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BlaK FuRYaN
12-29-2008, 05:01 PM
From the uterous to the crucifix/before that
a fugetive moving bricks
with lunatics/ abusing sticks(guns)/tusing spliffs/smovely lit
politicin' on suin lucrative/ seen of a movie flick
where mafia minds connect/
crime sirens and city lights/ the sinister sight be
business is shiesty/ administered pipe dreams
criminal ministers cynical lyricist might be
spittin' that fickleness/ lyrics written with simple ryme skemes
but I wrote this with the palm of goldsmith
my darts arch the path of attonement/ sparkin' y'clone men
back into an abyss
son shine so bright/
you can transform his food for thought through photosynthesis
birth knowledge in the form of chrysalis/ watch butter flies take flight
wings made from pages of my penmen-ship/
which replicates when a chrome blows
uphold the flows/ don't oppose/ or get jabbed in your open nose
rappers get stacked up like totem poles
my pen cascades over so-called foes/ i fold they chromosomes
with golden revolving poems/ imposed over domes revolting/ desolve them in sulphur oceans/ i choke em for stolen slogans....

J.T.S.
12-30-2008, 08:54 AM
[quote=BlaK FuRYaN;1432822]From the uterous to the crucifix/before that
a fugetive moving bricks
with lunatics/ abusing sticks(guns)/tusing spliffs/smovely lit
politicin' on suin lucrative/ seen of a movie flick fire how the lines flowed
where mafia minds connect/
crime sirens and city lights/ the sinister sight be
business is shiesty/ administered pipe dreams
criminal ministers cynical lyricist might be
spittin' that fickleness/ lyrics written with simple ryme skemesonce again dope rhyme schemes there!


you can transform his food for thought through photosynthesis
birth knowledge in the form of chrysalis/ watch butter flies take flight
wings made from pages of my penmen-ship/ dope

War and Peace
12-30-2008, 11:47 AM
ill butter B-

peace-

Killer Falcon
12-30-2008, 03:07 PM
thats a sick verse man! the butterfly image was real nice.... i'm feeling the new tracks too, maybe we can do another track sometime

peace

M.O.D.
12-31-2008, 05:30 PM
it was tight son , the whole verse was pretty dope

BlaK FuRYaN
01-01-2009, 02:16 PM
Appreciate the acknowledgement...

peace J.T.S for the feed...

Killer - you know what time it is...you got all my connects....hit me up!!!

Peace

Dr Sleepwalker
01-01-2009, 03:45 PM
Dope.

White N Dangerous
01-01-2009, 05:01 PM
heh black furyan aint u the same person that me n u started a crew together a while back..heh n i do mean a while...feelin this verse yo, shits nice flow's nicely, all in all a very good read . stay up keep blessin ninja