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THE MASON
02-12-2009, 11:40 AM
I just finished this book, promise ill come with som new material soon lol

my story is only provoked by the holy
solely, coldly yet masterful boldly
uncontrolablly i write epic poetry
Aristotle knowingly, before reason had it place in history
my story is His, divine and majestic, yet so just
i launch off with ballistics, cast doubt upon these misfits
i dont miss SHIT
yet i remain the most humble, when others stumble
i lend them my hand, my granduer is that of an entire Roman clan
disband across my own holy land,
the edges of Hell consumed by sand
on the rim only one sign that stands
"Not For the Faint At Heart, Here Enters Only the Damned"
here i make known my heavenly commands
and make forth as God deems planned

This sage
whom you read page to page
wise in his days and beyond his age
Bronze, I display my poetic ways

In the morning rising sun, i awaken
dreary with my faith unshaken
hastened by a sense of urgency, my amrbosa
enlightens me to these heracies
so with spreaded wings, i take flight
the lift from one flap flips rocks like fish flop
and the speed at which i travel, forces time to stop
arrival at the edge of a pit of gravel, I AM
the lawyer, the jury and the judge with the gavel
since Cain slew Abel and the Towers of Babel
i have been, righter of wrongs, slayer of usurpers
act my punishments on evil doers
sent many to the devils, who pierce with hot skewers

This sage
whom you read page to page
wise in his days and beyond his age
Bronze, I display my poetic ways

Depleted by these daily rountines, my eyes view only prestine
been around for centuries, this coming up on 16
but my age, is no factor for i am the Lords ambassador
heavenly senator, holy as i may be, designed as a predator
settle this ancient score, foreclose the final chapters in the book of lore
i tore through Hell, and all those who dwell
now as i reign supreme, lord of the underworld, my enigmatic dream
seem - less riddles, in a jar holds the devil while he play his fiddle
abysmal confound to rain and bound to fire eternal

This sage
whom you read page to page
wise in his days and beyond his age
Bronze, I display my poetic ways

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
02-12-2009, 08:29 PM
Depleted by these daily rountines, my eyes view only prestine
been around for centuries, this coming up on 16
but my age, is no factor for i am the Lords ambassador
heavenly senator, holy as i may be, designed as a predator
settle this ancient score, foreclose the final chapters in the book of lore
i tore through Hell, and all those who dwell
now as i reign supreme, lord of the underworld, my enigmatic dream
seem - less riddles, in a jar holds the devil while he play his fiddle
abysmal confound to rain and bound to fire eternal

bronze was on some smelt them down liquid wit this. these were some super clever lines

THE MASON
02-13-2009, 11:54 AM
hahaha peace Sheep, thanks

get at me for a collab soon man

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
02-13-2009, 12:41 PM
Aight Will Do Bronze

J.T.S.
02-14-2009, 01:01 PM
my story is only provoked by the holy
solely, coldly yet masterful boldly
uncontrolablly i write epic poetry

i liked how you started this off

Very vivid and imagery was nice

irongodchamber
02-23-2009, 09:15 PM
sick DARTZ