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SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
01-05-2009, 01:02 PM
Artichokes bars are cold frost nose cones open pines
be lives hive swarming check the NOM i'm storming/
iron lung born again waging taking stages
fables cages off the pages seen through changes/
taken pagers celluar damage after cameras peep my angles
45 degrees i seek chi energy enemies be deadly to my positivity/
ripping microphones wit skills that provide more fusions than utility
grill you icy novice likely if your nice wit it clock me a few bars/
scenic view gaming room come back to the shop i'll write cha a view
paint a Van Gogh open mic surgery preformed by I the lyrical wise/
singular prise diamond horror tipped frost bitten once listed
twice gifted Christian spit a listed twisted metals be my mentals preforming an exorcist/
it's a shop of horrors no need for lies
reprise cha roll get in disguise/

dopium plot opposite flocks rock hot heaters
defeat cha beneath the surface
above the surface be how we earthed it
birthed through the seven charkas
now we get played like operas

check the viles a swamp meet just hit the shelves
i'm back like Spider-Man in The Black Suit/
isle wild mild manner chanting verses be curses
disturbed by words i'm curbing like balls you hitting off the tarmac/
i jar back wet back after facts my images be after facts
check back your behind will be kicked, flicked up in front of a hundred peoples/
there is no equal, prequel or sequel i'm seeing through all plans
glactus master blast fasting islam style openly winded totally pinned against it/
figal spit a spelling bee editing you down to three codes alpha, omega, nutmeg
jagged edge plauging my opponents wit more clones that naruto can make/

dopium plot opposite flocks rock hot heaters
defeat cha beneath the surface
above the surface be how we earthed it
birthed through the seven charkas
now we get played like operas

White N Dangerous
01-05-2009, 04:50 PM
shits hot dunn!!! 4 real really feelin' da chorus specually the last two lines of it, shits real nice, all in all this piece is nicely written, and portrayed even nicer, real smooth read, dope ass vocab, imagery off the hook, nothing is weak on this shit one bit. definetely a good read stay up keep blessin

SKAMPOE
01-05-2009, 04:57 PM
Ill Shit Lord, The Chorus Is Dope As Fuck, Is This On An Actual Song? Well It Needs To Be Cuz It Reads Sum Vicious... Dope Shit. Peace..

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
01-05-2009, 05:55 PM
thanks y'all i had plans of making it a song but i needs a u-god esq track where it flow smooth so i dunno right now. not to mention i was on my u-god shit n killin this when i wrote it

THE MASON
01-06-2009, 01:28 PM
this is a dope joint

Sheep you always keepin it fresh up in here, keep it up fam

Peace