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Yuen sam
01-13-2009, 02:45 PM
Im hopin to add another 16 then record this at the weekend if everyting goes smoothly, anyway, i started writin to some Dipset beat and got this, punch after punch after punch for you, check it.

I'll split your Cranium when i spit pure Uranium,
Slicin heads in two like a south park Canadian/
Spit Game On Em, murder them who try Violate,
I'll spit on a Eve beat just to set the record Straight/
Its so Bait, im the best new comer this Year,
Im like an overstocked Sportsworld, i got no Fear/
And the ends Near, im spittin pure heated Flames,
And im flossin more rings then the damn Olympic Games/
Im not namin Names, but yes i am so much better,
I'll put the heat to your hood and turn it into a Sweater/
The young go Getter, and i cause alotta Sorrow,
When i carve Knowledge in your chest like the 5% Zorro/
Learn like theres no Tomorrow, i stay forever Smart,
Cah the hoods like a harbour, regually boats Depart/
I produce beautiful Art, that real gnagstas dem Bumped,
I'll cut down your family tree and leave you idiots Stumped/

Let me know what you think.

Bless.

SKAMPOE
01-13-2009, 06:43 PM
hahahahah this is nasty, but most lines wernt not rly metaphores i think..

I produce beautiful Art, that real gnagstas dem Bumped,
I'll cut down your family tree and leave you idiots Stumped/

Im not namin Names, but yes i am so much better,
I'll put the heat to your hood and turn it into a Sweater/

my fav lines^

peace

Yuen sam
01-14-2009, 02:18 PM
Yeh i wasnt going for all metaphors, just set up, punch, set up, punch over and over.

Peace for the feed fam.

KERZO
01-18-2009, 12:49 PM
so you got any more skillz to show us BOI!!!

Tecknowledgist
01-18-2009, 01:01 PM
if you do record the song, please don't call it "punchline after punchline after punchline" hahaha

some damn good lines in there though. peace

Yuen sam
01-21-2009, 05:17 PM
Hahaha nah of course not.

Peace for the feed though.