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Visionz
09-10-2005, 10:03 PM
2 verses, first to five explained votes take it. I'll start it off


Mike Tyson at 20, I'll smash any competitor
Your shit is garbage, you need a ghostwriter and an editor
Stepping up is a real bad decision
Bout to get a beatdown like a nazi in an all-black prison
You won't make it out alive of my verbal cell block
Shanked in gut as soon as the gates unlocked
Then hang you from the rafters with your own intestines
Intense lesson for anyone that holds my skills in question
Then I cut the cord to watch ur fake-ass splatter
No ones fuckin with my ill-gray matter
You little roach, you scatter when the light comes on
Run for the bomb-shelter, this is rap Armagedeon
Puttin an end to you, ya poser MC
Laughin while you perish at a thousand degrees

Grim Reapa
09-10-2005, 10:18 PM
You mike Tyson at 20 fuck u him at thirty/
Your oblique blows dont hit that hard when u say they hurt me/
U say u'll hang me by my intestines fuck i'll hang u by ur entrails/
In great detail, ur whack rhymes i will derail/
And I will prevaile, choke u till ur eyes roll back and ur faces pale/
Cuz rhymin me is mutha fuckin futile/
Ur rhymes are whack child obcenity a Geoffrey Dahmer type petefile/
U think u can but u cant match a great mindz style/
Get ur shit together for the next verse oblideration/
I'll jus turn u in to a statistical # scientific notation/

nice verse 1

Grim Reapa
09-10-2005, 10:24 PM
sry to be a downer but i can only do 1 round right now + 2 rounders r horrible no1 votes c'mon

Visionz
09-10-2005, 10:33 PM
I wanted a chance to reply to a verse, fuck it if no1 votes, I like the competition. Feel you thou

Grim Reapa
09-10-2005, 10:35 PM
whatever man i don tink it'll matter cuz urs was tight as hell but it aint worth it really i've been in the same boat homieu can change ur verse tho

Visionz
09-10-2005, 11:07 PM
Scientific notation?
I'm an atom-smasher, prepare for scientific disenagration
I'll crush you to particles smaller than molecules
Just to prove that no MC is an obstacle
I'll hop over you like a track star does hurdles
You make me sick to my stomach like when everclear makes the milk curdle
You said Dahmer but I'm more like Charles Manson
I'm the mastermind of murderous expansions
I'll stab a pitchfork thru you're stomach like you lived in that mansion
Then they'll post your death on the evening news
Scaring your whole family permantely like a shitty tatoo.
Hell, even I'll pour some liquor in memory of you.
Tombstone reads "Masta Genius, unwise in which battles to choose"







Respect homie, I know you can come with it.

Grim Reapa
09-10-2005, 11:18 PM
Your rap mentallity dont fuckin scare me at all/
Cuz rappin against you is like rappin against a whiter version of Paul Wall/
scientific desinagration? Now ur speaking verbak diarreaha dysentary/
Next time look scientific notation in a scientific dictionary/
Charles Manson? u dont even speak well rounded rhymes/
Fuck it I'm Helter Skelter jus lyrically stabbed u 55 times/ (get it?)
U might be droppin dimes i be droppin dollars so a penny u might wanna pench/
u have a mansion now? Ur rhymes dont even make fuckin cents/ (i liked that one)


good battle homie

Visionz
09-10-2005, 11:36 PM
good battle indeed. much respect due. peace

Sicka than aidZ
09-10-2005, 11:40 PM
i think eric unseen took it cuz his flow was on point the whole way. the last verses from both of yall was tighht an even but masta's 1st verse was pretty shitty. it wasnt prepared well.
eric unseen's punches put u down masta.

vote=eric

Grim Reapa
09-10-2005, 11:42 PM
sicka tell me what oblique means?

Grim Reapa
09-10-2005, 11:47 PM
jus playin but ur right sicka wasn't prepared well its says verbak in it

Sicka than aidZ
09-11-2005, 12:09 AM
i never said he was any good, i think you coulda both done better, you did better than me man, both of you. be sure to peep me verse teknickle or somthin. ill type it up now. peace

TeknicelStylez
09-11-2005, 12:31 AM
Vote goes to Eric, masta you held shit down but I dont think you reached full potential. Not in the mood today?

Grim Reapa
09-11-2005, 12:34 AM
not feelin enrgy homie lol not feelin my usual flow


I jus didn't wanna get embarrased is all

TeknicelStylez
09-11-2005, 12:37 AM
Lol sall good we all got them days, the verse I wrote to sicka I was half asleep. I havent slept in about 46 hours now....

Grim Reapa
09-11-2005, 12:39 AM
damn! Why?

TeknicelStylez
09-11-2005, 12:55 AM
Idk at first I was just staying up till like 5 am than I was gonna go to sleep, but than I started workin on a track so I stayed up later, than I found on they had the brazilian festival bumpin off over in newark so I stayed up for that than I was gonna go to sleep but my boy came on nigga livin in florida I don't see him alot so we play StarCraft every night you know keep in touch so I was playin wit him, than I was watchin excorcist with the dukes..... the list goes on, I just have too many reasons to stay awake lol.

hollywoodrealty
09-11-2005, 05:17 AM
ok my vote goes to eric also, his verses flowed better, i can tell genius has some writers block, bcuz your shit is usually 10 times better, when ever that happens to me i listen to great wu instrumentals and smoke a fatty, those rhymes will come back, peace

Visionz
09-11-2005, 05:27 AM
Yeah I agree myself, I've read some hot verses from the Gza, and I didn't really think he's was coming w/ his A-game with these. Man u can holla at me when u feelin it more. I want to challenge myself by going against MC's who I know can bring it but I wanna go against the playoff team, not the playoff team during preseason. Not a diss Gza, I know ya rap game's tight. peace and respect.

Grim Reapa
09-11-2005, 11:07 AM
aight Eric i had a feeling u destroyed this one lemme get my shit together i'll holla back at u on this thread 1

Dae Ja Nae
09-11-2005, 11:08 AM
I haven't voted in a while, so I lookin at this battle as a good reentry.

As far as the lyrical content goes, you both held it down. Lots of imagery and wordplay, Masta, I'm lovin' your use vocab homie but my vote goes to Eric ... IMO his punch lines packed just a little more hit. Masta, that's not to say you ain't sick wit it, but like you said, I can tell your heart wasn't in it.

Peace

Grim Reapa
09-11-2005, 11:13 AM
its all good Eric 4-0

1

MC MIDAS
09-11-2005, 11:26 AM
Props To Eric On This One!! Came Tough!!
Peace

VernakuLa
09-11-2005, 11:27 AM
i unno i haven't dropped a vote in a while an i love seenin battles. Eric ur
ill no question heres a line i liked



Stepping up is a real bad decision

Bout to get a beatdown like a nazi in an all-black prison


that was funny as shit

and masta heres ur lines that i liked

masta genius:

Your rap mentallity dont fuckin scare me at all/
Cuz rappin against you is like rappin against a whiter version of Paul Wall/

and Eric.......

You said Dahmer but I'm more like Charles Manson
I'm the mastermind of murderous expansions

that was nice but here was genius response....

Charles Manson? u dont even speak well rounded rhymes/
Fuck it I'm Helter Skelter jus lyrically stabbed u 55 times/ (get it?)


i unno i didn't really like ur first verses but i really thought that it was close......

i vote for genius cuz i liked his style and flow better

PEACE

Idiom
09-11-2005, 06:27 PM
weLL if i'm voting on the second verses, it goes to masta
i think you both were evenly matched for the most part

so i have to look at the best punch and how i read the floes

and genius took this because , this punch has some truth to it
and he compared you to it...not that you can't write but paul waLL
can't and he added to you...

"Your rap mentallity dont fuckin scare me at all/
Cuz rappin against you is like rappin against a whiter version of Paul Wall/"

^ that guy sucks either way

good battle both you's

OmO < Idiom

Grim Reapa
09-11-2005, 06:36 PM
props idiom..........4-2 to Eric Unseen, lol like ur name 1

Grim Reapa
09-11-2005, 09:33 PM
aight pplz vote
1

Biggbwoy
09-11-2005, 10:16 PM
Eric got my vote

Masta on point though

Respect

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
09-30-2005, 07:17 PM
Vote Please

Visionz
09-30-2005, 10:49 PM
that's 5-2, so this one has actually been closed for a while. peace