hold up, nothing to do sounds straight up ripped mang, I know I heard that beat somewhere before.

some one could have the same sample.. I dont know who or where.. If it pops to your head let me know.

I dont want to be ripping someone elses beats.

TeknicelStylez
09-08-2005, 03:08 PM
Yea man, some of the beats were outrageous, I was flowing to wu-love its a hot beat, can do with out the break though it doesn't fit well and threw me off, maybe a different variation.

Heke
09-08-2005, 03:18 PM
Yea man, some of the beats were outrageous, I was flowing to wu-love its a hot beat, can do with out the break though it doesn't fit well and threw me off, maybe a different variation.

lol the original version didn't have the break and it soundet like it needs something.. and I added it |(

shaolins_finest
09-08-2005, 03:29 PM
your joints is good but they sound a little manotinous. They need more changes in the beat and not just a 4 second loop over and over again.

Heke
09-08-2005, 03:43 PM
yeah I know shaolins_finest, but what can I say. I'm a lazy bastard..
I should do more complex drums n shit.

Thx for the feedback man.

TeknicelStylez
09-08-2005, 03:52 PM
Wu-Love is a serious track lol I'ma be bumpin that all day. I love that sample mang.

TeknicelStylez
09-08-2005, 03:55 PM
Yo mang I'm still on your page, I'm really feelin the beats think we could get something goin when I get my mic?

BTW watchu workin wit.

Heke
09-08-2005, 03:58 PM
Nice to hear you like that shit.
Now I have somekind of a clue what you like to hear. I'll be posting a new beat maybe tomorrow, if I got the time to finnish it..

Heke
09-08-2005, 04:00 PM
BTW watchu workin wit.
Some of the beats are made with Propellerhead Reason and Adobe Audition. but now I'm working with Ensoniq ASR-10

Yo mang I'm still on your page, I'm really feelin the beats think we could get something goin when I get my mic?

Why not.

TeknicelStylez
09-08-2005, 05:30 PM
I just wrote one verse for wu love tell me what you think

Instantaneous I spit lines spontaneous
Miscelaneous flow bump your brain to this
Nigguhz trying to aim at me I'm trying to aim at them
Bullets pierce craniums wild like tazmanians
Knuckles fierce got titanium plates in em
Lryrics depleted uranium penetratin em
No escapin Curtains closed and Drapin
Sky Scrapin Shift Shapin Styles I'm Takin
Teknickel Incredible Edible Lyrics
Fear it writin lines beyond coherant
In a near bliss state of rhyming can you hear it!
Insomniac drainin tracks like I'm vampiric
Shine Like Flourescent Asessin Your Lessons
The Wild Adolescent Countin all his blessins
Back to the essence hip hop had presence
Born a peasent I wasn't always so pleasent

If I get a mic I'll do more, the flow sounds really sick on this beat mang I wish you could hear it.

Heke
09-08-2005, 05:46 PM
Not bad, Not bad at all. Go and get your mic and spit out your verses. I'm look forward hearing that shit.

TeknicelStylez
09-08-2005, 05:52 PM
I should have it latest in a week

Heke
09-08-2005, 06:01 PM
no rush man.

TeknicelStylez
09-08-2005, 07:18 PM
I left you a pm mang

hillbilly
09-09-2005, 12:01 AM
Thunder Lord was tight. The guitars added depth and the flute rounded it out. Horns threw me a little at the end...kinda seemed outta place.

Liked the JMT mix Keep it up man

Heke
09-09-2005, 12:34 AM
thx for the feedback hillbilly..
I'm not sure but Thunder loard isn't ready yet.
The horns are there to give a stormy fealing, but dont know if it's working or not.

Heke
09-09-2005, 07:45 AM
I had some problems with the drums. dont know maybe i have to redo em.