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Ritter
01-11-2009, 09:23 AM
Those that know shad know that hes on his own path
Like a nomad rolling without a roadmap
Just 4 lads in a topaz with no gas
I call my car rocafella cuz its got a broke dash
My generation's movin so fast
Runnin like old taps
From fear and stress and tears choked back
Boys hold gats while the girls got no strap
On their dresses and wont eat 'less its low-fat
Between low-cut tops and teeth with gold caps
That new school look's more crazy than OCAD's
When theres no dads to say don't show that
Make em look in your eyes, your mind's where the show's at
And you need more than beats for a dope track
Even with more hooks than a coat rack
And more hot lines than 1-800 phones
That's why most cats in this rap game just don't last
Its not vocab they need to grow its go nads
And back bone so they can speak and not hold back
We need folks with faith that's gon last
To teach the younger ones how to live with no mask
And pose the kind of questions that most just wont ask
And keep that hope stashed like a safe of cold cash
Our vision for the future cnt fade or go black
Like some Kodak pictures at night with no flash
Them cats be pollutin the air like smoke stacks
Let the freshness in get your windows cracked


What's on your mind Wu-Corp?

Freeze
01-11-2009, 01:47 PM
its tight...

Tracks
01-11-2009, 03:15 PM
next.

DR. NICK RIVIERA
01-11-2009, 03:36 PM
^^^^^lol yeah right

Shad is dope rapper, him and Blu would be a great match.

Ghost In The 'Lac
01-11-2009, 03:45 PM
did yu really just post a txt verse in the hip hop shot?

Doesnt he have real songs recorded? Coulnt you of just posted the SONG?? You actuallhy expek ppl to read that? lol

You really dont think wehter they can rap or not matters do you?

lol lol lol

Ritter
01-11-2009, 03:47 PM
did yu really just post a txt verse in the hip hop shot?

Doesnt he have real songs recorded? Coulnt you of just posted the SONG?? You actuallhy expek ppl to read that? lol

You really dont think wehter they can rap or not matters do you?

lol lol lol

Cocksucker.

txhH-W9miXg

11th Chamber
01-11-2009, 03:48 PM
I call my car rocafella cuz its got a broke dash



why have I heard like 5 people say that line recently?

Ghost In The 'Lac
01-11-2009, 03:58 PM
I listened to the song.

I thought it was good.

He's a decent rapper.

Happy?

Ritter
01-11-2009, 04:41 PM
I listened to the song.

I thought it was good.

He's a decent rapper.

Happy?

Actually, yeah. Although I knew that way before you said it, but fuck it.

cap
01-11-2009, 05:28 PM
yeah great verse,he dropped a phenomenal album with 'the old prince'

Ritter
01-11-2009, 05:38 PM
What amazes me about this verse is his flow and delivery. It's laid back, but it's very intelligent, you can hear every word perfectly. And his voice is very good. Notice how the whole verse has the same syllable pattern? That's genius.

DR. NICK RIVIERA
01-11-2009, 05:45 PM
I call my car rocafella cuz its got a broke dash



why have I heard like 5 people say that line recently?

yeah but I think he was the first plus the whole album is full of nice lines, dude's overlooked for an unknown reason

Ritter
01-11-2009, 05:50 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sH8SDiPPjoc

He's versatile. And only 25yrs old. That's a good sign.

Edit: embedding disabled.

Tonystarks420
01-11-2009, 06:15 PM
and hes Canadian, which shows that Canada has got some talent to wen it comes to hip hop.

dude hails outta London,Ontario about 1 hr from my crib.

SKAMPOE
01-11-2009, 08:53 PM
Those that know shad know that hes on his own path
Like a nomad rolling without a roadmap
Just 4 lads in a topaz with no gas
I call my car rocafella cuz its got a broke dash
My generation's movin so fast
Runnin like old taps
From fear and stress and tears choked back
Boys hold gats while the girls got no strap
On their dresses and wont eat 'less its low-fat
Between low-cut tops and teeth with gold caps
That new school look's more crazy than OCAD's
When theres no dads to say don't show that
Make em look in your eyes, your mind's where the show's at
And you need more than beats for a dope track
Even with more hooks than a coat rack
And more hot lines than 1-800 phones
That's why most cats in this rap game just don't last
Its not vocab they need to grow its go nads
And back bone so they can speak and not hold back
We need folks with faith that's gon last
To teach the younger ones how to live with no mask
And pose the kind of questions that most just wont ask
And keep that hope stashed like a safe of cold cash
Our vision for the future cnt fade or go black
Like some Kodak pictures at night with no flash
Them cats be pollutin the air like smoke stacks
Let the freshness in get your windows cracked


What's on your mind Wu-Corp?

ITS DOPE, SKAMPOE IS ILLAAA THO

THE MASON
01-11-2009, 11:37 PM
and hes Canadian, which shows that Canada has got some talent to wen it comes to hip hop.

dude hails outta London,Ontario about 1 hr from my crib.

Shads dope

i hail from this city as well, and it was good to hear some ill talent outta here