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J.T.S.
01-31-2009, 02:39 PM
Verse one

i make consumers listen to less sell-out for the airwaves guaranteed sucess

addict of beats, and mics my rhymes have splattered the best

sets scattered depressed as i pressed on slapboxed those who cling -on

Robbed with bling on you chickens jumping on beds the season to spring on

Kid your not a lyricist who the fuck takes you serious?

Nearing this industrial revolution bloody your style after your periods cops spot my executions

Insiders in institutions trooping to trampled life's canceled

Unable to handle the blowout like birthday candles

Ammo in the back pocket loaded into the rocket

Before i blast off hand over your wallet

And your cellphone too the robbery you can't call it

In nowadays these kids will die to win

so let the battle begin heathens, demons, gods, and maskedmen

Killingfields bone riddled i'm dropping riddles within

deep in sin preying after slaying followers disobeying

While you brush your teeth with aim i'm aiming

Staying hot claiming spot chicken sweat me for the pot

dickriders sweat me for the shots in the streets respect i get alot

when the moon turns black they'll know who got the props

Fiends used to flock because i had the biggest rocks

Busting chops open snitches last sight the gun smoking

the mic burner best believe the sun's spoken

Leaving all contenders backs broken for provoking this no joking
well spoken spokesman

Dissing my rhymes would even make Meth say to them what's that shit they be smoking??

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
01-31-2009, 02:57 PM
Ammo in the back pocket loaded into the rocket

Before i blast off hand over your wallet

And your cellphone too the robbery you can't call it

damn jts u crushin right now these lines felt like the straight outta a james bond flick

War and Peace
01-31-2009, 09:22 PM
yo this is kickin real ass big j-

vacuum tight man-

i'ma step off then peep this again every day for the next few dayz yo-

big time butter duke-

peace-

J.T.S.
02-03-2009, 12:16 PM
Thanx guys i appreciate the feedback.

Riddlez
02-06-2009, 08:40 PM
Damn ! really feeling that ! tight flow and strong rhymes !

"Nearing this industrial revolution bloody your style after your periods cops spot my executions" ... Nice

"In nowadays these kids will die to win
so let the battle begin heathens, demons, gods, and maskedmen
Killingfields bone riddled i'm dropping riddles within" ... damn, really loving that !


"Busting chops open snitches last sight the gun smoking
the mic burner best believe the sun's spoken
Leaving all contenders backs broken for provoking this no joking
well spoken spokesman
Dissing my rhymes would even make Meth say to them what's that shit they be smoking??" ... Love the follow up with the word play

was feeling the whole thing ... rhymes like that remind me of the 2003 days on this site when rhymes where tight !

keep it up and looking forward 2 ur next spit ... would love 2 do a collab with ya !

Peace Out
Riddlez

J.T.S.
02-07-2009, 01:43 PM
Thaks Riddlez peace.

THE MASON
02-09-2009, 05:20 PM
Classic!!

J.T.S.
02-10-2009, 11:31 AM
Thanks Bronze