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Crookshank
02-06-2009, 04:08 PM
"In order for three people to keep a secret, two must be dead." - Benjamin Franklin

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The corner of Ivanhoe and Mandalay, after a mad delay/
Located a syndicate of masterminds who never had dismay//
Projects devised which were intelligent and utterly intricate/
A plot came, they smelled it, pre-planned possibilities infinite//
"Never flex the innocent" said the voice of the head of the trinity/
"Don't need more dead than necessary, surround the vicinity"//
"Don't grab more than your back 'n chest can carry", he said viciously/
"But what if we pull the truck up?" the second man disagreed explicitly//
Yet there was no need for argument, the plan had been conjured already/
The three pondered, if there was shootin' it'd be all green confetti//
But they had it planned right, each of the three were perepared solid/
They suited up and got geared, studying as if this were criminal college//
But it's criminal knowledge, stick to the plan and you're all gravy/
But what if, just maybe one of the men were plannin' somethin' shady?//
The trinity's head, he thought of this but took the idea and departed it/
Last time someone started shit they got stuck with a drill bit starter kit//
So for-get it, do this last job, accomplish the mission and split that shit//
Doin' 85 down the Clair, M4's locked and loaded, clips bloated/
With rounds fired so fast it'll leave even smart minds corroded//
They pull up, the heist goes down, the head fires the first round/
"Everyone get down on the ground!" the victims feel their hearts pound//
Astounding sound of clips rippin' through flesh of the employees/
A thousand rounds all together, sounds of bitches gettin' annoy-ing//
Despite that, no need to fight back 'cuz the cash has been siezed now/
It comes down to greed now, should I drive casually or speed now?//
Said fuck it, jumped in, let the marijuana smoke slowly pump in/
The three so happy it left them blissful, three grown men jumpin//
"We 'll be set for life!" but life is trife the head put a bullet through his/
Turned to the third, "You'd of never thought what truly this crew is"//
Popped him, took the money and dashed oh so quickly outta' fuckin' dodge/
Headed back to his stash, parked that van next to the suitcases in the garage//
Got in his car after packin' the money, but his thoughts blended like a collage/
One of his men sought revenge, now he knew it was endin, life was just a mirage//
As his vision faded to blackness, his hands fell has he attempted to leave/
All he could here was the voice of his partner, "Please don't kill me!"//
He couldn't differ between reality and hallucination, time to say goodbye/
As you can see, this intelligent organization was corrupted by distrust and lies//

Riddlez
02-06-2009, 08:19 PM
nice ... tight flow, consistent rhyming !

"The corner of Ivanhoe and Mandalay, after a mad delay
Located a syndicate of masterminds who never had dismay
Projects devised which were intelligent and utterly intricate
A plot came, they smelled it, pre-planned possibilities infinite" ... Nice start and entry !

"but his thoughts blended like a collage" ... like that !

"As you can see, this intelligent organization was corrupted by distrust and lies" ... nice punch 2 end with

Peace Out
Riddlez

Crookshank
02-07-2009, 01:20 AM
nice ... tight flow, consistent rhyming !

"The corner of Ivanhoe and Mandalay, after a mad delay
Located a syndicate of masterminds who never had dismay
Projects devised which were intelligent and utterly intricate
A plot came, they smelled it, pre-planned possibilities infinite" ... Nice start and entry !

"but his thoughts blended like a collage" ... like that !

"As you can see, this intelligent organization was corrupted by distrust and lies" ... nice punch 2 end with

Peace Out
Riddlez
thanks bro. glad you were feelin it.

War and Peace
02-07-2009, 10:32 AM
total dopeness-

lookin forward to another 1 from you g-
peace-

J.T.S.
02-07-2009, 01:16 PM
Mad hot

Crookshank
02-08-2009, 09:16 PM
Good shit. glad you guys were feelin it

GZAjector
02-08-2009, 09:29 PM
shit's mad croosh bruv, i'd like to hear it over a sick beat

BornPower
02-09-2009, 02:17 PM
big upz Crook. waitin on more fa sho.