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Jamie1992
01-12-2009, 12:48 PM
Hey all, huge fan of wu tang, and hang around the forums for quite awhile decided to post some of my lyrics.

So here goes.

My lyrics is the shit that goes straight to your brain
Like a substance that you would inject after tapping ya veins
Fuck you up and make ya forget your name
Verbaly abuse and use you is the name of my game
Thing you dont realise is i treat this as a hobby
Your vocab to be blunt is sounding sloppy
Go ahead and take your best shot and lyricaly drop me
Do it right, or ill be taking shots at ya dome
Left and right hook finding its way home
These are small bars like taking a jab
Before i move in and fataly stab

Your mind cant process the words im spitting
Think of this as an Armageddon i scripted
Now get on this thread, and help me lyricaly hit it

Jamie1992
01-12-2009, 06:10 PM
2 fists breaking into your frame
Knucles tattooed with my name
Im a dirty motherfucker wild and untamed
Get bucking at you infront of your dame
Have you face down on the concrete pavment
Imma substance and your bitch craves it
What you know about the cush when its time to get blown
Watch close son that way you cant say you aint been shown
It aint easy to be me when so dont think it is when im breezing through
And i aint making these bars because of you i do it become known
So i can grab the herb off the corner that aint been snatched and blown
My mums screaming to me baby come home

Jamie1992
01-15-2009, 01:52 PM
Just trying something a little diffrent.

once upon a time, jamie spit spat a rhyme,
one of a kind, so raw it fucks with your mind
i have the ability to give sight to the blind
Boom!, goes the clockwork
as easy as shockwork, fuck work
you aint worth it, dont deserve to spit,
but you cant help shit, cuz ur worthless

Jamie1992
01-15-2009, 08:54 PM
Again trying something diffrent let me know what you think.

This is the uncut raw dosage,
Pinpoint focus spit darts around the temple and remain unnoticed
You the definition of what a fucking joke is,
I spend so much time in the booth is basicaly my house
Lyrical apocalypse coming straight from my mouth
Now you gotta choose who ya gonna blame when i make up to the top again
Kid on the corner selling cocaine make a wrong move the gat go BANG!
This is just music baby its music now get your ass on the dancefloor and move it

I be the spitting definition of skill that only true Emcee's feel
And my ice will be giving you chills
Your girl on my nuts looking for thrills
Im the only mc whos keeping it real and just to let ya know
Jealousy is a bad thing i know how it feels

Jamie1992
01-22-2009, 10:33 AM
Again something a lil diffrent, just trying out new things is all, let me know what you think. :)

Had a young wannabe step up to my face,
Looking like he wanted a taste,
So i look at him straight and spat a few bars,
And at the end of my verse had my whole crew shout WOOHAH!,
Im a Wu soldier and ive already told ya,
My lyrics carry the punch of a .32,
Open my mouth and aim em straight at you,
When you hear the first word you better duck for your life,
Because if you stand still its gonna be homicide,

Jamie1992
02-08-2009, 06:19 PM
Ideas or Feedback anyone?

Would be appreciated so i know whats good and what isnt.

Jamie1992
03-03-2009, 09:26 PM
When its my turn to spit im gonna go all out
Im gonna give you my illest bars and shout
Imagine a person so hot he can burn a hole
In your faggot ass paper with bars you wrote
Verbal heat from the friction of my words
Variety in a sense of Noun's Adjectives and Verbs
Just so you know, the safety is off
So i advise you to get the fuck out my way
Or your gonna have more bullets coming at you
Than the soldiers on the beach on D-Day
In the league with the big spitters...and
Im trying my best i was told some advice
"If your new, wear a bulletproof vest"

irongodchamber
03-03-2009, 11:05 PM
Liking these darts. Welcome to the game.

Jamie1992
03-07-2009, 10:25 AM
Liking these darts. Welcome to the game.

Cheers Iron. :)

Jamie1992
04-28-2009, 07:28 PM
Once in my life ive been stabbed in the heart,
And once in my life i used to sit and pray to god,
But i lost faith as i got no awnser,
When my nan and gramp died from cancer,
And i felt a loss and my heart raced faster,
And i felt like my life was spiraling into disaster,
But they say theres always a silver lining,
To a dark cloud theres always a shining,
And your esence is blinding,
So powerful and so pure,
So Beautiful and so raw,

THUGNIFICENT
04-28-2009, 07:44 PM
these are pretty dope drops. i like the most recent drop the most, nicely done.

Jamie1992
04-29-2009, 07:33 AM
@Threyev

Cheers bro, its nice to see some people like my stuff. :)

*************

Ok so this is something i been working on for awhile, and would really really appreciate it if people would say what they think about it, as its quiite important to me.

Cheers

I feel like i lost my passion for life,
And i can see my salvation in a knife,
And all of my actions are trife,
I call this my Razorblade Salvation,
And i find it damn hard to not give into the temptation,
And this is my Eternal Damnation,
I find it hard to get up everyday,
I find it hard not to lie when im asked how im feeling today,
Loss of courage and firmness through fear,
overwhelming and disabling terror,
a heavy feeling of sinking of the spirits,
I used to get so drunk i couldn't count my digits,
And each time i spit im abusing physics,
You are always there for me and i love you,
Id die for you and place noone above you,
You tell me to stay strong,
And im putting all of my heart into this song,
I sit and think about what you said,
All your words and my sick thoughts in my head,
I now sit here and wonder,
In the future would i make a good father,
Would i be a good dad to my son or my daughter,
Or would i just be a martyr,
The hour has come and i got a few things to say,
No matter what happens i don't mean to hurt you in anyway,
I love how you always make me smile,
And that my youth was crazy wild,
And i was a out of control violent child,

I just guess this is how life goes,
And whats instore in the future only god knows,
My mental is twisted and dangerous,
My soul is putrid and gangrenous,
And my entire body is full of angryness,
Don't blame yourself for the things in my life that happen,
You have no control and the people responsible i could snap them,
You gave me life and im here to thank you,
And no doubt i wouldn't be here without you,
So i hold you in my heart and wish that you will never depart,
The largest of fires can start with a spark,
Unforseen consequences lighting the dark,
If the day comes and i leave you behind,
I want you to stay strong and not cry,
Ill come back to you in your dreams as an angel,
But looking back at my sins i wont be able,
Hang myself off the banistar with a cable,
Im not sure how your freinds view me,
They have no right to judge and look through me,
We all have a past and we learn from mistakes,
I think back to our first valantines day,
It was perfect wouldn't have it any other way,
I love you and thats all i can say,
I listen to what you tell me,
How much you love me and wanna go through it with me,
I don't wanna push you to hard or pressure you or turn you to god,

Im trying hard to turn myself round,
To sort out my brain and how things go down,
Its hard when you can't experiance it yourself,
Best i can do is show you what it does to my health,
I spend alot of my time thinking,
And now i spend alot less drinking,
And theres nothing in this world i wouldn't do for you,
I find it hard to look in your eyes,
And be truthfull when my past was all fighting and lies,
Twice in my life ive almost died,
Twice in my life you showed up in surprise,
Now i wanna take a look at where we are,
Maybe one night we can make love under the stars,

Ive walked next to highways and starred at the cars,
Wondered if i was to jump infront if my death would be fast,
And this is my raw thoughts and feelings,
Thought how i could make money through drug dealing,
I wanna buy you all the little things,
The necklaces, trinkets and earrings,
Anything i can to keep you happy,
Anything i can so that oneday our kids would call me pappy,
I found my reason for life but it hurts to hold on,
And it hurts for you to see me when im not strong,
And now im wondering where i went so wrong,

Jamie1992
06-08-2009, 12:32 PM
Im god cause im omnipetent,
The ripper of souls im magnificent,
I lock the devil up in the cage,
Look into his eyes see him filled with rage,
Imma take centre stage and rip the raw type shit,
The raw hype throw your fists into the air type shit,
I got nothing to prove my powers are abound to the seas of earth,
Scramble messages between your people and the church,
And i keep my eye out from heaven upon the earth,
I saved you from the invenitble death,
Im a wrath and as i said i rip souls,
Im a undead ghost with unlimted goals,
And your just a mere mortal totured soul,
Now its about time you accept that your days are marked,
And that when time comes your vision wil go blurred and dark,
So please do yourself a favor and accept me as being your saviour

You about a fucking 2 on the lyrical rhicter scale,
And imma nail you to a cross like jesus with the hammer and sickle,
My rhymes are fickle,
But sick and demented and ready to be tryed and tested,
Uncontested raw and manifestive,
Something that you will try and fail to digest it.

Jamie1992
06-08-2009, 12:39 PM
Its about time to throw hits and cut and slice through the air,
More destructive than a bomb going off in times square,
Fear and despair are the things i desire,
Causing an eternal damnative fire,
The kind of poverty that i desire,
Untill the fatal day from this rap game i retire,

Put your blunts up as we get lifted,
To the heavens where shit becomes illusional and twisted,
Lets rip this and cause the angels to die,
The demon looks out from the centre of eyes,
The pitchfork and machete don't test me,
Cause trust you aint ready,
I flow with destruction thats corruptive,
Obstructive to your lifes ambhitions,
I'll create the spark to cause the igniton.

thatKid
06-08-2009, 01:05 PM
your shit's cool

Jamie1992
06-08-2009, 01:18 PM
Haha, cheers bro, i should be adding some more soon. :D

Jamie1992
08-02-2009, 08:33 PM
Ok so i got some major anger to vent, pent up from past month

Excuse me if this is wack, just need to get it out.

Yo, yo don't get me angered or ill bust you off your axis, shit be tragic,
bars with more shine than magic, my measures are drastic but at the same time fantastic and reactive, now let me ask you a question, when you had your last girl did you show her affection, or did you just pay more attention to that whore on the corner, the one thats got eyes for ya, thats right fucker, i know what you did, and to be brutely honest it makes me sick, i just fucking wish i could take this steel, put it in your grill and BLAM, drop your ass to the ground.

The fabulous sound, of the hammer cock back and the metal scrape from the trigger, duck or its gonna hit ya, you'll be up on the ward with the IV, a piece of advice let and die to be free, ill make your life a fucking misery, i got the unchallenged triggery, i find it amazing how people can turn to assholes, i wish i could force my shit upon you and make you die slow, but i can't, im the fucker thats stuck with my illness now feel this, wish i was the wu and be the future for the children.

Yeah i know its wack, feel lucky i stopped there, just needed to vent.

J.T.S.
08-12-2009, 10:58 AM
Again trying something diffrent let me know what you think.

This is the uncut raw dosage,
Pinpoint focus spit darts around the temple and remain unnoticed
You the definition of what a fucking joke is,
I spend so much time in the booth is basicaly my house
Lyrical apocalypse coming straight from my mouth
Now you gotta choose who ya gonna blame when i make up to the top again
Kid on the corner selling cocaine make a wrong move the gat go BANG!
This is just music baby its music now get your ass on the dancefloor and move it

I be the spitting definition of skill that only true Emcee's feel
And my ice will be giving you chills
Your girl on my nuts looking for thrills
Im the only mc whos keeping it real and just to let ya know
Jealousy is a bad thing i know how it feels flames

Jamie1992
08-13-2009, 08:44 AM
Hey J.T.S,

Thanks for posting, feels good when people as skilled as yourself post on my work.

Makes me feel good about myself. :)